Feb 11 2012
Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** New York City, Manhattan, somewhere between So-Ho and Hell’s Kitchen: What are the chances of not only finding yourself(…)
Feb 4 2012
Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** Stop and smell the roses, for tomorrow they may be dead. Chapter 1 The tribal drum thumps in my(…)
Jan 28 2012
Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** Blue’s boots sunk into the sand. A gust hurled even more curls into her face. She paused and tightened her(…)
Jan 21 2012
Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** Chapter 1 - Malta 1804 If I needed someone to slit a throat or steal a purse, Eaton thought, I(…)
Jan 14 2012
Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** Finley stepped out of the terminal and caught the smell of the Atlantic even before the glass doors had(…)
Jan 7 2012
Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** The horse’s hooves thunder across the hillside, and with each bunching of its muscles, I feel my heart pound.(…)
Dec 31 2011
Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** For as long as Cali could remember she’d had the good angel, bad devil thing going on. Of(…)
Dec 24 2011
Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** Lukas von Rainer was at the hotel bar with his fellow Wardens when the priest passed. Everyone’s eye was(…)
Dec 17 2011
Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** Essex, England 1789 Elsie picked another flower. Her fist was full of them already, but she didn’t want to(…)
Dec 10 2011
Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** Sweat dripped down my forehead. My hair hung damp in my face, a limp version of its former self.(…)
Dec 3 2011
Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** Reginald Beckett—England 1790 Like casualties of war, fallen on the field of battle, the glasses were laid out across(…)
Nov 26 2011
Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** City of Lundun, province of Brittania, United Empire. 27 Janvier, 3.021 AGD In Silas Marrack’s opinion—which concurred with the(…)
Nov 12 2011
Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** Author describes this as “women’s fiction with elements of romance and suspense.” Beginning of first chapter in Circling Great Wharf:(…)
Nov 5 2011
Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. **** The following is an explicit excerpt. Please do not click if this will make you uncomfortable. Send to Kindle
Oct 28 2011
Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** Update: You guys, I messed up. The author sent me a revised version and I put up the unrevised(…)
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