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REVIEW:  Faking It by Cora Carmack

REVIEW: Faking It by Cora Carmack

Cora Carmack Faking It

Dear Ms Carmack:

Your first book, Losing It, didn’t work for me at all. It was a combination of the character pairing (professor + student) and the plot (she’s a virgin).  Faking It worked a lot better.

Cade Winston is still reeling from his unrequited love interest turning to another man when  he receives a bizarre request at a local café. Mackenzie Miller needs and “sweet and nice” boyfriend to show off to her parents instead of the tattooed bad boy she’s been keeping company with.  Cade fits the bill. Cade is an aspiring actor and he plays the sweet and nice boyfriend role a little too well.

You’ve raised an amazing daughter.”

My father shook his hand and said, “Really?”

REALLY. He said really.

No, “Thank you” or “I know.” It took him a full five seconds before he smiled . . . like me being amazing was his doing. He said, “It’s nice to meet you, son.”

They’d already married me off.

Mackenzie’s voice was so relatable as a young woman at odds with her family.  She loved them, but she wasn’t living up to her parents’ expectations and they were too uptight and crazy for her. Cade, however, had managed in lest than fifteen minutes to completely win them over.  Thus, the charade had to continue.  The setup was cute and believable.  “In the war for my parents’ approval, I’d lost to a complete stranger.”  

But. God, there is always a but isn’t there?  The first chapter is told from Cade’s  point of view and he spent the whole time for mourning the loss of his love.   It was hard, as a reader, to immediately switch focus from the one that got away to Max (Mackenzie).  The first 20% of the book is that tiny window of time between Cade being struck with the news that his love was getting engaged to someone else and meeting Max.  I would have liked to have had some internal monologue helping me to ease the transition.  Later in the book, Bliss, the object of unrequited love, reappears and Cade still has some residual feelings for her which is perfectly normal and understandable. It’s just that this inhibited my buying into the HEA.

If the entire book could have been as fun and cute as the cafe, I would have  been in heaven.  However, Cade is challenged by his Hispanic sidekick, Milo, to get laid because Milo is tired of Cade’s depressed act. What is wrong with Cade and Milo going to the bar, finding Max singing with her band, and Cade taking her home without having his manhood challenged?

But every time I found myself mildly annoyed, I was refreshed by the gender reversal. Cade’s more straight laced (but not uptight) good guy portrayal juxtaposed against Max’s tattooed bad girl act was fun and different.  Max was often lusting after Cade, trying to suppress her hormones and her instinct to jump his bones.

The familial interaction that annoyed Max and enticed Cade highlighted not only their differences, but their losses.  Cade was hungry for parental interest and being part of a family unit whereas the family unit represented pain and produced anger in Max.  The scenes with Max’s parents provided both a source of conflict between Cade and Max and also were the stage for the funniest moments.  Cade was “Golden Boy” because he tries to be so perfect all the time and Max was “Angry Girl” because she tried to piss the most people off with the least amount of effort.

The book was most successful at its lighthearted moments although I fully bought into Cade’s bittersweet feelings toward Bliss and moving on.  Max’s dark moments came off more forced.  The tragedy of her past seemed pasted on and all too obvious.  Those complaints aside, this was a much stronger entry for me than the first in the “It” series and I’d definitely read another. C+

Best regards,

Jane

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REVIEW:  True by Erin McCarthy

REVIEW: True by Erin McCarthy

Note:  The comments are closed for this review. I’d direct you to the Dear Author Book Club pick for May for centralization of comments.

Dear Ms. McCarthy:

Rory  does one thing really well – school. Everything else, particularly the social scene and the interpersonal relationships with the opposite sex, she can’t quite grasp the nuances. Her two roommates in college, Jessica and Kylie, are the opposite, outgoing and uninhibited.  The three become close friends despite their differences. Jessica and Kylie want to help Rory lose her virginity and get a little experience with the opposite sex. Jessica even urges Rory to pursue Tyler, a hook up Jessica enjoyed.

True by Erin McCarthyThe casual nature of relationships that Jessica and Kylie enjoyed were a refreshing change.  Jessica’s enjoyment of random hookups that were presented without judgment read like the antithesis of slut shaming. (I’m particularly thrilled that the next book features Jessica as a heroine).  The ready circle of friends enjoyed by Rory and their drinking, casual drug use, and hookups all felt very authentic to me.

Tyler is putting himself through EMT school in order to provide the much needed financial support his brothers require given that his mother is a drunk and a drug addict.  Tyler’s situation is made particularly more challenging because one of his brothers is a Downs’ Syndrome sufferer and occasionally needs specialized care.

Despite being told in the first person, you get a real sense of Tyler as a person. While it is easy to measure Tyler by his tattoos and his flippancy, his personality is revealed through his actions toward his brothers, his care toward Rory, his awkwardness in front of her family. I thought some self snark was engaged when it was revealed that one of Tyler’s tattoos is a really poorly done batman.  Who hasn’t seen bad tattoos on the internet and cringed?

Rory’s dad is a professor and has no love for Tyler who he perceives as not good enough for Rory. He’s not going to college. He doesn’t have a full time job. His mother is a drug addict.

Rory has to learn to stand up for herself–against her roommates and their good deeds; her dad and his good intentions; and even Tyler himself.  Rory’s experience living on her own, away from her father, leads her to an understanding about her own privileges in life, privileges that Tyler did not enjoy, privileges that Tyler believes sets the two apart irreparably.

I thought the ending, while imperfect, was suited to the story.  There isn’t an easy way out for Tyler.  He suffers some serious consequences because of something that goes on in his life.

There are a few things that I could have done without.  Jessica and Kylie try to hire someone to rid Rory of her virginity and that read faintly ridiculous to me.  I wished the Downs Syndrome character would have been presented a little more inclusively.  Rory was almost too innocent for me. She proclaimed to have never even seen a penis before and that, well, that stretched my credulity.  But for the most part, I appreciated the chances that this book took.  That it presented females in a positive light, represented college experiences fairly authentically, and ended unexpectedly.  B

Best regards,

Jane

P.S. For those who wonder about the sensuality content, it’s light.

 

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