JOINT REVIEW: The Long Game by Rachel Reid
Janine, Sirius and I were all so excited to read The Long Game and eager to talk about it once we did so we decided to review it together. Please note there will be series spoilers for prior books. Heated Rivalry is essential prior reading but Role Model is also recommended to get all the background to best enjoy this one. ~ Kaetrin
CW: depression and mental illness, reference to a prior suicide, homophobia
Kaetrin: At the end of Heated Rivalry, Ilya Rozanov and Shane Hollander had come out as friends publicly and started a charity together – something they both felt passionate about but also something which gave them an excuse to be seen together publicly. They had also exchanged “I love yous” and decided to be together but to keep their romantic connection extremely private. Ilya had moved to Ottawa, to be closer to Shane (about two hours away in Montreal) and hopes one day to become a Canadian citizen. Very few people know about them – Shane’s parents, Shane’s friends Rose and Hayden – and they plan to keep it that way until the pair retire from professional hockey which they both hope will be a long time into the future. It is a HEA but it felt not quite complete because they were so restricted.
Janine: I felt Heated Rivalry had an extraordinarily satisfying ending. It honored the high stakes of the star-crossed lovers conflict and represented a commitment that was unusually romantic because it required so much sacrifice. I loved that Heated Rivalry’s ending wasn’t all rainbows and unicorns and before reading The Long Game, I feared the second book would mar that for me. I can’t say anything about how the book ends but I was very happy with it overall.
Sirius: I was very worried too! I was so worried that what we would get to witness in this book would be Shane and Ilya breaking up with very little reason for doing so, then making up just to make sure they will get their happy ending. I should have trusted the author more.
Kaetrin: The Long Game picks up three years later. The hiding is wearing on both men but especially Ilya. They spend wonderful summers together, largely at Shane’s house on the lake but once the season starts they have to work hard to carve out time to connect.
Some of the timeline of The Long Game overlaps with that of Role Model so readers will know some of the major beats already – I admit that there was one in particular I could not wait to reach, but the start of The Long Game occurs even before Troy Barrett joins the Ottawa Centaurs.
Janine: I got so impatient I did a search for “Troy” to see when he would show up. Knowing that helped me relax and enjoy everything that came before.
Kaetrin: There are sections from both main characters but the book is mainly from Ilya’s perspective. At least that was my perception but maybe it was influenced by how much Ilya jumps off the page. He steals every scene he’s in. Shane is still paranoid about being outed publicly; Ilya cares less about it and the more time that passes, the more he struggles with the hiding and the distance.
Janine: I don’t think it’s just your perception. Books on writing say that there is always one character who is most central, even among central characters. In Heated Rivalry that’s Shane and in The Long Game it’s definitely Ilya.
In Heated Rivalry Shane was also the most vulnerable. He was less confident, less experienced and secure in his sexuality, and more sensitive. It was easier for Ilya to hide his queerness in plain sight—since he was bisexual, he had the option of marrying happily without jeopardizing his hockey career. That wasn’t a possibility for Shane so he needed Ilya more than Ilya seemed to need him. That equalized when Ilya decided to transfer to Ottawa so he could be near Shane.
The Long Game reverses that power dynamic. Shane is now out as gay to his teammates and has some level of acceptance for who he is, while Ilya (to protect their secret) still has to live a lie. Shane has the support of friends, as Ilya doesn’t, and is still playing for Montreal, a top-tier team (Ottawa is a big step down for Ilya in that way). Shane has citizenship and Ilya doesn’t (as an immigrant I really appreciated that deportation was one of Ilya’s fears). And Shane has his loving parents nearby. They are loving to Ilya too but if he and Shane were to break up, Ilya would lose them. Naturally Ilya is the more vulnerable one.
This role reversal allows Reid to avoid a re-tread and explore new facets of Shane and Ilya. The passage of time adds depth too. Ilya is now softer, more tender and more generous under his snarky exterior, while Shane feels his responsibility to his team even more keenly and is surer of himself in some ways (though as uptight as ever in others).
