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First Page: Unnamed Paranormal

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. In exciting news, the author of The Duke of Snow and Apples reported that she participated in a blog pitch [...]

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First Page: YA Fantasy

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** The prince waited. He was, of course, in his famous castle, which surmounted a steep spur of the Labyrinthine [...]

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First Page: Contemporary

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** “Countdown to launch, two minutes.” Damien glanced at his Tag Heuer, set the stopwatch. The parachute was comfortably heavy [...]

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First Page Saturday: Inspirational Contemporary

“You go first.” Her voice was soft and nudging in his ear, and he recognized the sound of it immediately. Without even glancing towards his right, Christian Wallace was certain of the identity of the woman who stood there, despite not having heard Rosie Donovan’s voice in more than four years. He knew instinctively who [...]

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First Page: Could It Be Magic

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** August 1558 “Let the candle be. I’ve more on my plate than I can say a prayer over. Time [...]

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First Page: Sing a Song of Murder

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** “Tracey, give me a reason to stay.” I remained speechless for a moment as I stared into Scott’s sky [...]

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First Page: unpublished Paranormal titled Daughter of Fire

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. **** Prologue Kea’au 1778 Waves crashed hard against the lava cliffs. The earth rumbled deep in its belly. The volcano [...]

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First Page: Contemporary

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** Sarah Jenkins had never played hockey, much less coached it. Yet here she sat, perched on the edge of the [...]

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“The Duke of Snow and Apples,” Fantasy Romance (set in a world based in part on Regency England)

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** The twinkling orbs of fire in Charlotte’s brownish blond hair blazed blue-white, and she hoped no one would notice. [...]

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First Page: Criminal / Legal Romance

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** The photographer leaned against the bathroom door, studying the room for the next shot in the series through her [...]

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