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		<title>By: Angie</title>
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		<dc:creator>Angie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 01 Oct 2008 18:53:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>More thoughts after a night&#039;s sleep....

&lt;blockquote&gt;Star Trek could never have been as popular as it is now without the political side of the stories. But Star Wars did exceedingly well without it.&lt;/blockquote&gt;

&lt;i&gt;Star Wars&lt;/i&gt; -- the original movie, with Luke the farmboy and Leia the princess involved in a rebellion against the evil empire -- was ALL about politics.  That was the point of the story, and without the political machinations, there wouldn&#039;t have been a story and none of the main characters would ever have met.

I think some of the folks who are against politics in their books are assuming that &quot;politics in a book&quot; always means a bunch of serious people in suits lecturing on CNN, and pages of discussion about treaty details or the minutae of laws, or whatever.  That&#039;s not the case at all.

&lt;i&gt;Star Wars&lt;/i&gt; is actually an excellent example of a very political story; it&#039;s all about who has power and what they&#039;re doing with it, and how other people are reacting to their use of power and taking action to try to change the political situation.  It&#039;s not boring and it&#039;s not slow.  You don&#039;t get minutes-at-a-time of people lecturing the audience about the structure of the government or the details of the laws which have been changed or the rights which have been suspended.  Instead you &lt;i&gt;see&lt;/i&gt; some of the results of bad government (Vader, representing the evil Emperor, murdering random officers who displease him, and destroying an inhabited planet just to show off to the rest of the empire how super-bad his new toy is, to keep any of &lt;i&gt;them&lt;/i&gt; from getting out of line) and what the protesters are doing about it (forming an organized rebellion, stealing the plans to the super-bad new toy and passing them on to other rebellion folks who can make use of them to destroy the thing).  If you like &lt;i&gt;Star Wars,&lt;/i&gt; even the original movie, then you like political stories.

&lt;blockquote&gt;Kate Elliott’s JARAN, for example, and Bujold’s Vorkosigan books&lt;/blockquote&gt;

These are also very much political stories.  (Also awesome books, BTW.)  &lt;i&gt;Jaran&#039;s&lt;/i&gt; Tess is where she is because of politics; her brother is at the forefront of a political struggle between humanity and the ruling aliens.  And once she&#039;s on Rhui, she&#039;s caught up in (relatively) smaller-scale political maneuverings, with Ilya working to unite all the Jaran and conquer the settled lands.  And that&#039;s not even looking at the later books.  And Miles Vorkosigan&#039;s stories are definitely political -- his very existence is a political statement by his parents, who are working to drag Barrayar out of its barbaric past, and his individual adventures are all political on one scale or another -- often on a very large scale.

A story having firmly incorporated politics does &lt;i&gt;not&lt;/i&gt; mean it&#039;s not also a story which is very much about people.  Politics &lt;i&gt;is&lt;/i&gt; about people, about how they interact and get along and share resources.  Any writer experienced enough to show instead of tell can make it plain how things work and what&#039;s going on and whether or not anything is wrong with the current situation without subjecting the reader to a huge narrative infodump, or to pages of boring &quot;As you know, Bob...&quot; lectures from the characters.

&lt;i&gt;Romeo and Juliet&lt;/i&gt; is a political story.  The whole point of it was to show how the political squabbling between their families affected those two particular people.  And yet we never find out exactly &lt;i&gt;what&lt;/i&gt; political points or beliefs separate the two families; we don&#039;t need to know, because it&#039;s not important to the story being told.  The commentary in R&amp;J is about political enmities in general, and the details of the particular political enmity used as an example are unimportant.  It&#039;s sort of a meta-political story.  :)  But again, the story wouldn&#039;t exist without the politics.

