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Welcome to first page Saturday. This is an opportunity for authors to submit unpublished works for critique. You are welcome to comment anonymously. The first page form is here if you would like to submit your own piece. I was eight years old the first time I rode an elephant. I ... more >
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Welcome to first page Saturday. This is an opportunity for authors to submit unpublished works for critique. You are welcome to comment anonymously. The first page form is here if you would like to submit your own piece. KYOTO I. “The unusual results of the latest experiments with neutrino have returned ... more >
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Welcome to first page Saturday. This is an opportunity for authors to submit unpublished works for critique. You are welcome to comment anonymously. The first page form is here if you would like to submit your own piece. She hadn’t made a sound since he began hacking away at her wings. ... more >
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Welcome to first page Saturday. This is an opportunity for authors to submit unpublished works for critique. You are welcome to comment anonymously. The first page form is here if you would like to submit your own piece. I looked at my watch and sighed stealing a glance at my ... more >
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Welcome to BACK to first page Saturday. This is an opportunity for authors to submit unpublished works for critique. You are welcome to comment anonymously. The first page form is here if you would like to submit your own piece. It’s so not fair. Kitty, my older sister, is the one ... more >
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Welcome to first page Saturday. This is an opportunity for authors to submit unpublished works for critique. You are welcome to comment anonymously. The first page form is here if you would like to submit your own piece. The Closet From Hell. It deserved either a pizza with extra cheese or ... more >