Kaetrin: Ilya doesn’t resent Shane but he has no one unconnected to Shane who knows the truth. He used to be a party animal, now he lives very quietly. He is losing his enjoyment of hockey (his team is terrible) and he’s desperately lonely for both emotional connection and physical touch. Ilya is a very tactile person and the separation from Shane is even harder on him than Shane. Added to that, Ilya has a history of depression in his family (his mother died by suicide) and he is beginning to fear that he is depressed himself and worries if he could possibly face the same end as his mother. As wide open about so many things as Ilya is, he doesn’t speak to Shane about these things for the most part. Both men often complain about not being able to spend enough time together, but those extra things, Ilya keeps mostly to himself.
There’s a sense of dread as the book continues, as the reader wonders if this tension will split the pair up.
It’s a romance novel so we all know they end up together but I was really worried they’d break up and I so much didn’t want that to happen.
Janine: Reid handles that building tension so well. Even when things get rocky and communication and attention start to break down, she never lets us forget how much love there still is underneath all that.
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Kaetrin: Later on in the book that thing I was waiting for (which I first read about in Role Model) happens and it is, pardon the pun, a game changer. Lots of things happen as a result and it leads to a whole new set of anticipations and tensions. So cleverly plotted!
I don’t think it’s a spoiler to say that a large part of the story is the pair coming out publicly as in love. I won’t give away how that affects their careers or how it happens but that thing that was missing from their HEA in Heated Rivalry is the main point of the The Long Game. How can they be together in the light?
Janine: Going into The Long Game I expected the book’s main focus to be on Ilya and Shane getting outed ahead of their timeline, so I was surprised (in a good way) that it was structured around something deeper—the interplay between their relationship and Ilya’s struggle with depression. Not “How can they be together in the light?” (the answer to that has always been obvious IMO) but “How can they make the relationship healthy and safe for both of them?” A big part of that was the question of whether their relationship could be safe if it stayed secret.
Sirius: I agree with this and I also very much appreciated how hard it was for Ilya to ask for help.
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Kaetrin: That’s all of a piece to me. Being “together in the light” encompasses all of that for me. I saw the depression storyline as an important component of the book but for me the structure was about how they could be together publicly.
I loved Heated Rivalry but there was that tiny bit which was unfinished to me. Maybe I had a sense of the strain it would put on them to have to keep hiding – and The Long Game both showed that strain and completed that missing piece. I wouldn’t say that the books are a duology. Heated Rivalry is a complete story. But I think the HEA is complete now and, for me at least, it wasn’t, quite, at the end of the first book no matter how much I loved it.
While I took a slightly different view to you, Janine, about the importance of the mental illness storyline in the structure of the book I did think the representation was especially well done.
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Janine: The depression representation was amazingly good. So many details resonated with my experience. Not just the melancholy, but also the fatigue depression brings on. How smiling for other people can sharpen the sadness inside. How difficult depression can make it to open up to anyone. The way the need for human connection hurts because it is accompanied by a feeling of isolation and unbridgeable distance. The fragility of the heart and the distorted thinking, including the loss of self-worth. Even the need for simple touch resonated with me.
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Sirius: As an aside, how good was the way author handled inclusion of some Russian comments in the book? It is always a challenge I would imagine to show that the character/ characters speak another language than English – you don’t want to spend half of the page writing in foreign language, but you want to keep that balance and I thought it was done very well. Occasionally Ilya says something tender in Russian (and occasionally Shane can even respond :)), but several times she just noted that the characters spoke in Russian while we were reading the English dialogue and to me it just made sense and it probably minimized the chances of handling the language incorrectly.
Kaetrin: I agree – although you would obviously understand the Russian text and I didn’t. I did enjoy the way Ilya gave Shane funny and unusual pet names.
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Kaetrin: The beginning of the book had me impatient and nervous as I worried that things were going to fall apart for my favourite couple in the Game Changers series. The tension, in hindsight, is delicious and tight as a bowstring. On first read at least, I did not appreciate it as much but I see now that I was supposed to feel that way.
I like Shane but Ilya steals the show for me most of the time. He is such a lovable jerk. I adore him.