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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>More thoughts after a night&#8217;s sleep&#8230;.</p>
<blockquote><p>Star Trek could never have been as popular as it is now without the political side of the stories. But Star Wars did exceedingly well without it.</p></blockquote>
<p><i>Star Wars</i> &#8212; the original movie, with Luke the farmboy and Leia the princess involved in a rebellion against the evil empire &#8212; was ALL about politics.  That was the point of the story, and without the political machinations, there wouldn&#8217;t have been a story and none of the main characters would ever have met.</p>
<p>I think some of the folks who are against politics in their books are assuming that &#8220;politics in a book&#8221; always means a bunch of serious people in suits lecturing on CNN, and pages of discussion about treaty details or the minutae of laws, or whatever.  That&#8217;s not the case at all.</p>
<p><i>Star Wars</i> is actually an excellent example of a very political story; it&#8217;s all about who has power and what they&#8217;re doing with it, and how other people are reacting to their use of power and taking action to try to change the political situation.  It&#8217;s not boring and it&#8217;s not slow.  You don&#8217;t get minutes-at-a-time of people lecturing the audience about the structure of the government or the details of the laws which have been changed or the rights which have been suspended.  Instead you <i>see</i> some of the results of bad government (Vader, representing the evil Emperor, murdering random officers who displease him, and destroying an inhabited planet just to show off to the rest of the empire how super-bad his new toy is, to keep any of <i>them</i> from getting out of line) and what the protesters are doing about it (forming an organized rebellion, stealing the plans to the super-bad new toy and passing them on to other rebellion folks who can make use of them to destroy the thing).  If you like <i>Star Wars,</i> even the original movie, then you like political stories.</p>
<blockquote><p>Kate Elliott’s JARAN, for example, and Bujold’s Vorkosigan books</p></blockquote>
<p>These are also very much political stories.  (Also awesome books, BTW.)  <i>Jaran&#8217;s</i> Tess is where she is because of politics; her brother is at the forefront of a political struggle between humanity and the ruling aliens.  And once she&#8217;s on Rhui, she&#8217;s caught up in (relatively) smaller-scale political maneuverings, with Ilya working to unite all the Jaran and conquer the settled lands.  And that&#8217;s not even looking at the later books.  And Miles Vorkosigan&#8217;s stories are definitely political &#8212; his very existence is a political statement by his parents, who are working to drag Barrayar out of its barbaric past, and his individual adventures are all political on one scale or another &#8212; often on a very large scale.</p>
<p>A story having firmly incorporated politics does <i>not</i> mean it&#8217;s not also a story which is very much about people.  Politics <i>is</i> about people, about how they interact and get along and share resources.  Any writer experienced enough to show instead of tell can make it plain how things work and what&#8217;s going on and whether or not anything is wrong with the current situation without subjecting the reader to a huge narrative infodump, or to pages of boring &#8220;As you know, Bob&#8230;&#8221; lectures from the characters.</p>
<p><i>Romeo and Juliet</i> is a political story.  The whole point of it was to show how the political squabbling between their families affected those two particular people.  And yet we never find out exactly <i>what</i> political points or beliefs separate the two families; we don&#8217;t need to know, because it&#8217;s not important to the story being told.  The commentary in R&amp;J is about political enmities in general, and the details of the particular political enmity used as an example are unimportant.  It&#8217;s sort of a meta-political story.  :)  But again, the story wouldn&#8217;t exist without the politics.</p>
<p>Angie</p>
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		<title>By: Angelia Sparrow</title>
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		<dc:creator>Angelia Sparrow</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 01 Oct 2008 12:27:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>What Angie said.

&lt;i&gt;The setting should play an integral part in the story and the characters should reflect at least some of those differences in their personalities and world views, or there’s not much point to the exercise.&lt;/i&gt;

If I&#039;m reading SF, any SF, romance or otherwise, I want to know these characters do not live in my reality and what some of the differences are.

I don&#039;t want the wall-paper of &quot;cyber-dildos&quot; that have no different function than my own. Tell me &quot;she flipped up the synthetic flesh panel over the implant in her mons and shivered as she plugged the Midnight Rider&#039;s neural net into her own nervous system. For the duration, she would &quot;feel&quot; everything through the lifelike dildo&#039;s state-of-the-art sensors.&quot;
(pardon the example, I am as yet uncaffinated)

You don&#039;t have to blather on like a civics lesson. Just show me the hero being surprised by real food at breakfast. Or have the heroine take full sensory immersion entertainment for granted. Or have a guy never have had orange juice because there is no longer any trade with Florida or California.  It&#039;s little things like that which help build the world.

