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	<title>Comments on: REVIEW:  Unlaced by Jaci Burton, Jasmine Haynes, Joey Hill, Denise Rossetti</title>
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		<title>By: Jasmine Haynbes</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jasmine Haynbes</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 01 Dec 2008 21:10:38 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thank you for taking the time to read and review, Jane.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you for taking the time to read and review, Jane.</p>
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		<title>By: Joey W. Hill</title>
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		<dc:creator>Joey W. Hill</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 01 Dec 2008 19:09:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Jane, I always respect your opinions of my work, and appreciate your time in reviewing the book. When you write what I write, you know the same premise that works for one reader, will not work for another. I think the comments have demonstrated that wonderfully. Reviewers help readers make choices based on the reader’s particular interests, and therefore I’m always delighted to have reviews of my work - particularly thoughtful, detailed reviews such as yours, even if they’re not always glowing (laughter). That tells me you’re honest, and I like an honest reviewer. I suspect readers do, too.

So my only real comment echoes KZ’s – Denise’s story, like all of her work, is outstanding. And while yes, it has otherworldly elements, being an anthology, the central focus is the rediscovery of love between John and Meg, and their willingness to overcome the pain of the past.  If you get a chance to read it, I think you’ll very much enjoy their love story. Like most of us in this industry, you might not get much time to read purely for the pleasure of it - that one would be a great choice for an hour&#039;s escape! 

Thanks again, and thanks for the interesting and thought provoking discussion of Unlaced!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Jane, I always respect your opinions of my work, and appreciate your time in reviewing the book. When you write what I write, you know the same premise that works for one reader, will not work for another. I think the comments have demonstrated that wonderfully. Reviewers help readers make choices based on the reader’s particular interests, and therefore I’m always delighted to have reviews of my work &#8211; particularly thoughtful, detailed reviews such as yours, even if they’re not always glowing (laughter). That tells me you’re honest, and I like an honest reviewer. I suspect readers do, too.</p>
<p>So my only real comment echoes KZ’s – Denise’s story, like all of her work, is outstanding. And while yes, it has otherworldly elements, being an anthology, the central focus is the rediscovery of love between John and Meg, and their willingness to overcome the pain of the past.  If you get a chance to read it, I think you’ll very much enjoy their love story. Like most of us in this industry, you might not get much time to read purely for the pleasure of it &#8211; that one would be a great choice for an hour&#8217;s escape! </p>
<p>Thanks again, and thanks for the interesting and thought provoking discussion of Unlaced!</p>
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		<title>By: Shiloh Walker</title>
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		<dc:creator>Shiloh Walker</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 01 Dec 2008 00:36:22 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;ll be picking it up, CJ.

I love Joey and Jaci&#039;s writing.  Now Joey&#039;s very good at pushing me past my comfort zone and there&#039;s been a few books of hers that were very hard for me to read, but I&#039;ll still read this one. 

That cover, by the way, makes me green with envy.  Very, very pretty.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;ll be picking it up, CJ.</p>
<p>I love Joey and Jaci&#8217;s writing.  Now Joey&#8217;s very good at pushing me past my comfort zone and there&#8217;s been a few books of hers that were very hard for me to read, but I&#8217;ll still read this one. </p>
<p>That cover, by the way, makes me green with envy.  Very, very pretty.</p>
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		<title>By: CJ</title>
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		<dc:creator>CJ</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 30 Nov 2008 23:37:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>My previous post was supposed to end with &quot;but I doubt I&#039;ll enjoy it.&quot; I don&#039;t know where the rest of my post went.

So, who else is going to read this when it comes out? Does Jane&#039;s review change anyone&#039;s mind?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>My previous post was supposed to end with &#8220;but I doubt I&#8217;ll enjoy it.&#8221; I don&#8217;t know where the rest of my post went.</p>
<p>So, who else is going to read this when it comes out? Does Jane&#8217;s review change anyone&#8217;s mind?</p>
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		<title>By: CJ</title>
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		<dc:creator>CJ</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 30 Nov 2008 01:55:21 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I gotta say, I&#039;m with Jane here. And I&#039;m not squeamish about BDSM as a kink. But it&#039;s one thing if the characters are doing this in the bedroom, but a boardroom? With teleconferencing involved? I personally don&#039;t find that sexy at all. Jane has a valid point- women fight to be taken seriously in business. And if she&#039;s consenting after the fact... well, the point of consent is for it to take place beforehand. And I&#039;m also not fond of stories where the hero &quot;knows&quot; what&#039;s best for the heroine (or vice versa, or hero/hero). It&#039;s demeaning to say (especially repeatedly) that someone doesn&#039;t know their own mind, or what&#039;s best for them. 