…Ilya took a peek and saw the handsome man laughing with Shane about something. And then the fucker placed a hand on Shane’s arm.
There was no good reason for Ilya to skate down the ice with one of the pucks and fire it at the glass behind Shane’s head, but he did it anyway. He could hear Shane scream, and Ilya laughed when he whipped around, eyes flashing with fury.
“Asshole!” Shane yelled.
Ilya gestured with his stick toward the children on the ice and shook his head. “Language, Hollander.”
Things were tense between them for the rest of the day. Ilya couldn’t even apologize because Shane wouldn’t talk to him. Not that he felt like apologizing; he just wanted Shane to stop being mad about it.
And Ilya wanted to stop feeling embarrassed about doing it. It had been immature and petty and unprofessional. He still didn’t want to apologize, though.
Janine: I love Ilya too. I felt Shane was a little retconned early in the book. He was so lovable, kind, and caring in Heated Rivalry and here he starts out oblivious to some of what Ilya is going through.
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These things didn’t seem in character, especially the last. As the book progressed, he returned to being the lovable Shane of Heated Rivalry but the early retconning made me a bit disappointed in him at first.
Ilya also seemed to have changed almost too much from the cocky, arrogant boy he once was but I was able to believe it more with him because of his illness.
Sirius: I agree with you that Shane was a bit oblivious at the beginning, but I was not annoyed with him even then. Ilya was not communicating and he was not a mind reader. I do not blame Ilya for that at all, mind you, his reasons for not telling Shane everything made perfect sense, but I was not annoyed with Shane either. In other words to me they both acted as real human beings which is the best compliment I can give really, where characterization is concerned.
Janine: That’s a great point and as I reread the book I came to feel that way to a large degree. That was 90% of it, but I did feel there was some obliviousness that went beyond that.
Kaetrin: I think Ilya had changed as a result of having to hide and be so reliant on Shane for any emotional support and connection for three years. It made sense to me he’d be more vulnerable as a result.
Janine: Yes, though I had to readjust, the change in Ilya made sense to me for those reasons too. I wouldn’t apply the word retconning to Ilya’s characterization, only to Shane’s, and even there it was minor.
Kaetrin: I also loved the way Shane’s parents basically adopt Ilya, how he spends time with them in Ottawa without Shane.
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I was rooting for this couple the whole way through the book. I wanted the full fairy tale for them. Possibly if I knew more about hockey some things would have been more obvious to me than they were (just how significant Ilya and Shane’s rival status actually is for example) but everything I know about hockey I have learned from romance novels.
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Sirius: I used to watch hockey when I was younger (and a lot of soccer when I was younger too and I still watch soccer when I can, but also significantly less. These days tennis occupies most of my sports watching time :)), but I miss team sports and very much appreciate the portrayal of their sporting rivalry. I don’t think the book needed more descriptions of actual hockey, but I still would have loved more if that makes sense.
Kaetrin: As much as I enjoyed The Long Game, here were a few things I queried though. I didn’t understand quite what happened with the Commissioner – for me there was a missing link in the chain and I don’t think it had anything to do with me not knowing much about the sport. I expected more to happen and it kind of fizzled. And I thought there was a little too much sex, particularly in the first half of the book. The couple were already together so I didn’t need the ongoing proof of their sexual compatibility. I was far more interested in their emotional journey. That said, there were sex scenes that did drive the story forward (the one in the trophy room was fantastic) and I didn’t hate the ones I thought were not needed – it’s just that I felt that some were delaying the meat of the story I was hungry for.
Janine: The commissioner is a stock villain, unfortunately.
Kaetrin: Oh I don’t know, I think he rang pretty true!
Janine: I just meant that he was flat. I found nothing about him surprising or three-dimensional.
I am going to disagree on the sex scenes. For me every single one felt necessary. The early ones showed how Ilya’s need for security in Shane’s love was met (though far from sufficiently) through sex. Sex was in some ways the main way it was met (to the degree that it was) before that power differential started really balancing.
