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	<title>Comments on: REVIEW: My Lord and Spymaster by Joanna Bourne</title>
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		<title>By: Joan Wicks</title>
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		<dc:creator>Joan Wicks</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 13 Feb 2009 14:50:13 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Love, love love Joanna Bourne&#039;s writing style. And if it wasn&#039;t for that, I would have stopped reading half-way through when she put Tower Bridge in a Regency novel. It may seem a small thing, but historical fiction, even historical romance should at least be accurate. Neverthless, I rolled my eyes and kept reading. She has a wonderful way of writing very close third-person POV that should be a exercise for all writers. Well-done.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Love, love love Joanna Bourne&#8217;s writing style. And if it wasn&#8217;t for that, I would have stopped reading half-way through when she put Tower Bridge in a Regency novel. It may seem a small thing, but historical fiction, even historical romance should at least be accurate. Neverthless, I rolled my eyes and kept reading. She has a wonderful way of writing very close third-person POV that should be a exercise for all writers. Well-done.</p>
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		<title>By: The many pleasures of My Lord and Spymaster &#124; abortive</title>
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		<dc:creator>The many pleasures of My Lord and Spymaster &#124; abortive</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 20 Jul 2008 15:39:55 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] As is my way, this will not be a proper review. However, my esteemed colleagues Katie(babs) at Ramblings on Romance and Ana at Booksmugglers have done excellent ones. And for a thoughtful dissenting opinion, see Jennie’s from Dear Author. [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] As is my way, this will not be a proper review. However, my esteemed colleagues Katie(babs) at Ramblings on Romance and Ana at Booksmugglers have done excellent ones. And for a thoughtful dissenting opinion, see Jennie’s from Dear Author. [...]</p>
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		<title>By: The many pleasures of My Lord and Spymaster &#124; salution</title>
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		<dc:creator>The many pleasures of My Lord and Spymaster &#124; salution</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 20 Jul 2008 13:35:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] As is my way, this will not be a proper review. However, my esteemed colleagues Katie(babs) at Ramblings on Romance and Ana at Booksmugglers have done excellent ones. And for a thoughtful dissenting opinion, see Jennie’s from Dear Author. [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] As is my way, this will not be a proper review. However, my esteemed colleagues Katie(babs) at Ramblings on Romance and Ana at Booksmugglers have done excellent ones. And for a thoughtful dissenting opinion, see Jennie’s from Dear Author. [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Jennie</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jennie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 07 Jul 2008 16:49:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>That&#039;s an interesting take - I hadn&#039;t really seen it as a failure in Ms. Bourne&#039;s writing that she presents Jess as strong and capable but then doesn&#039;t have her act that way. I&#039;ve been looking at it more as a choice by the author, to sacrifice the heroine&#039;s strength in favor of making the hero look stronger. But you may be right.

