REVIEW: The Hollow of Fear by Sherry Thomas
PLEASE NOTE: This review contains spoilers for previous books in the series.
Dear Ms. Thomas:
I read and enjoyed the first two books in the Lady Sherlock series, A Study in Scarlet Women and A Conspiracy in Belgravia, even though I didn’t always understand what was going on with the mysteries in those books. (I think I’m pretty basic as a mystery reader; I get confused fairly easily.) I was definitely excited when I heard that The Hollow of Fear was coming out.
The story opens with a prologue in which Charlotte Holmes presents herself to her illegitimate half-brother, Myron Finch, who has been masquerading as the Holmes family’s coachman. After a brief discussion regarding events of the previous book, she helps Finch escape agents of the dastardly Moriarty, the classic villain of the Sherlock Holmes series who remains somewhat opaque to me so far (since I’ve read little to none of Sherlock Holmes). Charlotte then apparently encounters Moriarty himself, for the first time, though the scene ends abruptly with their introduction.
The next chapter picks up several months later. Charlotte Holmes and Mrs. Watson are staying at a cottage in the country, near her friend Lord Ingram Ashburton’s country estate, Stern Hollow. When Charlotte’s sister Livia ends up at Stern Hollow as well (with a houseful of other guests; the home that they were visiting nearby had a catastrophic flooding problem), most of the series’ main characters are coincidentally in one place for a very gruesome discovery: Lord Ingram’s estranged wife, dead in Stern Hollow’s icehouse.
Readers of the series will know that Lady Ingram was involved in espionage (in the service of Moriarty), and that when Lord Ingram discovered her perfidy, he exiled her. The cover story is that she’s been in a Swiss sanatorium for her bad back, but some, including a couple of society sisters known as the Gossip Ladies, don’t quite believe that. It’s the Gossip Ladies along with Livia who discover Lady Ingram’s corpse. Immediately, Lord Ingram is a suspect in the murder, and Charlotte Holmes must get to work to save him from the hangman.
The local police quickly suss out that this case is too big for them, and call on Scotland Yard. Inspector Robert Treadles (who happens to be a friend of Lord Ingram’s) and his boss, Chief Inspector Fowler, arrive at Stern Hollow and begin to question the guests and staff.
Inspector Treadles is one of the major secondary characters of the series thus far. He had previously relied on Sherlock Holmes’ skills (using Lord Ingram as an intermediary), before he realized that Sherlock was Charlotte. Treadles has a probably historically accurate disgust of Charlotte, viewing her as an unnatural fallen woman. I have a corresponding entirely modern feminist lack of patience with Treadles, mixed in with a little sympathy. His world view is being challenged a lot – his wife has gone to work – and he’s having a hard time with it all.
Also showing up at Stern Hollow is a rotund, youngish man by the name of Sherrinford Holmes, who is of course Charlotte in disguise. Sherrinford is ostensibly Sherlock’s brother, and he’s been asked to help in the investigation on Lord Ingram’s behalf. He sets up in the unused nursery and begins his own inquiries.
There’s something very enjoyable and satisfying about returning to a mystery series that’s several books in; the characters are all there, familiar already, but the central story – the mystery – is presumably fresh. Ideally, individual mystery books in series both serve as semi-stand-alone stories while also advancing the continuing plot. In the case of this series, there are a number of threads that have been developing over the course of these three books. The most compelling is probably the relationship between Charlotte and Ingram, which makes some progress in this book (sort of). But there’s also some progress in the relationship between Inspector Treadles and his wife, as well as last minute developments in the relationship of Livia (who is coming into her own as a character) and the mysterious Stephen Marbleton.
Charlotte Holmes remains a challenging heroine in some respects. Her condition, presumably somewhere on the autism spectrum, means that she sometimes frustrates the people around her with her reaction, or lack thereof, to events. As a reader, I guess I share a bit of that frustration? Charlotte is lovable and sympathetic (as well as admirable) in her own way, but her very nature makes it hard to relate to her. But in some ways the challenge makes her a more rewarding character to follow through the series, as well.
I’ve devoted parts of my reviews to the previous books to detailing my confusion at the plots of those books. I feel like I did a little better with The Hollow of Fear? Maybe? I divide my understanding of the mystery loosely into to Who, How and Why. It helps me understand what I understand and what I don’t. I pretty much understood the Who (though there are some details I’m a little fuzzy on), and I think I get the Why (though I need to think about it kind of hard to get it straight). The How gets away from me, because there are various people involved and bodies being moved and locks that are changed for mysterious but significant reasons. I end up having trouble keeping things straight. It doesn’t help that facts and occurrences are kept from the reader when they occur (even though they involve the main characters) and only revealed at the end. I understand that as a dramatic choice, but again, it increased my confusion at times.
Overall, The Hollow of Fear is a solid entry into the series that advances the character development and leaves me anticipating book four. My grade is a B+.
Best,
Jennie
Thanks for your review, Jennie. I’ve read the previous books in this series and am looking forward to this one, too. I can appreciate those who wait for a series to be complete before starting as I suspect it will take me some time to get reacquainted with all the characters in the book. I’ll be interested to see if my thoughts align with yours.
Glad to hear I wasn’t the only one confused by the mystery portions – I felt that this book was more straightforward in the mystery portion and the plot twists were definitely unexpected. I can’t believe we have to wait another year… I just want more Charlotte and Lord Ingram
Thanks, Jennie; I really enjoyed your review. I’ve enjoyed this series so far, too. I listened to the first two books on audio, and have this one waiting for me for this weekend. (I’m actually listening to The Daughter of Sherlock Holmes now and it doesn’t compare well to this series. I’m a bit underwhelmed and not sure I’ll continue with the series. Even if the next ebook/audiobook goes on sale, I think there are other books I’d rather spend my time with.)
@Kareni: Thanks! Let me know what you think if and when you get a chance to read it.
@Sonya: The mysteries are fine but I really am in it for the personalities and relationships. Though there’s something bittersweet about Charlotte and Ingram’s; it’s hard to imagine an HEA for them.
@Susan: I’m not familiar with The Daughter of Sherlock Holmes but it doesn’t sound like it’s worth bothering with?
@Jennie: It has decent ratings on Amazon and GR, so maybe I’m the exception. But, even before I checked, I was sure the author was American. There are plenty of American writers who get British settings right, but I don’t think Goldberg is one. (It’s hard to take note when listening to audio of all the things that don’t ring right for the time/place, but one was when a woman put on her bonnet and cloak to leave the house. It’s set in the Edwardian period. How many London ladies in the early 20th century wore bonnets and cloaks?) It makes me even more appreciative of Sherry Thomas, C.S. Harris, Andrea Penrose, and all the other American writers who do period mysteries so well. So, yeah, give The Daughter of Sherlock Holmes a pass and wait for the next Lady Sherlock book to come out.
The relationships are wonderful but I can definitely imagine an HEA for Charlotte and Ingram, though it might not involve setting up a household together. Ingram fears Charlotte may not have the capacity to even understand “the full spectrum of human emotion” but that is Ingram speaking and after a cold and miserable marriage his need for warmth is understandable. Ingram, as well as the reader, has plenty of evidence that Charlotte deeply loves Livia so I think his statement really amounts to a frustrated critique of Charlotte’s performance of love and affection. Performance of social and gender roles seems to be the major theme of this series.
@Iris: It is more easily imagined if they don’t married and have children, etc. But that is a little sad to me on its own.
@Jennie:
I thought there was big foreshadowing with Sherrinford Holmes saying he couldn’t imagine on their knees begging to marry them.
@Wendy: You may well be right.
@Wendy:
Ooh, I like this observation!