Even while he was disregarding some of Ilya’s emotional needs in other contexts, Shane was focused on them in bed. I’m not sure I would have forgiven Shane if I hadn’t seen how generous and trusting he was with Ilya in bed, how committed he was to giving Ilya whatever Ilya wanted or asked for—and these were often things that required Shane to put himself in a vulnerable position. Ilya usually had control and power there and that balanced out his vulnerability in other contexts to an extent. Sex was also the part of the relationship that always worked; it was rock solid even when everything else was precarious, and that was very important to the story too.
Then, too, I’m not sure I would have bought this as Ilya and Shane’s relationship if there hadn’t been a fair amount of sex because their connection was rooted in sex from its beginnings in Heated Rivalry. It was their love language for years and to a large degree still is throughout The Long Game.
Sirius: I agree with you Janine, once again. Funnily I loved Heated Rivalry despite myself because there was SO much sex, but as you said their connection was rooted in their sexual explorations and that’s how their love grew. It made sense to me, and in this book I did not feel that there was too much sex at all. It was just perfect and every single scene felt necessary and felt part of the development of their relationship.
Janine: My main criticism is that the early section set before and during the summer camps feels slow. Also, Shane’s cultural identity is largely ignored.
I enjoyed several side characters: Ilya’s teammates Troy, Wyatt, Bood, and Luca, Shane’s teammate Hayden and his family, Ilya’s kid neighbors, Shane’s parents (a scene between Ilya and Shane’s dad was just gorgeous).
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Sirius: I loved the side characters and I loved Ilya’s teammates, but I also did think that Ilya’s team was too good to be true. I did not complain much, but it did feel too good to be true to me.
Janine: Yes! I felt exactly the same way about them when I read Role Model, so I was more prepared for it this time.
I keep meaning to mention how much I liked the dialogue. It’s so much fun and almost always phrased in a “young guy” way.
Kaetrin: There were times in the book where I was angry with Shane and desperately sad for Ilya, where Ilya and his pain broke my heart. I had all the feels reading The Long Game. And for a book about an existing couple that’s pretty special.
Janine: Feels are fun but not always enough by themselves to make me love a book. But The Long Game was not only filled with yearning, it also had more depth and dimension than any of Reid’s earlier books IMO. Going in, I feared a mostly exterior conflict would make the book predictable and a mostly internal-to-the-relationship conflict might lessen my faith in Ilya and Shane’s commitment to each other and in their future happiness. I was wrong on both counts. The conflict was at least as much between them as external, but though I had a couple moments of being angry at Shane, the book ended up strengthening my faith in their partnership. Yes, their relationship was tested, but it passed that test. I closed the book seeing them as even better to and for each other than I had before because of that.
Kaetrin: I had high expectations for The Long Game and for the most part they were met. It’s always a worry when a much-anticipated book comes out. Can it live up to expectations? In this case it very much did.
What grade are you giving The Long Game Janine & Sirius?
Sirius: A, definitely.
Janine: I just finished my fourth read of The Long Game, and I’ve read Heated Rivalry two more times recently, too (The Long Game enriches it so much). I’m giving this book a straight A.
Kaetrin: Well that’s the trifecta. It’s an A from me also.
NOTE TO READERS: Please keep this comment thread spoiler free for those who want to go into the book knowing as little as possible or who haven’t read it yet. We have another post up for discussion of spoilers here.
Great post, ladies! I thoroughly enjoyed reading your exchanges about this fabulous book. I finished THE LONG GAME on Friday and I loved, loved, loved it. It’s my favorite book of 2022 so far—a definite candidate for favorite book of the year. I want to comment on a couple of things. First, I don’t think Shane is so much clueless & oblivious and he is so laser-focused on hockey that he doesn’t pay as much attention as he should to other things in his life. This is a holdover from HEATED RIVALRY where Shane’s lack of awareness extends even to himself (it takes him a long time to acknowledge that he’s attracted to men and even longer to admit that he’s gay). Secondly, I thought the amount of sex scenes was not excessive. As in HEATED RIVALRY, each sex scene in THE LONG GAME contributes to the understanding some aspect of the MCs’ character and their relationship dynamic. In addition to the epic Trophy Room sex scene, I think the scene where Ilya sort of “bottoms” for Shane (unusual for them) was extremely important in understanding how Shane & Ilya interact. The book is definitely more about Ilya than Shane, but Shane’s situation is so stable and, for a variety of reasons, Ilya’s is not, so it’s understandable that Reid’s focus is on Ilya.
