REVIEW: Enforcing Emory by Mickie B. Ashling
D Reviewscontemporary mm romance / figure skating / hockey11 Comments
Olympic figure skater Emory Lowe falls in lust the moment he lays eyes on his new neighbor, hockey player Nikolai Vetrov. On the surface, Nik is a typical badass enforcer, intimidating and dangerous, on and off the ice. The only son of Ukrainian immigrants, Nik has been groomed from childhood to fulfill his father’s dreams of seeing him in the Hockey Hall of Fame. Igor guides his son toward that goal with a controlling—and abusive—hand, steering him clear of anyone who might ruin his chances.
Although Emory is the US National Figure Skating champion, he’s in-your-face gay, and his audacious persona rubs Nik and his family the wrong way. Raised by supportive and loving parents, Emory is Nik’s polar opposite in every way but one—his desire to succeed. Underneath the fluff and glitter beats the heart of a fierce competitor, and this side of Emory’s personality begins to close the distance between the two athletes.
While the attraction is one-sided in the beginning, Nik finds himself responding to Emory’s flirting. But before the incongruous pair have a chance at any sort of relationship, they must survive the pressures of career, separation, and most importantly, Igor’s ruthless homophobia.
Dear Mickie B. Ashling,
I feel that this book should come with a special warning: Beware of ugly stereotypes of Russian/Ukrainian people being introduced and reinforced.
It starts from the very first page, from the very first paragraph really. Nick moves in next door to Emory and his family and Nick’s family has come with him from Canada to help him get settled.
“Just my fucking luck,” Tom Lowe muttered as he stood in front of the screen door.
“What’s up, Dad?” Emory asked, taking his eyes off the TV for a second.
“A bunch of fucking communists are moving in the neighborhood”.
Emory sees Nick and of course is attracted to him, as happens in many romances – he doesn’t fall in love without talking to him, thank goodness, but he immediately and definitely likes what he sees.
“I’d climb this comrade in a second”.
His dad, however, keeps talking.
“Dealing with your orientation is one thing, but listening to you drooling over a guy is another matter entirely. And furthermore,” Tom added, turning back to watch the progress across the street, “don’t even think about hooking up with anyone who speaks with an accent. If ya gotta be gay, pick some white boy to do the nasty with.”
“He’s white.”
“I meant American!”
Emory shook his head before heading back to his cozy spot in front of the TV. “You’re too much,” he muttered, grabbing the remote. “A gay-friendly bigot. It doesn’t even compute.”
“Love is hard enough to manage without throwing culture and religion into the mix.”
“How do you know they’re not like us?”
“They’re not speaking English, or were you too caught up in that young man’s body to notice?”
Emory smirked. “I got brain freeze after seeing those arms.”
I do not even know where to start. Maybe with the observation that to some people (and not just of my heritage; needless to say, I get annoyed when any group of people is portrayed in such a stereotyped, horrible way) for whom English is not a first language it can strike a serious nerve when somebody talks down to them based on the way they talk. At my job I earn a living by talking (and writing). I cannot tell you how scared I was that nobody would understand me because of my accent. I wanted to tell Emory’s father to shut the hell up.
The worst thing is that I did not feel his comments were ever seriously refuted. I mean yes, Emory kindly and jokingly calls him “a gay friendly bigot” and Tom is gay friendly, he loves his son and always supported him, moreover eventually he makes Emory’s lover part of the family, but his comments were just there.
And even when his wife tries to say something, I felt that the narrative kind of dismissed her interference.
“His mother, the teacher, was being true to form. Following rules was part of her life. She was very familiar with immigrant parents who dropped the discrimination card at every turn, whereas his dad was an electrician, member of the largest union of electrical workers in the state, born and bred on Chicago’s tough South side.” “Dropped the discrimination card at every turn” does not exactly sound to me as respectful of many immigrants’ struggles.
Emory is apparently a brilliant figure skater who is extremely talented and also flamboyant with his choice of outfits and music while he dances. He won the nationals and now he has a place on the Olympic team. The story takes place before, during and after the Sochi Olympics, by the way. We also learn in the beginning of the story that Emory’s coach suggested he should spend some time before flying to Sochi with a famous Russian coach to make sure Emory comes to the event in top shape.
I am going to jump ahead a little bit and inform you that of course Emory did not click with his coach. Hey how could a Russian coach, of all people, teach him something new, right?
“My new coach hates me,” Emory announced.
“What did he do?” Nik couldn’t imagine anyone not liking Em.
“It’s what he doesn’t do,” Emory complained bitterly.
“Huh?”
“He’s not good at positive reinforcement.”
“Maybe that’s not his style,” Nick said.
“I thrive on praise,” Emory admitted. “A pat on the back is way more effective than a muttered Russian expletive.”
“Get over it”
“Seriously, Nik. I don’t think we click.”
“You don’t need to love the guy, just learn as much as you can,” Nik advised.