I dont&#039; remember the love scenes at all at this point, which may tell you something :-) - or it may not, because my memory for most aspects of a romance is about 36 hours at this point, and that&#039;s true even of romances I really like. But I think at this point in my reading career, love scenes never really stand out unless I&#039;m already quite emotionally invested in the h/h. Because of the problems I had with ML&amp;S, I wasn&#039;t able to achieve that level of attachment, so I doubt I had much reaction either way (though if Sebastian thought again about all he had to teach Jess, I&#039;m sure I rolled my eyes a bit).</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>That&#8217;s an interesting take &#8211; I hadn&#8217;t really seen it as a failure in Ms. Bourne&#8217;s writing that she presents Jess as strong and capable but then doesn&#8217;t have her act that way. I&#8217;ve been looking at it more as a choice by the author, to sacrifice the heroine&#8217;s strength in favor of making the hero look stronger. But you may be right.</p>
<p>I dont&#8217; remember the love scenes at all at this point, which may tell you something :-) &#8211; or it may not, because my memory for most aspects of a romance is about 36 hours at this point, and that&#8217;s true even of romances I really like. But I think at this point in my reading career, love scenes never really stand out unless I&#8217;m already quite emotionally invested in the h/h. Because of the problems I had with ML&amp;S, I wasn&#8217;t able to achieve that level of attachment, so I doubt I had much reaction either way (though if Sebastian thought again about all he had to teach Jess, I&#8217;m sure I rolled my eyes a bit).</p>
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		<title>By: Kim H</title>
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		<dc:creator>Kim H</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 07 Jul 2008 15:00:25 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I think Joanna Bourne is a truly gifted writer, but I still feel as though she hasn&#039;t quite developed her gift into all it can be.  Her story writing is among some of the best I&#039;ve seen, and it&#039;s always a thrill for me to see someone with her talent writing in the romance genre.  That said, I think she still has a ways to go in terms of finding the right balance between those excellent plots and the romance.  Part of what makes My Lord and Spymaster fall short is that the romance aspect of the story is rather weak.  I agree that the balance of power between the H&amp;H is lopsided, but I  don&#039;t believe Ms. Bourne necessarily intends it to be that way; she&#039;s giving us background to indicate her heroine is a strong, intelligent, and infinitely capable person - we just don&#039;t get to see any evidence to support that in her behavior.  I ultimately couldn&#039;t buy into Jess as being all the things the author tells me she was, when she needs the hero to come to her rescue every time she attempts to think or act for herself.  I also found the culmination of a lot of lovely sexual tension building to be a little flat.  That may be just me though:P  
I expected earth moving, fireworks, parades and brass bands marching through the bedroom, and felt the reality was only just so-so.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I think Joanna Bourne is a truly gifted writer, but I still feel as though she hasn&#8217;t quite developed her gift into all it can be.  Her story writing is among some of the best I&#8217;ve seen, and it&#8217;s always a thrill for me to see someone with her talent writing in the romance genre.  That said, I think she still has a ways to go in terms of finding the right balance between those excellent plots and the romance.  Part of what makes My Lord and Spymaster fall short is that the romance aspect of the story is rather weak.  I agree that the balance of power between the H&amp;H is lopsided, but I  don&#8217;t believe Ms. Bourne necessarily intends it to be that way; she&#8217;s giving us background to indicate her heroine is a strong, intelligent, and infinitely capable person &#8211; we just don&#8217;t get to see any evidence to support that in her behavior.  I ultimately couldn&#8217;t buy into Jess as being all the things the author tells me she was, when she needs the hero to come to her rescue every time she attempts to think or act for herself.  I also found the culmination of a lot of lovely sexual tension building to be a little flat.  That may be just me though:P<br />
I expected earth moving, fireworks, parades and brass bands marching through the bedroom, and felt the reality was only just so-so.</p>
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		<title>By: Dear Author Recommends for July &#124; Dear Author: Romance Book Reviews, Author Interviews, and Commentary</title>
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		<dc:creator>Dear Author Recommends for July &#124; Dear Author: Romance Book Reviews, Author Interviews, and Commentary</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 01 Jul 2008 19:21:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] My Lord and Spymaster by Joanna Bourne. Jennie&#8217;s review of this book dovetails mine only I would have given it a higher grade (a B instead of a C). Bourne&#8217;s quality of writing is superior enough that it overcomes some troublesome areas such as the imbalance of power between the hero and heroine. Even with its flaws, I think its the best of this months&#8217; historical crop. Jess Whitby is the daughter of a shipyard titan who has been taken into custody on suspicion of treason. Sebastian Kennett is a rival sea captain who is determined to see Whitby&#8217;s father pay for the death of Sebastian&#8217;s crew members. Jess must find the real traitor and fight off Sebastian at the same time. Read more of Jennie&#8217;s review here. [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] My Lord and Spymaster by Joanna Bourne. Jennie&#8217;s review of this book dovetails mine only I would have given it a higher grade (a B instead of a C). Bourne&#8217;s quality of writing is superior enough that it overcomes some troublesome areas such as the imbalance of power between the hero and heroine. Even with its flaws, I think its the best of this months&#8217; historical crop. Jess Whitby is the daughter of a shipyard titan who has been taken into custody on suspicion of treason. Sebastian Kennett is a rival sea captain who is determined to see Whitby&#8217;s father pay for the death of Sebastian&#8217;s crew members. Jess must find the real traitor and fight off Sebastian at the same time. Read more of Jennie&#8217;s review here. [...]</p>
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		<title>By: carolyn Jean</title>
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		<dc:creator>carolyn Jean</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 26 Jun 2008 02:05:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Oh, great description of the tipping point. Like being in love. And suddenly you&#039;re looking past the Zubaz.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Oh, great description of the tipping point. Like being in love. And suddenly you&#8217;re looking past the Zubaz.</p>
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		<title>By: Jennie</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jennie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 25 Jun 2008 23:32:18 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;blockquote&gt;I really got into this book. I love being in the spy world that Bourne creates, and while, intellectually, I see some of the points being made here, as well as the gripes on TSL, oh, I don’t know, I found myself thoroughly enchanted. Again!&lt;/blockquote&gt;

There are certainly books that I feel that way about. I love the sometimes-maligned early Patricia Gaffney romance &lt;em&gt;Lily&lt;/em&gt;. Sometimes I think I have sort of a tipping point beyond which I can&#039;t be very critical of a book, because I feel, as you put it, &quot;thoroughly enchanted&quot;. It&#039;s like being really, really in love - you might understand intellectually that your beloved has faults, but they don&#039;t bother you because he&#039;s just so dreamy! 