I once started a book with a smeary, smudged religious tract. 

And that&#039;s something else. Religion is an important part of many people&#039;s lives. What&#039;s it going to be like? Internet churches? (There are a few already) Paganism continuing to grow? Fundamentalism getting an even deeper hold? Islam taking over Europe? The Jews will keep on as they always have, I expect.  

Sorry, I&#039;m a geek, and the idea gets me geeking.

Plot getting in the way of the story...either I&#039;m not awake enough to understand or that makes no sense.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>What Angie said.</p>
<p><i>The setting should play an integral part in the story and the characters should reflect at least some of those differences in their personalities and world views, or there’s not much point to the exercise.</i></p>
<p>If I&#8217;m reading SF, any SF, romance or otherwise, I want to know these characters do not live in my reality and what some of the differences are.</p>
<p>I don&#8217;t want the wall-paper of &#8220;cyber-dildos&#8221; that have no different function than my own. Tell me &#8220;she flipped up the synthetic flesh panel over the implant in her mons and shivered as she plugged the Midnight Rider&#8217;s neural net into her own nervous system. For the duration, she would &#8220;feel&#8221; everything through the lifelike dildo&#8217;s state-of-the-art sensors.&#8221;<br />
(pardon the example, I am as yet uncaffinated)</p>
<p>You don&#8217;t have to blather on like a civics lesson. Just show me the hero being surprised by real food at breakfast. Or have the heroine take full sensory immersion entertainment for granted. Or have a guy never have had orange juice because there is no longer any trade with Florida or California.  It&#8217;s little things like that which help build the world.</p>
<p>I once started a book with a smeary, smudged religious tract. </p>
<p>And that&#8217;s something else. Religion is an important part of many people&#8217;s lives. What&#8217;s it going to be like? Internet churches? (There are a few already) Paganism continuing to grow? Fundamentalism getting an even deeper hold? Islam taking over Europe? The Jews will keep on as they always have, I expect.  </p>
<p>Sorry, I&#8217;m a geek, and the idea gets me geeking.</p>
<p>Plot getting in the way of the story&#8230;either I&#8217;m not awake enough to understand or that makes no sense.</p>
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		<title>By: Angie</title>
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		<dc:creator>Angie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 01 Oct 2008 03:13:22 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>SonomaLass -- &lt;blockquote&gt;However, Jane specifically refers to “futuristic” fiction, meaning set in a future that derives from our present.&lt;/blockquote&gt;

Actually, looking at how the term is used in the genre, I&#039;ve gotten the impression that &quot;futuristic&quot; is just the Special Romance Term for science fiction.  I usually call it &quot;SF romance&quot; because otherwise none of the people I talk to who aren&#039;t genre romance fans know what the heck I mean.  [wry smile]

I agree with you, though, that if you&#039;re going to use an exotic setting, whether it&#039;s historical or SF or fantasy or whatever, it should be for a reason.  The setting should play an integral part in the story and the characters should reflect at least some of those differences in their personalities and world views, or there&#039;s not much point to the exercise.

Angie</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>SonomaLass &#8212;<br />
<blockquote>However, Jane specifically refers to “futuristic” fiction, meaning set in a future that derives from our present.</p></blockquote>
<p>Actually, looking at how the term is used in the genre, I&#8217;ve gotten the impression that &#8220;futuristic&#8221; is just the Special Romance Term for science fiction.  I usually call it &#8220;SF romance&#8221; because otherwise none of the people I talk to who aren&#8217;t genre romance fans know what the heck I mean.  [wry smile]</p>
<p>I agree with you, though, that if you&#8217;re going to use an exotic setting, whether it&#8217;s historical or SF or fantasy or whatever, it should be for a reason.  The setting should play an integral part in the story and the characters should reflect at least some of those differences in their personalities and world views, or there&#8217;s not much point to the exercise.</p>
<p>Angie</p>
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		<title>By: SonomaLass</title>
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		<dc:creator>SonomaLass</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 30 Sep 2008 22:17:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>SF or fantasy with strong romance is my favorite genre.  I love good alternative world building.  The masters of sci-fi and fantasy (going back to Tolkien, Asimov, Heinlein) knew that their readers would look at these alternative worlds in light of/comparison with the one we live in.  How not?  In an &quot;alternate&quot; world, I look for consistency and an interesting premise, and a plot and characters that are more meaningful because of that.

