JaneFirst Pageliterary critique17 Comments

Welcome to first page Saturday. This is an opportunity for authors to submit unpublished works for critique. You are welcome to comment anonymously.  The first page form is here if you would like to submit your own piece. I was eight years old the first time I rode an elephant. I ... more >

October 17, 2015

FIRST PAGE: Sci-Fi & Romance

JaneFirst Pagefirst page / literary critique13 Comments

Welcome to first page Saturday. This is an opportunity for authors to submit unpublished works for critique. You are welcome to comment anonymously.  The first page form is here if you would like to submit your own piece. KYOTO I. “The unusual results of the latest experiments with neutrino have returned ... more >

October 10, 2015

FIRST PAGE SATURDAY: Paranormal MS

JaneFirst Pagefirst page / literary critique21 Comments

Welcome to first page Saturday. This is an opportunity for authors to submit unpublished works for critique. You are welcome to comment anonymously.  The first page form is here if you would like to submit your own piece. She hadn’t made a sound since he began hacking away at her wings. ... more >

October 3, 2015

FIRST PAGE SATURDAY: Contemporary

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Welcome to first page Saturday. This is an opportunity for authors to submit unpublished works for critique. You are welcome to comment anonymously.  The first page form is here if you would like to submit your own piece.   I looked at my watch and sighed stealing a glance at my ... more >

September 19, 2015

FIRST PAGE SATURDAY: NA Paranormal

JaneFirst Pagefirst page10 Comments

Welcome to BACK to first page Saturday. This is an opportunity for authors to submit unpublished works for critique. You are welcome to comment anonymously.  The first page form is here if you would like to submit your own piece. It’s so not fair. Kitty, my older sister, is the one ... more >

June 27, 2015

First Page Saturday – Unpublished Contemporary

JaneFirst Pagefirst page12 Comments

Welcome to first page Saturday. This is an opportunity for authors to submit unpublished works for critique. You are welcome to comment anonymously.  The first page form is here if you would like to submit your own piece. The Closet From Hell. It deserved either a pizza with extra cheese or ... more >