@DiscoDollyDeb: This is my favorite book of the year so far too. I’ve read it four times! :) Although there are some books coming out this year that I am *highly* anticipating so I can’t commit to favorite book of the year just yet, it will definitely be on my best of the year list.
I’m going to respond to the rest of your post in the spoiler thread since some of this happens later in the book and I consider it to involve spoilers.
https://dearauthor.com/book-reviews/spoilerific-thread-the-long-game-and-rachel-reids-game-changers-series/
I’m intentionally not reading this until I’ve had a chance to read the book. I’ll be back!
Ladies, you all write such excellent, thought-provoking reviews – I’m in awe. I’m still processing my thoughts about The Long Game, but I did enjoy it very much. I commented on another site that this book made me a little sad. I think it’s what I myself brought to it, ways that *I’m* vulnerable, things that *I’m* withholding. Long-term relationships are so tricky. I like how Rachel Reid gave us both Shane and Ilya’s youth and – though 30 is hardly “old” – their maturity. I also marveled at the reversals you wrote about, and Ilya’s deep tenderness was incredibly moving. There’s another reason I appreciate this book but I think I’ll put it in the Spoilerific thread. I’ll definitely re-read this one but not for a while.
I’ll just add that I’m not a fan of the cover. That thumb placement? As my kids would say, cringy.
@Eliza: I hate this cover with the fire of a thousand suns. It captures nothing of the book. All the other covers at least had some personality. I didn’t like the covers of Tough Guy and Common Goal but I felt that both captured the characters. The cover of Heated Rivalry said “young guys having fun” which was the vibe of big chunks of the book. The cover of Role Model was the best IMO, that guy looked so much like the way Troy was described, bee-stung lips and all. This cover is so impersonal. They look more like dancers than hockey players and the cover just says “stock photo” to me. I don’t know what’s going on at Carina but this book deserved so much better.
Thank you all for the insightful review and analysis. I, too, loved THE LONG GAME, and you helped me look at aspects of the book more deeply. I agree that this book was written more from Ilya’s perspective, and I loved getting inside his head and heart. The deeper emotions and traumatic memories he shared in this book really moved and surprised me. And, of course, Shane was used to Ilya being the stronger one emotionally, so I do think that part of his obliviousness stemmed from his belief in Ilya’s inherent strength and toughness. Yet I did not think that Shane was any more oblivious than many of us would be. I know from being on both sides of the depression equation that a milder depression can be easy to hide and easy to miss. And Ilya was hiding his feelings from Shane. Shane did not see him when he was alone and lonely on the road. Shane did not know of his dreams about his mother. We knew, and our hearts ached for him. Reid gave us that information, and I think she made the right decision to keep Shane in the dark, because many depressed people keep their loved ones in the dark for a variety of reasons. That being said, I was relieved that once Shane realized that Ilya was unhappy, he quickly set about changing things for the better, even if doing so bumped up against his own anxieties, which were not insignificant. He then set about showing Ilya his love and commitment in one of my favorite scenes in the book, which was just lovely.
@Becky: What a lovely comment, Becky! I agree completely.
@DiscoDollyDeb: Ilya is my favourite so more of him is never a bad thing IMO!
Once again, I feel like the resident killjoy for not loving this book as much as so many other readers. I liked it better than Heated Rivalry but not as much as Role Model. It was maybe a B-/C+ read. I really enjoyed the first maybe 3/4 but the last 1/4 brought down my grade and my enjoyment. I put more about that in the spoilery thread.
I’ve thought quite a bit why I don’t love these two books (Heated Rivalry and The Long Game) as much as so many other readers. Part of it is that I just didn’t connect emotionally to the story and characters enough to overlook the flaws in the book. And the other part is that this just isn’t my genre, although it seems like it should be, because I basically only read LBGTQ+ genre fiction these days. But this isn’t queer romance or LGBTQ+ romance, it’s definitely m/m romance (as a genre, not just was a pairing) and that’s just not to my taste these days.