However, Jane specifically refers to &quot;futuristic&quot; fiction, meaning set in a future that derives from our present.  I agree that the contrast and some sense of how we got there from here, or here from there, are important.  Just as there&#039;s no point in setting a story in a historical period if you aren&#039;t going to do something worthwhile with the differences that characterize that period, and I don&#039;t just mean the fashions.  Then the setting is, as Jane says, mere &quot;wallpaper.&quot;  I prefer knowing that the choice of an alternate time setting is integral to the story.  In futuristic fiction, that has to mean some sense of the government and social structure, how it differs from ours, and how/why it developed that way.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>SF or fantasy with strong romance is my favorite genre.  I love good alternative world building.  The masters of sci-fi and fantasy (going back to Tolkien, Asimov, Heinlein) knew that their readers would look at these alternative worlds in light of/comparison with the one we live in.  How not?  In an &#8220;alternate&#8221; world, I look for consistency and an interesting premise, and a plot and characters that are more meaningful because of that.</p>
<p>However, Jane specifically refers to &#8220;futuristic&#8221; fiction, meaning set in a future that derives from our present.  I agree that the contrast and some sense of how we got there from here, or here from there, are important.  Just as there&#8217;s no point in setting a story in a historical period if you aren&#8217;t going to do something worthwhile with the differences that characterize that period, and I don&#8217;t just mean the fashions.  Then the setting is, as Jane says, mere &#8220;wallpaper.&#8221;  I prefer knowing that the choice of an alternate time setting is integral to the story.  In futuristic fiction, that has to mean some sense of the government and social structure, how it differs from ours, and how/why it developed that way.</p>
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		<title>By: Victoria Janssen</title>
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		<dc:creator>Victoria Janssen</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 30 Sep 2008 19:51:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;i&gt;As I thought about this when I wrote it up, I wondered what the point of writing a futuristic is if you aren’t envisioning a better world or using the future world to criticize the current governmental structure.&lt;/i&gt;

In a regular science fiction novel, that doesn&#039;t purport to be a romance, I would agree; but most of the people I&#039;ve met who read futuristics don&#039;t seem to want that, because if they did, they would go read sf.  They want a romance with the sfnal trappings.  

It&#039;s really tricky to work that much worldbuilding into a romance novel that, by definition, has to focus on the central relationship.  One of the ways to do that is to use common sfnal tropes with which the reader is already familiar, so detailed explication isn&#039;t required.  I think sfnal wallpaper is a valid choice, if that&#039;s your aim.  The point is that it&#039;s fun.  I love space opera, myself; I don&#039;t get into most futuristic romances, but that&#039;s only because my taste leans too far towards more mainstream sf.

However, maybe there&#039;s room for SF with Romantic Elements?  Something that is to futuristic romance as urban fantasy (in the current sense) is to paranormal romance?  I&#039;ve read books with that feel to them--Kate Elliott&#039;s JARAN, for example, and Bujold&#039;s Vorkosigan books are an excellent example--and would love to see that become a new trend.

