Literary Criticism

First Page: Cupid’s Love (Working Title)

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** Genre: Contemporary Romance with a paranormal twist Prue Harrison didn’t know which was worse, dealing with this bride or(…)

First Page: Unnamed Historical

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** London December, 1845 She was beautiful, as far as whores went. Skin luminescent beneath a layer of artfully applied(…)

First Page Saturday: Unnamed Contemporary

“I am not disgusting.” Quinn stood naked in front of the mirror. She had four choices. A.) Hate her body B.) Love her body C.) Be reasonably dissatisfied D.) Indifference Naked was not a good look for everybody, but today she wouldn't consider option A. Option A had almost killed her plenty of times. She'd(…)

First Page Saturday: Broken Flight. Paranormal Romance.

Who says an angel can't rock a broken wing. Yeah. That would have been her retort to her current and unbelievable predicament if she hadn't suppressed her sarcasm years ago and if she weren't scared for her life. Life? Pretty funny considering she'd already died. So, yeah, she was dead but she was also shaking(…)

Saturday First Page: Fantasy historical

Percy Wilkes grimly clamped a cheroot between his teeth as he waited for the alpha to acknowledge him.   An affectation, merely.   The wolves were averse to cigarette smoke and other unnatural scents.   Natural scents were bombardment enough. "Do you smoke, solitary?" the alpha asked mildly, his pale brows lifted inquisitively.   "Shall I procure a light(…)

First Page: Victorian era historical

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** Trumbull left his brothers house without a backward glance. The past month had sent his life into a spiral(…)

Author Camaraderie and Negative Reviews

Author Camaraderie and Negative Reviews

I've been putting off writing this post for months! Everyone with an opinion has already weighed in, and we're all sick to death of the subject, but I said I would tackle it so here I am. A day late and a dollar short, as usual. The first thing I want to say is that(…)

First Page: Urban Fantasy Paranormal Suspense

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** Stakkholtsgja, Iceland 1705 Alarr gazed down the precipice. He, an assassin's assassin, hunted among the sharp shadows cast by(…)

On Bloggers, Reviewers, and Readers. #Ivegotyourback

I’ve been reading some posts about this YAMafia theory running around the internet. Regular readers of Dear Author should be very familiar with this given the past history in romance. It’s almost a relief to see the “be nice” mantra being preached outside of romance. Huzzah, all fandoms are dysfunctional. Essentially the theory is that(…)

First Page: Paranormal Romance — Guarding the Waters

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** This felt like the end of the earth, but Duncan Sinclair had stopped being surprised by how many ends(…)

First Page Saturday: Untitled Contemporary Romance

"I've crunched the numbers. Double, triple crunched and without a major influx of capital, you're going to lose the company." Douglas Hamilton exhaled deeply. It wasn't a surprise, but until he had heard his accountant, Adam Richards, articulate his company's verdict, there had still been hope. "I'm sorry Douglas," Adam offered. "The recession has hit(…)

FIRST PAGE SATURDAY: Untitled Women’s Fiction

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page to be read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** "I bet they made love in here. They'd finish dessert and he'd lift her up on the(…)

First Page: JESSICA’S GAME

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** Jessica Marie Havemeyer knew when to let the curtain fall. And at two in the morning, thirty-five minutes after(…)

First Page: Coming of Age/Romance

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** I'd been a salesman for Live Well for close to a year when I started hearing rumors. After collecting(…)

First Page: Unnamed Contemporary Romance

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** "Don't move your lips when you talk," her sister said from under the blanket in the back seat. "They(…)