I&#039;ll probably end up reading it, because I&#039;ll be buying it for Jaci Burton&#039;s story (whose books I seriously heart).</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I gotta say, I&#8217;m with Jane here. And I&#8217;m not squeamish about BDSM as a kink. But it&#8217;s one thing if the characters are doing this in the bedroom, but a boardroom? With teleconferencing involved? I personally don&#8217;t find that sexy at all. Jane has a valid point- women fight to be taken seriously in business. And if she&#8217;s consenting after the fact&#8230; well, the point of consent is for it to take place beforehand. And I&#8217;m also not fond of stories where the hero &#8220;knows&#8221; what&#8217;s best for the heroine (or vice versa, or hero/hero). It&#8217;s demeaning to say (especially repeatedly) that someone doesn&#8217;t know their own mind, or what&#8217;s best for them. </p>
<p>I&#8217;ll probably end up reading it, because I&#8217;ll be buying it for Jaci Burton&#8217;s story (whose books I seriously heart).</p>
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		<title>By: Jaci Burton</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jaci Burton</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 29 Nov 2008 02:14:25 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>As always, Jane, thank you for reading, and for the review. :-)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>As always, Jane, thank you for reading, and for the review. :-)</p>
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		<title>By: K. Z. Snow</title>
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		<dc:creator>K. Z. Snow</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 28 Nov 2008 14:45:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Jane, you really should give Denise&#039;s story a chance.  I haven&#039;t read this anthology, but she&#039;s a wonderful writer.  You could be missing out.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Jane, you really should give Denise&#8217;s story a chance.  I haven&#8217;t read this anthology, but she&#8217;s a wonderful writer.  You could be missing out.</p>
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		<title>By: Jane</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jane</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 28 Nov 2008 01:46:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@Ann Somerville: It&#039;s told from two POVs.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@Ann Somerville: It&#8217;s told from two POVs.</p>
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		<title>By: Lynne Connolly</title>
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		<dc:creator>Lynne Connolly</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 28 Nov 2008 00:03:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;blockquote&gt;Cassandra consents to these ventures but only after the fact. Like after she is bound in the boardroom, Lucas tells her that everyone in the room knows that she is bound and that she is sexually stimulated. I’m not sure how that is sexy. Maybe to some it is, but to me, it was stomach churning.&lt;/blockquote&gt;

I find Joey Hill one of the most thoughtful, interesting authors in the BDSM genre. Her &quot;Natural Law&quot; series, set around a group of characters who visit the Zone club is fascinating, because it explores the characters and what motivates them. They&#039;re real, and never do you feel that they&#039;re being exploited, used or manipulated.

Not so in the story I read, &quot;Board Resolution.&quot; (part of the &#039;Behind the Mask&#039; anthology). In this one, Savannah is suspended above the boardroom table and used by all the men. It is consensual, but she&#039;s railroaded into it.
Maybe I didn&#039;t like it partly because he uses their business deal to get to her and so demeans her abilities and her standing as a businesswoman.
She is helpless, she doesn&#039;t know what&#039;s going on, and he uses that helplessness to restrain her. She&#039;s fastened into a machine, and gagged with a ball gag, which isn&#039;t my thing at all, but because I enjoy Joey Hill&#039;s work and I usually trust where she takes me, even if it&#039;s beyond my personal comfort zone, I read on.

Honestly, I really don&#039;t know why this story didn&#039;t work for me. Perhaps because it uses humiliation as a theme, and for me, that&#039;s a big hot button. I would love to understand why. It didn&#039;t just not work for me, it disturbed me, and I rarely have that reaction to anything I read.

I won&#039;t be reading this story, but I will definitely be picking up the next Joey W. Hill novel in the mermaid/angel series, and any more Natural Law books she writes.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<blockquote><p>Cassandra consents to these ventures but only after the fact. Like after she is bound in the boardroom, Lucas tells her that everyone in the room knows that she is bound and that she is sexually stimulated. I’m not sure how that is sexy. Maybe to some it is, but to me, it was stomach churning.</p></blockquote>
<p>I find Joey Hill one of the most thoughtful, interesting authors in the BDSM genre. Her &#8220;Natural Law&#8221; series, set around a group of characters who visit the Zone club is fascinating, because it explores the characters and what motivates them. They&#8217;re real, and never do you feel that they&#8217;re being exploited, used or manipulated.</p>
<p>Not so in the story I read, &#8220;Board Resolution.&#8221; (part of the &#8216;Behind the Mask&#8217; anthology). In this one, Savannah is suspended above the boardroom table and used by all the men. It is consensual, but she&#8217;s railroaded into it.<br />
Maybe I didn&#8217;t like it partly because he uses their business deal to get to her and so demeans her abilities and her standing as a businesswoman.<br />
She is helpless, she doesn&#8217;t know what&#8217;s going on, and he uses that helplessness to restrain her. She&#8217;s fastened into a machine, and gagged with a ball gag, which isn&#8217;t my thing at all, but because I enjoy Joey Hill&#8217;s work and I usually trust where she takes me, even if it&#8217;s beyond my personal comfort zone, I read on.</p>
<p>Honestly, I really don&#8217;t know why this story didn&#8217;t work for me. Perhaps because it uses humiliation as a theme, and for me, that&#8217;s a big hot button. I would love to understand why. It didn&#8217;t just not work for me, it disturbed me, and I rarely have that reaction to anything I read.</p>
<p>I won&#8217;t be reading this story, but I will definitely be picking up the next Joey W. Hill novel in the mermaid/angel series, and any more Natural Law books she writes.</p>
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		<title>By: Ann Somerville</title>
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		<dc:creator>Ann Somerville</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 27 Nov 2008 23:48:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@&lt;a href=&quot;#comment-181987&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Jane&lt;/a&gt;: 
Whose POV is it told in?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@<a href="#comment-181987" rel="nofollow">Jane</a>:<br />
Whose POV is it told in?</p>
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