There was an article all about paranormal romance in the latest issue of the SFWA Bulletin (pub of the Science Fiction &amp; Fantasy Writers of America)--I wonder if an influx of sf/f writers into romance will happen?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><i>As I thought about this when I wrote it up, I wondered what the point of writing a futuristic is if you aren’t envisioning a better world or using the future world to criticize the current governmental structure.</i></p>
<p>In a regular science fiction novel, that doesn&#8217;t purport to be a romance, I would agree; but most of the people I&#8217;ve met who read futuristics don&#8217;t seem to want that, because if they did, they would go read sf.  They want a romance with the sfnal trappings.  </p>
<p>It&#8217;s really tricky to work that much worldbuilding into a romance novel that, by definition, has to focus on the central relationship.  One of the ways to do that is to use common sfnal tropes with which the reader is already familiar, so detailed explication isn&#8217;t required.  I think sfnal wallpaper is a valid choice, if that&#8217;s your aim.  The point is that it&#8217;s fun.  I love space opera, myself; I don&#8217;t get into most futuristic romances, but that&#8217;s only because my taste leans too far towards more mainstream sf.</p>
<p>However, maybe there&#8217;s room for SF with Romantic Elements?  Something that is to futuristic romance as urban fantasy (in the current sense) is to paranormal romance?  I&#8217;ve read books with that feel to them&#8211;Kate Elliott&#8217;s JARAN, for example, and Bujold&#8217;s Vorkosigan books are an excellent example&#8211;and would love to see that become a new trend.</p>
<p>There was an article all about paranormal romance in the latest issue of the SFWA Bulletin (pub of the Science Fiction &amp; Fantasy Writers of America)&#8211;I wonder if an influx of sf/f writers into romance will happen?</p>
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		<title>By: RfP</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 30 Sep 2008 15:14:15 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;blockquote&gt;I have never seen — in my own personal world view — SciFi in any form as a platform for reforming society or whatever other Great Notion is out there.&lt;/blockquote&gt;A platform for reform is completely different from commentary.  A platform sounds more along the lines of &lt;a href=&quot;http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Scientology&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;L Ron Hubbard&lt;/a&gt;, which... yuck.

As others have said above, there&#039;s what the author knows and what the reader needs to know.  When the author doesn&#039;t know enough about how the world works, it shows, and the story&#039;s believability suffers.  When the reader knows too much, the story gets lost in the detail.

Different kinds of detail matter too.  I don&#039;t love the CL Wilson books in part because I find them over-detailed in inane ways.  In &lt;i&gt;Lord of the Fading Lands&lt;/i&gt; I&#039;d appreciate less attention to clothing and *more* on how the world&#039;s politics work.  Both action and character development can be interrupted by the &lt;a href=&quot;http://www.readforpleasure.com/2007/12/cl-wilson-lord-of-fading-lands.html&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;wrong kind of detail&lt;/a&gt;:&lt;blockquote cite=&quot;http://www.readforpleasure.com/2007/12/cl-wilson-lord-of-fading-lands.html&quot;&gt;an important courtroom scene includes a lengthy description1 of Rain’s clothes. It doesn’t say anything new—we know he&#039;s handsome, wealthy, and powerful—so rather than the fashion report, I’d like to see the legal and political interludes developed farther. These scenes are crucial to illuminate inter-kingdom politics, and to explain the villains.&lt;/blockquote&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<blockquote><p>I have never seen — in my own personal world view — SciFi in any form as a platform for reforming society or whatever other Great Notion is out there.</p></blockquote>
<p>A platform for reform is completely different from commentary.  A platform sounds more along the lines of <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Scientology" rel="nofollow">L Ron Hubbard</a>, which&#8230; yuck.</p>
<p>As others have said above, there&#8217;s what the author knows and what the reader needs to know.  When the author doesn&#8217;t know enough about how the world works, it shows, and the story&#8217;s believability suffers.  When the reader knows too much, the story gets lost in the detail.</p>
<p>Different kinds of detail matter too.  I don&#8217;t love the CL Wilson books in part because I find them over-detailed in inane ways.  In <i>Lord of the Fading Lands</i> I&#8217;d appreciate less attention to clothing and *more* on how the world&#8217;s politics work.  Both action and character development can be interrupted by the <a href="http://www.readforpleasure.com/2007/12/cl-wilson-lord-of-fading-lands.html" rel="nofollow">wrong kind of detail</a>:<br />
<blockquote cite="http://www.readforpleasure.com/2007/12/cl-wilson-lord-of-fading-lands.html">an important courtroom scene includes a lengthy description1 of Rain’s clothes. It doesn’t say anything new—we know he&#8217;s handsome, wealthy, and powerful—so rather than the fashion report, I’d like to see the legal and political interludes developed farther. These scenes are crucial to illuminate inter-kingdom politics, and to explain the villains.</p></blockquote>
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		<title>By: JulieLeto</title>
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		<dc:creator>JulieLeto</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 30 Sep 2008 14:57:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>As my critique partner is Susan Kearney, I read a lot of futuristic romance.  Sue always deals in some way or another with the politics of her worlds, but as her books are not always set on Earth, I don&#039;t expect that everything she writes about is a political commentary, although she definitely has a lot of that in there.  Depends on her world.  I love space opera--am a HUGE Star Wars fan, but really...it&#039;s only the prequels (cough) that dealt with real politics.  The first three movies kept the politics very simple--Empire bad.  Rebellion good.  Senate non-existent.  And those movies kicked butt.  We didn&#039;t really need to know anything more.

