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REVIEW:  Shadows and Strongholds by Elizabeth Chadwick

REVIEW: Shadows and Strongholds by Elizabeth Chadwick


“Ten-year-old Brunin FitzWarin is an awkward misfit in his own family. As an act of encouragement, his father sends him to be fostered as a knight in the household of Joscelin, Lord of Ludlow. Here he meets the lord’s youngest daughter, Hawise, and a strong friendship is formed.

When Brunin aids his lord in supporting Prince Henry in his battle against King Stephen for the English crown, his own land comes under threat. As the war for the crown and the land rages, Brunin must defeat the shadows of his childhood and put to use all he has learned, confronting his future head on.”

Dear Ms. Chadwick,

The re release of your novel neatly coincided with my realization that I haven’t read many medievals lately and a reading experience was born. Why haven’t I read more of your books? Maybe because I’m dumb? I dunno but I’ve got to do better and I will, I promise!

Shadows and Strongholds by Elizabeth Chadwick“Shadows and Strongholds” is packed with lots of little details about medieval life – the Shrewsbury Fair with it’s haggling, buying and selling, how young women were trained in healthcare – because you never know when you’re going to have to remove a lance head from your husband, and to be chatelaines – those linens won’t embroider themselves, attending a royal court – if you’re not forced to stay in a tent then you’re doing well but – thank you! – not a mayhap or prithee throughout the book. And what would a medieval be without lots of fighting and slugging it out to gain land and estates? The various ebbs and flows show just how important this was as a means to power and prestige. It gained one allies, strength and protection. One never yielded an inch because to do so would appear weak. The situation of these families – on the Welsh border and during the final years of the civil war – set them up for lots of conflict. I loved the neat touch about how the dispute over Ludlow is settled using something Henry becomes known for – reasoned decisions vs fighting.

The Stephan/Matilda civil war is simmering down during Brunin’s time as a squire and soon action has turned to one of my favorite English monarchs, King Henry II, and his war against the Welsh + his tricky pledges to his English knights to further consolidate his own power. But then times were hard which demanded that the people be harder. Enter Brunin’s grandmother. Lady Mellette is a dragon in female form – a sword sharp tongue in a fiercely proud woman who looks to outlive them all. I’ve run into people like this – whose main pleasure in life is belittling and grinding down others. As someone in the book says, she has the ability and the desire to wound. But she’s also got royal blood – albeit bastard – in an age when this meant something and is a daughter of a noble family that will only rise further though displays of iron will. She’s not weak, as neither are Joscelin’s wife Sybilla and Hawise, because they can’t be anything less.

Ties run deep in the story – both good and bad. Fulk trusts Joscelin to bring out the best in his eldest son and their bonds are strengthened by the marriage – though how can someone own a half share in a castle? The dispute between the various claimants for Ludlow Castle has kept them at each others throats for decades. Watching Brunin learn to be a good squire and knight teaches the reader without ponderous lectures in how it happened. These are men who are tough as leather well into their middle age – still able to fight with sword and lance – and often needing to too. I liked the good descriptions of Brunin while fighting – calm and controlled in battle with everything seeming to slow down in the moment. But there was more to holding a castle or manor than swinging a sword which is shown in the post engagement lessons passed on from Joscelin to Brunin – honor your dead and support the families of your dependents – and in the way Brunin’s younger brother Ralf realizes from watching Brunin all the management details a lord needs to consider in order to hold what is his.

I think one of the reasons I’ve historically shied away from medievals is my perception of the imbalance of male/female power but this book, with its strong women, puts paid to that. Lady Mellette apparently gave her arranged marriage husband hell which contrasts to the strength of the de Dinan and Fitzwarin marriages. Fulk and Eve don’t show romantic love much – theirs seemed to be more a steady relationship based on familiarity though Fulk’s reaction to Eve’s death might belay this. Joscelin and Sybilla show the strength of an arranged and royally ordered union that over the years turns into true love – though tempered with fights and arguments at times. Still, that marriage stands the test of bad times, and good ones. I noticed how Sybilla, who has only given birth to daughters, worries about the prospect of divorce after Louis of France divorces his queen Eleanor for that very reason. Later, Sybilla’s reaction after the king’s decision over Ludlow speaks volumes about her love for Joscelin even if she hadn’t said a word to him. Others might have warned him before he married her that her tongue was sharp and she’d give him all he could take but in her inner steel, he finds his compliment, his consort battleship. Even Fulk, married to beautiful Eve, seems to envy Joscelin at times.

Cecily’s marriage story tells a different tale. She does have respect but no love from her husband who cares more for his dogs and who was thinking of becoming a monk. I idly wondered what would have happened to her if this had happened. As the character arc of one woman shaped up, I was a twinge disappointed when she followed the path I guestimated that she’d probably take. Her ending was well earned though, like Brunin, I felt a little pity for one so weak and idiotic. However, she made her bed and I wasn’t sorry to see her lie in it.