“There has to be mutual respect,” Emory said sincerely. “He needs to realize that if he wants to be effective.”
“Isn’t he a good teacher?”
“He’s not teaching me anything new,” Emory scoffed. “Yuri is only fine tuning what I already know.””
I want to talk about Nik and Emory. Fast attraction notwithstanding I thought they were good together. As I said in the beginning, I really liked Emory and I thought Nik’s realization that he was gay was handled well. It is not exactly a GFY story, I do not think – Nik always fought his attraction to men and he was reasonably confident that he was attracted to women as well, so I guess this is a story of a realization that he was not a closeted bisexual, but gay?
Nik’s homophobic bastard father was the main villain of the story. Would I have any problem with him being a homophobe? Of course not! But once again I had the feeling that Igor being a Ukrainian immigrant as well as a homophobic criminal was tightly connected and I resented that a lot.
The story just won’t let me forget the “message” of it. Tiny things like Nik’s sister getting internet in his apartment when he still did not have an internet by “piggy-backing” on his neighbor’s Internet (of course!) and
“It made him a little sick to realize the skater would be off to Russia in a couple of weeks – a flamboyantly gay man alone in a rabidly homophobic nation”
The whole nation really? A nation with awful homophobic laws certainly, but isn’t that a sweeping generalization right there?
And there were some not so tiny things, like a certain event at 72%. My book buddy warned me about it, thank goodness, otherwise I fear my Ipad would not have survived it.
I cannot tell you how happy I was when this book ended.
Grade D.
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This was a DNF for me, somewhere around the 30% mark. I actually returned it for a refund. Racism and stereotyping is much in the news these days, and when I pick up a romance I want to get away from that.
@Eliza: Oh I wanted to DNF, believe me and since I have read it on Scribd, I could have done it painlessly as I do with so many m/m books these days (well now when Scribd is changing I am not sure anymore but that’s another topic). However I felt strongly that I wanted to warn off the readers who may be just as disgusted with the content of it as I was. Obviously nobody is obligated to agree with my warning :), but I still wanted to say pretty much – run away from this book.
What was the incident at 72%? Please don’t make me buy it to find out. Curiosity will kill my bank account.
@Kierney Scott:
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Okay, basically Tom hired his Union Buddies to beat Igor up – to retaliate against him (most likely he did what they thought he did, don’t get me wrong) and be their own “maphia”. They are not real maphia, I don’t think, but they certainly behaved as such. And with all the ugly words too.
Thx for taking one for the team Sirius!
Can I just note that these Ukrainian names aren’t even correct? Russian =/= Ukrainian. There’s no G sound in Ukrainian, for instance. So, even though the Cyrillic letter is the same in both languages, Igor would be pronounced Ihor. And Nikolai is Russian. The Ukrainian variant is Mykola. Also, the vast majority of Ukrainian surnames end in -enko, -chuk, -sky, -shyn, or -iuk. Not -ov. That, too, is Russian.
I know they sound alike, but Russian and Ukrainian are two distinct languages that happen to share an alphabet and a branch of the linguistic family tree. They’re about as similar as English and Spanish.
Please, guys, if you’re going to write characters from a different cultural background than your own, at least use basic Google-Fu.
@Jess: OMG, did this book get anything right?
@Jess: this is spot on of course but I was trying to think that Ukrainians are not the only one who live in Ukraine and maybe Nik’s family has Russian roots even though Ukraine is their home. I was born in Kiev and spend a little over twenty years of my life there before I came to live in the US and my last name certainly does not end anything like that – I am Jewish . Mind you this probably me giving the author too much credit here because nowhere in the book it says that Nik’s family has Russian roots, only that they are Ukrainians :). So ignore me :).
@Sirius That’s a very fair point! Ukraine isn’t totally homogeneous; obviously the recent conflicts there have proven that. I just assumed from the blurb and the stereotypical angle of the narrative that the author simply didn’t do their research, but it’s certainly possible that Nik’s family has roots elsewhere. Thanks for pointing that out!
…Although, if that were the case, an aside in the narrative would’ve made it clear that the author knew what they were talking about. That’d actually add some flavor to the story, discussing what it’s like to grow up in a Russian family in a former Soviet nation that isn’t Russia… or maybe that’s just me.
@Jess: no no not just you :). I refuse to reread this one so maybe I have missed a reference to that – that Nik’s family has Russian roots but I certainly do not remember one. It is what I assumed in regards to names you know? Because as you said – Nikolay is not a Ukrainian variety of this name and Russian and Ukrainian languages may be similar but they are not the same . I used to be fluent in both – after living in the US where I do not practice my Ukrainian I cannot claim fluency but I still remember this stuff well enough. Thanks so much for commenting .
@Jayne: well Nik can play hockey well and what rudimentary knowledge I have of figure skating seems to point at getting some basics correctly :). I hate focusing on one issue when I review the book you know? But this issue was just so in my face that it seemed to grow so big and everything else got so small almost invisible .