@cleo: I haven’t read that much m/m, so can you explain what you see as the difference between queer romance and m/m-as-a-genre romance? And how this book plays into or with those genre expectations and genre tropes? I feel like this is an area I should know more about. (Others please feel welcome to comment on this topic too).
@Janine: I can only explain what I mean. What I’m calling m/m genre romance comes out of fanfic and features romances between cis gay (and sometimes bi) men – they tend to be tropey and emotionally compelling. They also tend to follow conventions from straight romance – like monogamy. What I’m calling the m/m genre is kind of like Harlequin Presents or Regency romance – stylized and not particularly rooted in reality but enjoyable and emotionally satisfying to a lot of readers.
When I say queer romance or LGBTQ+ romance, I mean romances that have more of a queer sensibility and broader representation – trans and non-binary characters, bi, ace and aro characters, m/m, m/f, and f/f pairings, polyamory, open relationships, etc. They can still be stylized and tropey but the LBGTQ+ rep tends to be more central and/or grounded in reality (to me at least).
I think the first time I specifically heard queer romance talked about as a genre was in 2014 or 2015 when there was a Queer Romance Month blog event featuring a lot of romance authors. At the time, there was a lot of drama and gatekeeping in the m/m community – fights about trans and bi characters in m/m, fights about women reading and writing m/m, lots of fights. And Queer Romance Month seemed to me to be about deliberately creating alternate programing to m/m – creating more room for more types of LGBTQ+ stories and experiences in romance.
Book Riot published this beautiful personal essay about reading queer romance – https://bookriot.com/thank-you-romance/ – I’ve read almost all of the authors she lists at the end.
@Eliza: I wanted to say thank you and it was a joy to discuss this book with Janine and Kaetrin. I will hopefully contribute more of substance tomorrow, I forgot the review was up oy.
@cleo: Sorry wanted to comment on this – in my head I for some reason thought that Queer romance is romance written by own voices, but sometimes description blurs. I have to admit that I would never ever put KJ Charles and Cat Sebastian for example as the authors of queer romance. I mean I know they have very diverse characters in their stories, but to me their m/m stories are as m/m as they come. To me, for example “Almost like being in love” by Steve Kluger is the example of gay romance/ queer romance ( and I list the book by male author only because it is one of my favorite books ever in the genre if not the most favorite , not because it is the book by male author). jmo of course. I also have read a lot but not all of the authors listed in that essay.
@cleo: I understand your categorization system somewhat better now but I’m still confused with regard to The Long Game. What is it about The Long Game specifically that makes you feel it is m/m genre romance? For example if fated mates is a big trope in PNR, marriage of convenience in HR, secret babies in Harlequin categories, then what are the tropes in TLG that put it into the m/m romance (as opposed to queer romance) category? And what is it about the style (since you say “stylized and tropey”)? I’ve bypassed a lot of the m/m classics of the 2000s/2010s so I’m kind of clueless when it comes to this stuff.
ETA: I have the sense that a lot of the m/m of that period was published and promoted as erotic romance and most of the LGBTQIA+ books I read these days (admittedly, many of these are not m/m or romance—I read fantasy, YA and science fiction with queer characters as well as romances with m/m and f/f pairings) seem somewhat less focused on the erotic than these Rachel Reid books. Is that part of it?
I’ll post more tomorrow in the other thread.
Kaetrin, Janine, and Sirius: I very much enjoyed reading this shared review and the comments.
Last night I stayed up late to finish The Long Game. Overall I enjoyed this much anticipated sequel; however, I did put it aside half read a week ago to read several other books. So, it was not quite as compelling as I had hoped it might be.
Now off to read the other post.
@Kareni: Thanks and thanks for letting us know.
At what point in the story did you put the book down? For me the beginning (first three or four chapters) was a bit slow but the rest more than made up for it.
@Janine, it was indeed at about chapter 4 that I took my weeklong break. When I resumed, I finished the book within the day.