REVIEW: Reasonable Doubt by Gregory Ashe
Please note: If you think this series might be of interest to you may want to avoid this review—it’s full of spoilers for books one through four. Start with my review of Pretty Pretty Boys, book one in the series, instead.
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Dear Gregory Ashe,
Your gay police procedural series, Hazard and Somerset, took hold over me this past summer. I picked up the first book more or less on a whim and while the mystery plot wasn’t all that, the romance was so good that I decided to catch up on the entire series. This may be a project since as I write this there are eleven novels, six in this first arc, five (so far) books in a sequel series, as well as two short story collections. But when a romantic storyline is this gripping, what’s a reader to do?
Somers and Hazard have a painful, even brutal history. Over fifteen years earlier, Emery Hazard was the only openly gay student in their Wahredua, Missouri high school. Hazard was bullied horribly, and John-Henry Somerset, aka Somers, was one of the bullies.
Pretty Pretty Boys, the first book in the series, saw Hazard returning to Wahredua and joining its police force. On day one of the job, Hazard was assigned Somers as his partner. Professionally they were well-matched but on a personal level all that history seethed between them. But Somers was much changed and genuinely sorry. Eventually they became friends but suppressed their attraction whenever possible.
In books one, two, three and part of four, Somers tries to get back with his estranged wife, Cora, and Hazard dates Nico, a younger man. The fourth book, Guilt by Association, was the book where all that changed. Hazard and Nico broke up, Somers and Cora gave up on their marriage. By the end, Somers and Hazard admitted their love and hooked up.
When Reasonable Doubt begins, Hazard and Somers are a little over two months into their romantic partnership and very much in love. Hazard is trying to adjust to the presence of Somers’s two-year-old, Evie, in his life. Somers gently questions Hazard about whether he wants a family and how he envisions their future. Hazard hasn’t given it much thought, possibly for the reasons that drive him later in the book, and his statements that they can do whatever would make Somers happy don’t satisfy Somers.
A bigger hurdle forces its way into their lives in the form of a new case. The murder victim, John Oscar Walden, is also known as Brother Jeshua, Christ figure and leader to a local cult, the disciples of the Lamb. The house where Walden was stabbed to death neighbors a locked barn. Somers and Hazard force their way in to the barn and find a middle-aged woman having sex with a teenage boy.
The woman is Sister Mary aka Kelley Jane Walden, the victim’s wife. The boy, Clyde Beauchamp, is called Lazarus by the cultists. Several other “disciples” show up and are escorted to the police station where they are interviewed separately.
Sister Naomi is an elderly woman and a true believer, Sisters Claudia and Anna are taciturn siblings, Sister Sapphira attractive and sharp. There are also three “Brothers,” Jesse, Dan and Paul. Two female cult members in their late teens, Sister Sarah and Sister Hagar, are missing.
Hazard and Somerset discover that Hagar and Sarah argued over something and after a visit to a Price Chopper, went separate ways. Neither has been seen since then, but when a visit by a satellite dish installer that same day is mentioned, Hazard and Somers pursue that as a lead.
They find the cable installer, Rex Kolosik, holed up with “Sister Hagar” at a motel. Hagar identifies herself as Peyton Laflamme, the daughter of a famous actress. Peyton doesn’t share the beliefs of the other cultists. She ran away from home in her early teens and ended up with the cult but then lost her faith. Now she wants Rex to come forward with her and claim the million-dollar reward that her famous late mother offered for information on her whereabouts. Sister Sarah, Britney Cowper, is missing. Hazard and Somers take Rex and Peyton to the station for questioning, but Peyton is sprung out by her other mother.
Most painful is their witness interview with Clyde. Though the boy won’t talk about it, it is evident that he has been abused—physically, emotionally, sexually—for years. Hazard and Somers are both hit hard by that aspect of the case, Hazard more so of the two. That’s because of a bad experience he had in his youth.
Hazard’s dad turns up for the first time in the series. There is bad blood between him and his son and Hazard is angered by his visit due to this same trauma. The part of Hazard’s backstory that is salient here is revealed at around 11%, but it is pivotal to the plot so I’m going to hide it just in case:
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As the case unfolds Hazard and Somers have to go to darker and darker places, both outside and within. Not just in terms of the motives and actions of the suspects but eventually even in terms of their own. The book opens with their connection in the best place it has ever been but the case tests their relationship as never before.
Will Hazard and Somers catch the killer before that person can kill others? Will they find a safe home for Clyde? And will their relationship survive despite the brutal truths the investigation lays bare?
This book was one of the stronger entries in the series but I still had some issues. The first was that as with most of the other books in the series, the mystery was convoluted, making it hard to keep track of all the relevant details. A second was difficulty in differentiating the cultists because of their identical honorifics; I had Sister Mary and Sister Naomi mixed up for quite a while.
There were a few other things that bothered me:
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Also, I’m getting weary of seeing Hazard injured and tortured (both emotionally and physically), whether in the present-day storyline or in his past. Enough already. At this point it’s overkill and seems like some kind of weird fetish for inflicting pain on him. I have several books left to read and I hope the author steps away from that.
A more minor irritant was that Somers and Hazard twice made inferences about the murder victim’s personality based on nothing more than that person’s appearance. I thought that was a reach.
In terms of the Emery and John’s relationship, I loved seeing them as a couple. When I finished the previous book, I wondered how Somers would handle their relationship. When we first met him he was so closeted that he rationalized away his attraction to men. I was afraid he might remain partially closeted even after beginning a romantic relationship with Hazard so I was thrilled to see that this was not the case. Somers seems, if anything, more at peace with himself now and happy to hold hands with or kiss Hazard in public. This is the first book where we haven’t seen him get plastered.
