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		<title>By: Jeaniene Frost</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jeaniene Frost</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 27 Dec 2008 22:58:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Bev, I didn&#039;t have to change hardly anything in books two or three because of revisions in book one. The beginning and end of book one remained the same; it was the middle that got most of the work done to it. In fact, the last line of Halfway to the Grave was identical from my original first draft, to the version that hit the shelves. So because the beginning and ending always stayed the same, the plots of the second and third book weren&#039;t really affected. 

That doesn&#039;t mean those books skipped revisions, however, but that was after my editor read them and gave me notes. Not because of changes to Halfway to the Grave while I was querying :).</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Bev, I didn&#8217;t have to change hardly anything in books two or three because of revisions in book one. The beginning and end of book one remained the same; it was the middle that got most of the work done to it. In fact, the last line of Halfway to the Grave was identical from my original first draft, to the version that hit the shelves. So because the beginning and ending always stayed the same, the plots of the second and third book weren&#8217;t really affected. </p>
<p>That doesn&#8217;t mean those books skipped revisions, however, but that was after my editor read them and gave me notes. Not because of changes to Halfway to the Grave while I was querying :).</p>
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		<title>By: BevQB</title>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 27 Dec 2008 19:19:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>So hard to believe that this series is your first, Jeaniene!

BTW, after changing and re-submitting book 1, how much of what you wrote for books 2, 3, and 4 were you able to keep? Did any of the book 1 changes force any major changes to those later books?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>So hard to believe that this series is your first, Jeaniene!</p>
<p>BTW, after changing and re-submitting book 1, how much of what you wrote for books 2, 3, and 4 were you able to keep? Did any of the book 1 changes force any major changes to those later books?</p>
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		<title>By: Jeaniene Frost</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jeaniene Frost</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 26 Dec 2008 23:44:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Jessa, thanks for the comment about Cat! Karin, glad you liked my road-to-publication story :).</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Jessa, thanks for the comment about Cat! Karin, glad you liked my road-to-publication story :).</p>
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		<title>By: Karin</title>
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		<dc:creator>Karin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 26 Dec 2008 21:29:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>What a great story. Thank you for sharing it!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>What a great story. Thank you for sharing it!</p>
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		<title>By: Jessa Slade</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jessa Slade</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 26 Dec 2008 21:06:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I can sure see why they picked up the stories and why it went bestseller.  Cat is a great heroine.  When does the movie come out?  Joss Whedon directing, I think :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I can sure see why they picked up the stories and why it went bestseller.  Cat is a great heroine.  When does the movie come out?  Joss Whedon directing, I think :)</p>
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		<title>By: Jeaniene Frost</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jeaniene Frost</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 26 Dec 2008 20:39:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>BFF Ilona! Fancy seeing you here ;-)

Pamk, thanks so much!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>BFF Ilona! Fancy seeing you here ;-)</p>
<p>Pamk, thanks so much!</p>
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		<title>By: Pamk</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 26 Dec 2008 20:28:14 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>sounds like a great story. Your books rock</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>sounds like a great story. Your books rock</p>
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		<title>By: ilona andrews</title>
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		<dc:creator>ilona andrews</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 26 Dec 2008 18:50:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>:waves at Jeaniene:

I always liked your first sale story!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>:waves at Jeaniene:</p>
<p>I always liked your first sale story!</p>
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		<title>By: Jeaniene Frost</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jeaniene Frost</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 26 Dec 2008 17:16:59 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks, Juliana!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks, Juliana!</p>
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		<title>By: Juliana Stone</title>
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		<dc:creator>Juliana Stone</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 26 Dec 2008 14:42:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Jeaniene!  Wonderful story.... I couldn&#039;t wait to show this to my hubby and told him, we&#039;re with the same publisher!!!  I am eagerly awaiting your third book!  congrats on all your success! It&#039;s certainly something to strive for!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Jeaniene!  Wonderful story&#8230;. I couldn&#8217;t wait to show this to my hubby and told him, we&#8217;re with the same publisher!!!  I am eagerly awaiting your third book!  congrats on all your success! It&#8217;s certainly something to strive for!</p>
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