Then comes Brunin and Hawise – from all appearances, we can hope that they will take after her parents. Natural young lust begins to flow into something deeper and more mature as they carefully pick their way through the minefield of their differing way of expressing emotions. But all these people lived so differently than we can imagine – much more publicly with few moments for real privacy. That plus fealty owed his lord and teachings of the Church puts a damper on Brunin’s lusty thoughts before he and Hawise marry. Meanwhile she urges quicker marriage in order to be able to express her feelings and desires. I like that neither starts passionately in love with the other. Instead they are old childhood friends and have no objections to a good, mutual match which flowers under the willingness of each to foster the kind of relationship they’ve watched over the years at Ludlow. It’s give and take, strength matched to injury and the careful nurturing needed to weather the long run. I enjoyed watching them work out their feelings and the beginnings of how this marriage is going to go.

So, a energetic and realistic view of medieval life plus a wide spectrum of differing marriages which show an equal power balance very much to my liking and fighting. Yeah, I’ve been away from your books far too long. A-



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REVIEW:  Never Seduce a Scot by Maya Banks

REVIEW: Never Seduce a Scot by Maya Banks

Dear Ms. Banks:

I read this book on recommendation from a friend of mine whose description of it brought me back to my early days of reading romances when Julie Garwood and Amanda Quick were my staples. I gulped the book down in one evening. It’s totally sudsy fun. These are not historically accurate masterpieces but they are romantic even while being transparently emotionally manipulative. The story works  well because the reader wants both characters to achieve their reward.

Never Seduce a Scot Maya BanksGraeme Montgomery and Tavis Armstrong are the chiefs of rival clans. They’ve been feuding for generations and the animosity is still thick with Tavis’ father having killed Graeme’s. The King of Scotland, however, desires for these two powerful clans to enter into a truce. He’s got worries enough from the border and the English and therefore decreed that Tavis’ daughter, Eveline, shall marry Graeme.

While they both protest this mandate, they agree to carry out the king’s dictates. Tavis and his family is distraught because they view Eveline as their heart and believe that she is likely to be mistreated by the Montgomery clan. Eveline hasn’t been able to hear for three years nor has she spoken leading her family to believe that she is daft.

Eveline was betrothed to Ian McHugh, the son of a clan chief with whom Tavis wanted an alliance. Ian would present a false face to the rest of the world, but to Eveline he promised cruelty and unspeakable degradation. Fearing this, Eveline ran away on her horse which threw her. She lay in a ravine for three days and when she was finally found, she was insensible. After a month or so of fever, Eveline recovered but she was too fearful to tell her family what happened and when Ian cried off, she thought remaining mute and not revealing her deafness would save her. It did but it also led her family and her clan to make up erroneous conclusions about her.

Graeme resigns himself to this marriage, knowing that his lineage will not be carried on. There was no way he would force himself on a woman without her full consent and he believes that Eveline, the daft, would not be able to consent. Plus, the idea of marrying a hated enemy is anathema to him and his family.

When Graeme arrives, his deep baritone is felt by Eveline. Low voices, rumbly voices, emit a vibration that Eveline can almost hear. She views her marriage to Graeme as a second chance.  It is her willingness to marry Graeme that begins the changes in him and in the blood feud.   Throughout the book, Eveline is treated terribly from nearly all but Graeme and Graeme’s sister. This provides the pathos and the conflict in the book which is good because Graeme is the sweetest guy ever and their romance has little conflict.  There is actually no sustained conflict as each barrier is easily overcome.

Eveline is put through the ringer. Not only was she potentially prey to a sadist but she was injured and became deaf.  She is afraid to talk because she can’t hear herself speak, can’t modulate the tone of her voice.  While she taught herself to lip read, that’s a boon and a curse.  She can read all the insults that are being said about her.  She’s willing to work hard to be the chief’s wife, but allows herself to be taken advantage of.  For me, each heaping spoonful of abuse was offset by Graeme’s sweetness.  (Graeme is such an honorable guy that he decides that he will likely be celibate during his marriage, not wanting to dishonor his wife by bedding other women in the clan).  It’s not a formula that will work for every one.

I thought the deafness was well done.  Because Eveline can’t hear, she isn’t aware of what goes on around her and she can’t give off the appropriate emotional cues.  This is, in large part, what leads people to think she is “defective.”  She can’t always read the lips of people and must be directly in front of them.  In one scene, she had a candle held up to the lips of the speaker because it was too dark to read the lips. When her sister in law declares she wants to read and write, Eveline realizes that learning this skill would open the world up for her in terms of communication. However, Eveline’s easy adoption of speech again was disappointing.

As I said in the opening, this book is sudsy fun but lack of historical accuracy, the over the top abuse suffered by Eveline, and the easy resolution of seemingly every conflict may be offputting for some readers. C+

Best regards,


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