So again, it goes back to what do you NEED to know.  Star Trek could never have been as popular as it is now without the political side of the stories.  But Star Wars did exceedingly well without it.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>As my critique partner is Susan Kearney, I read a lot of futuristic romance.  Sue always deals in some way or another with the politics of her worlds, but as her books are not always set on Earth, I don&#8217;t expect that everything she writes about is a political commentary, although she definitely has a lot of that in there.  Depends on her world.  I love space opera&#8211;am a HUGE Star Wars fan, but really&#8230;it&#8217;s only the prequels (cough) that dealt with real politics.  The first three movies kept the politics very simple&#8211;Empire bad.  Rebellion good.  Senate non-existent.  And those movies kicked butt.  We didn&#8217;t really need to know anything more.</p>
<p>So again, it goes back to what do you NEED to know.  Star Trek could never have been as popular as it is now without the political side of the stories.  But Star Wars did exceedingly well without it.</p>
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		<title>By: Angie</title>
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		<dc:creator>Angie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 30 Sep 2008 10:47:58 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I think the form of government is an important part of worldbuilding, and I want to see what sort of government the future setting has.  I don&#039;t think the story needs to dwell on it in excrutiating detail, nor does the external plot need to deal directly with politics and power, which is what Bujold was talking about, if the story is primarily a genre romance.  But if I finish a book and have no idea what sort of government the protag was living under, that&#039;s a fault IMO.  Who or what runs things, how power and controls are set up, where the boundaries are and where they can be pushed and how the power flow impacts individuals is &lt;i&gt;going&lt;/i&gt; to affect the characters.  We don&#039;t think about it a whole lot with the contemporary world because we&#039;ve lived immersed in it and move through it like a fish through water; we only notice it if something goes wrong or changes radically.  But although someone living in a future world probably won&#039;t specifically notice their government either, for the same reasons, &lt;i&gt;I&#039;m&lt;/i&gt; not familiar with it and it should become clear to me as I watch the character interact with the setting and the other characters how things work in their world, at least in general.

Completely ignoring politics and government and power distribution pretends that the characters live in a vacuum.  Unless they&#039;re literally stranded on a deserted planet, that&#039;s a glitch.  But it doesn&#039;t take much to flesh out the setting and give me the impression that the characters &lt;i&gt;do&lt;/i&gt; have a fully developed setting in which to move and act.

Angie</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I think the form of government is an important part of worldbuilding, and I want to see what sort of government the future setting has.  I don&#8217;t think the story needs to dwell on it in excrutiating detail, nor does the external plot need to deal directly with politics and power, which is what Bujold was talking about, if the story is primarily a genre romance.  But if I finish a book and have no idea what sort of government the protag was living under, that&#8217;s a fault IMO.  Who or what runs things, how power and controls are set up, where the boundaries are and where they can be pushed and how the power flow impacts individuals is <i>going</i> to affect the characters.  We don&#8217;t think about it a whole lot with the contemporary world because we&#8217;ve lived immersed in it and move through it like a fish through water; we only notice it if something goes wrong or changes radically.  But although someone living in a future world probably won&#8217;t specifically notice their government either, for the same reasons, <i>I&#8217;m</i> not familiar with it and it should become clear to me as I watch the character interact with the setting and the other characters how things work in their world, at least in general.</p>
<p>Completely ignoring politics and government and power distribution pretends that the characters live in a vacuum.  Unless they&#8217;re literally stranded on a deserted planet, that&#8217;s a glitch.  But it doesn&#8217;t take much to flesh out the setting and give me the impression that the characters <i>do</i> have a fully developed setting in which to move and act.</p>
<p>Angie</p>
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		<title>By: shenan</title>
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		<dc:creator>shenan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 30 Sep 2008 03:24:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>--- RIP says: • Whether there’s a guaranteed right to trial or simply a warrant/bounty system (Minority Report)
• How much privacy citizens have and whether there’s something like universal wiretap authority (JD Robb)
• Whether governments or corporations control trade (Ann Aguirre’s Grimspace)
• How minority populations are treated (Kit Whitfield’s Benighted/Bareback)