Obviously, I haven&#039;t felt that way about either of Bourne&#039;s books. I don&#039;t think it&#039;s just that they don&#039;t quite make it over that tipping point into total enchantment; I think it&#039;s specifically the flaws they possess which bother me more than they might bother another reader.

In a way, Bourne really is hard for me to grade, because I appreciate that there is intelligence in the writing of these books, and that they aren&#039;t rote or cookie-cutter. Considering how much I complain about rote, cookie-cutter romances and uninspired writing, it pains me to give Bourne a C. But I can only grade based on how much I liked a book as a whole - I can absolutely see why she&#039;d be an auto-buy for other readers (and there are a few popular authors I could never say that about!).</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<blockquote><p>I really got into this book. I love being in the spy world that Bourne creates, and while, intellectually, I see some of the points being made here, as well as the gripes on TSL, oh, I don’t know, I found myself thoroughly enchanted. Again!</p></blockquote>
<p>There are certainly books that I feel that way about. I love the sometimes-maligned early Patricia Gaffney romance <em>Lily</em>. Sometimes I think I have sort of a tipping point beyond which I can&#8217;t be very critical of a book, because I feel, as you put it, &#8220;thoroughly enchanted&#8221;. It&#8217;s like being really, really in love &#8211; you might understand intellectually that your beloved has faults, but they don&#8217;t bother you because he&#8217;s just so dreamy! </p>
<p>Obviously, I haven&#8217;t felt that way about either of Bourne&#8217;s books. I don&#8217;t think it&#8217;s just that they don&#8217;t quite make it over that tipping point into total enchantment; I think it&#8217;s specifically the flaws they possess which bother me more than they might bother another reader.</p>
<p>In a way, Bourne really is hard for me to grade, because I appreciate that there is intelligence in the writing of these books, and that they aren&#8217;t rote or cookie-cutter. Considering how much I complain about rote, cookie-cutter romances and uninspired writing, it pains me to give Bourne a C. But I can only grade based on how much I liked a book as a whole &#8211; I can absolutely see why she&#8217;d be an auto-buy for other readers (and there are a few popular authors I could never say that about!).</p>
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		<title>By: Janine</title>
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		<dc:creator>Janine</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 25 Jun 2008 19:13:39 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;blockquote&gt;However, to some extent it’s like saying that the chocolate raspberry cake didn’t have enough of the gooey chocolate versus the rice cakes which were bland and tasteless.&lt;/blockquote&gt;

I haven&#039;t read the book but my problem with chocolate raspberry cake is that I love chocolate but hate raspberries.  I always wish it didn&#039;t have the raspberries in it.  

And that&#039;s a pretty good metaphor for the way I felt about &lt;em&gt;The Spymaster&#039;s Lady&lt;/em&gt; -- loved the prose and the unusual set up, but was very frustrated by the unequal power dynamics and even more so, by the way I felt Annique was presented as something that she wasn&#039;t.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<blockquote><p>However, to some extent it’s like saying that the chocolate raspberry cake didn’t have enough of the gooey chocolate versus the rice cakes which were bland and tasteless.</p></blockquote>
<p>I haven&#8217;t read the book but my problem with chocolate raspberry cake is that I love chocolate but hate raspberries.  I always wish it didn&#8217;t have the raspberries in it.  </p>
<p>And that&#8217;s a pretty good metaphor for the way I felt about <em>The Spymaster&#8217;s Lady</em> &#8212; loved the prose and the unusual set up, but was very frustrated by the unequal power dynamics and even more so, by the way I felt Annique was presented as something that she wasn&#8217;t.</p>
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		<title>By: carolyn Jean</title>
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		<dc:creator>carolyn Jean</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 25 Jun 2008 18:02:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Oh, I really hate victimy heroines, too. I didn&#039;t find this heroine victimy. And the heroes aren&#039;t omniscient - in fact,  Jess unravels a mystery the heroes simply couldn&#039;t. Bourne has spoken about different kinds of power, and in a way, different kinds of power are being wielded by different characters here.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Oh, I really hate victimy heroines, too. I didn&#8217;t find this heroine victimy. And the heroes aren&#8217;t omniscient &#8211; in fact,  Jess unravels a mystery the heroes simply couldn&#8217;t. Bourne has spoken about different kinds of power, and in a way, different kinds of power are being wielded by different characters here.</p>
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