The opening sentence is, hilariously, “A baby isn’t a loaded gun.” Hazard feels more scared of two-year-old Evie then of a firearm.
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With every newly-unveiled piece of information about Hazard and Somers’s teen years (as with Hazard’s history with his parents here) the characters and the relationship become more real, complex and interesting. Most of the books reframe at least one of the characters and both of them prove to be flawed.
Somers’s flaws were more apparent in the earlier books—I started the series all about Hazard and the relationship but not so into Somers himself. At this point, though, I love Somers. He has such patience with Hazard even when Hazard is at his most trying.
Hazard, on the other hand, is a more difficult character here.
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Neither man is 100% secure about where he stands with the other. Somers knows that his abuse of Hazard during their teen years will always be between them. Whether or not Hazard acknowledges that, it’s there. As gut-wrenching as it is to read, it’s also real. The bullying isn’t whitewashed, and I appreciate that.
Faith vs. doubt is the central theme in Reasonable Doubt. It’s the case in Hazard and Somers’s relationship; each believes he has screwed up or will eventually, and neither sees himself as a worthwhile romantic partner, so they both expect abandonment. But the faith vs. doubt theme also resonates in Hazard’s relationship with his father and in the religious sense for the cultists and for the protagonists.
The series is built around non-communication. For me it works because there’s such a hard past in this relationship and that makes Hazard and Somers uncertain and tentative with each other. Both keep their painful feelings bottled up for as long as they can. There’s enough motivation for their difficulty in communicating that it fits. Most of the time it’s organic, even powerful. Occasionally I get impatient but it rarely feels contrived.
The writing could be more polished—more dialogue tags would help identify the speaker sooner, and sometimes the POV isn’t established soon enough when it changes, and that creates confusion. But there is also some gorgeous and romantic writing in these books.
Hazard didn’t have fancy words or a clever response. He was a man of reason. Facts. The feel of Somers against him. The ripple of muscle under Hazard’s touch. The feathering of Somers’s short, blond hair against Hazard’s cheek. The now-familiar lines of Somers’s hand knotted with Hazard’s. For a moment, with the sun shining on his back, Hazard felt translucent, transparent, crystalline, as though that sunlight shone through him and turned all the hard edges soft, turned all the dark spaces bright.
The tone of this book was much darker and grittier than those of the earlier books. There were sections where things looked grim.
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So… I come back to expectations as the main reason this book gave me pause.
This was a pretty strong and important book for the series but not the one I expected. B-/B.
Sincerely,
Janine
How many books are in this series?
@Jayne: Too many! And honestly most of them are not that good; I’m just obsessed on them. It depends on how you count because there are two series, or two arcs, about these characters.
This is the fifth in the first series / arc and the fifth I’ve reviewed. There are six total in that arc / series, and these books are long (around 500 pages each!). I don’t usually read books that go above 400 pages but as I said, I’m obsessed.
The second series / arc, (Hazard and Somerset: A Union of Swords) has five books, and these are shorter, more like 400 pages each. In addition to these, there are also two short story collections, one to go with each series / arc. They are both under 200 pages.
At this point I have read eight books out of these thirteen, (one of them is a short story collection). I reviewed five, have rough review drafts of two, and the last of the eight I still need to start working on. In terms of
wordpage count it’s a bit better. A rough estimate is that I’ve read 3600wordspages and have 1800 left to read. So I’ve read about two-thirds of the totalwordpagecount and reviewed a bit under half.When I am done with the review of the last book I’ve read so far I may take a break, and if not, I may bundle the remaining five books and short stories into a couple of mini-reviews. I fear I am boring many of our readers by reviewing so many of these books so close together, but Random Michelle has posted on these threads and she is eager to know my thoughts on books six and eight.
@Janine: Oops, I meant I’ve read roughly 3600 pages and have roughly another 1800 pages to go. Not words, do’h.
@Janine: Wow. That’s a lot of reading to have done and to commit to. I agree about 400-500 page books. Honestly, for the most part, I just don’t have it in me to read books of that length very often.
Are the series both finished or is Ashe still working on them?
I did love seeing Hazard trying to deal with a two-year old. Adults like that were my *favorite* when I was a kid, because they’d get so flustered by everything. :)
Now I’m waiting impatiently for your review of That Book. (laugh) And to learn if it’s safe to jump back into the series. :D
@Janine: YES!
Yes I am. :D
But I’m ok if you review a bunch at once., as well.
@Jayne: I wrote an op-ed here once on the topic on how I prefer more concise books to 500+ page behemoths and almost no one agreed with me in the comments. So it’s great to find someone who does.
Good question. These two arcs are finished but they were written a year or two apart, and Ashe put out other books in the middle. I read an interview with him when he said he’ll write more in the future if enough people buy them. The last book in the first arc did provide closure; the chief bad guy in the books was dealt with and so was the heroes’ past to an extent.
@Random Michelle: The penultimate scene with Hazard and Evie was great—my favorite scene in the book.
@Random Michelle: Usually I only post a review a week; the reviews are work intensive and that’s as much as I can manage. And there are books. I want to review on a timely basis, arcs or new books, usually. So reviewing a bunch together isn’t something I’ll be doing at present.
@Janine:
I meant that if you combine multiple books of a series into a single review. :)
A good review is hard work, and no one needs more hard work right now!
@Random Michelle: Ah, I see, thank you!