Yes, but there&#039;s a difference between tossing in tidbits (assuming that&#039;s the case in your examples) and writing a &quot;political fantasy.&quot;  

If people want to use fiction to advance theories or agendas or do whatever else floats their boat, that&#039;s fine.  That&#039;s great.  More power to them.  But I have never seen -- in my own personal world view -- SciFi in any form as a platform for reforming society or whatever other Great Notion is out there. Not interested, thanks.  And that&#039;s straight scifi.  For SciFi Romances, I read for the Romance.  Not the politics.  Not the world building.  For the characters first and the romance second.  So, no, I don&#039;t feel cheated if an author doesn&#039;t world build government systems.

shenan</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&#8212; RIP says: • Whether there’s a guaranteed right to trial or simply a warrant/bounty system (Minority Report)<br />
• How much privacy citizens have and whether there’s something like universal wiretap authority (JD Robb)<br />
• Whether governments or corporations control trade (Ann Aguirre’s Grimspace)<br />
• How minority populations are treated (Kit Whitfield’s Benighted/Bareback)</p>
<p>Yes, but there&#8217;s a difference between tossing in tidbits (assuming that&#8217;s the case in your examples) and writing a &#8220;political fantasy.&#8221;  </p>
<p>If people want to use fiction to advance theories or agendas or do whatever else floats their boat, that&#8217;s fine.  That&#8217;s great.  More power to them.  But I have never seen &#8212; in my own personal world view &#8212; SciFi in any form as a platform for reforming society or whatever other Great Notion is out there. Not interested, thanks.  And that&#8217;s straight scifi.  For SciFi Romances, I read for the Romance.  Not the politics.  Not the world building.  For the characters first and the romance second.  So, no, I don&#8217;t feel cheated if an author doesn&#8217;t world build government systems.</p>
<p>shenan</p>
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		<title>By: shenan</title>
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		<dc:creator>shenan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 30 Sep 2008 03:09:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>-- A. Sparrow says: politics will always influence every aspect of people’s lives, from the clothes they wear (do we have good relations with a place that grows cotton? Do we have petrochemicals for synthetics?) to the food they eat (what can be imported?) to the way they live their lives (are they closeted or open? Fearful of neighbors or expansive?).


No offense, but I don&#039;t care about any of that.  It bogs the story down for me if an author goes into where a character&#039;s clothes come from or what politics has to do with someone stealing someone&#039;s truck.  As far as it goes, just any old plot can bog a story down for me if the plot becomes the story.  I read for characters.  Even if I&#039;m actually interested in the plot itself, I still need characters worth caring about to make the plot worth caring about.  (And really, as much as I loved West Wing, I loved it for the characters.  The politics in the episodes were at best a necessary evil.  And frankly, I didn&#039;t pay attention to the political details.)

shenan</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&#8211; A. Sparrow says: politics will always influence every aspect of people’s lives, from the clothes they wear (do we have good relations with a place that grows cotton? Do we have petrochemicals for synthetics?) to the food they eat (what can be imported?) to the way they live their lives (are they closeted or open? Fearful of neighbors or expansive?).</p>
<p>No offense, but I don&#8217;t care about any of that.  It bogs the story down for me if an author goes into where a character&#8217;s clothes come from or what politics has to do with someone stealing someone&#8217;s truck.  As far as it goes, just any old plot can bog a story down for me if the plot becomes the story.  I read for characters.  Even if I&#8217;m actually interested in the plot itself, I still need characters worth caring about to make the plot worth caring about.  (And really, as much as I loved West Wing, I loved it for the characters.  The politics in the episodes were at best a necessary evil.  And frankly, I didn&#8217;t pay attention to the political details.)</p>
<p>shenan</p>
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