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REVIEW: Spider Touched by Jory Strong

Dear Ms. Strong:

I like this book and I think it has great worldbuilding, but my big takeaway was “if I never read cuntlips again, I’ll die a happy reader.” On to the story.

Spider Touched is the second in the urban fantasy series started with Ghostland. I think that my understanding of this complex world was aided by my having read Ghostland. For those not familiar with the series, some of the world building concepts might be confusing.

Araña is a seer with a curse or gift, depending your point of view. She has the mark of a spider that migrates over her body. The mark is lethal and provides both protection and isolation. Protection because no one can touch her against her will and isolation because she cannot control the mark, making her poison for any loved one. Araña found a home with two gentlemen who are a type of privateers and have prices on their head. Erik has contracted a terrible illness and so, risking their lives, the three dock in Oakland to seek help. Araña finds herself alone, separated from Erik and Matthew, and soon she is captured.

Tir is a demon who has been bound through the years to different masters, coerced to do their will. He has one thought and that is to wreak revenge upon those who have sought to use him for their own means.

I thought that there was some play on the concept of submission but it was never fully formed. In other words, Tir who has spent his whole life answering to others wanted dominance over Araña. At some level, Araña and Tir are emotionally simplistic. Both burn for revenge, but Araña’s is touched by the need for affection while Tir is more focused. They both work together to find the key to the sigil-inscribed collar that controls Tir’s life.

There were many concepts that overlay the story: the churches hunt against the gifted, a type of colliseum-like entertainment where the gifted are forced perform to the death for the non gifted, the conglomeration of gifted includes vampires, shapeshifters, demons, angels, witches, (and probably more I am forgetting).

Many of Araña’s successes in this story are convenient. For example, she knows how to win the gifted gladiator entertainment event because she had met someone in her past had told her so many times about his run through the maze and subsequent escape that she captured the maze in detail on paper with ink and lead. Conveniently, Araña’s poison is nothing against Tir for he is Spider Touched in his own way.

The alternate world of Oakland with its complicated politics and magic is well drawn and each time I open these stories, I do feel transported into an entirely different dimension. These stories are a true blend of romance and urban fantasy because the conflict between Araña and Tir rests, in large part, upon the worldbuilding premise itself. In other words, you cannot take Araña and Tir out of this world setting and into a different setting and have the same dynamic. The mystery of Araña’s curse and Tir’s captivity provides the impetus to move forward through the story.

As a further plus, the story is very sexy. My complaint in the previous book was that th sex scenes seemed inconsistent in tone with the rest of the story but this time, i felt that there was a better blending of the sex scenes with the rest of the book. (although, as stated in the lede, I cannot stand the phrase “cunt lips”).

I make this recommendation qualified because there are many flaws but the blending of UF with romance is really well done and I don’t see a lot of this type of fantasy romance tale on the market.   It’s dark and death seems imminent on every corner.   I do think that this is a series that should be read in order because some of the worldbuilding in book 2 could be a spoiler for book 1. There is something building as the power struggle between the higher beings sees itself played out in each individual coupling. Knowing what the power struggle is can be a spoiler.   B-

Best regards,


This book can be purchased in trade Amazon or in ebook format from Sony or other etailers.

Dear Author Recommends for August

Dear Author Recommends for August

459206Starting this month, all of the Dear Author recommended reads will be given a discount at digital bookseller, Books on Board.   The discount page is here. (In the future, we’ll always try to post this on Tuesday so you can get the discount the day of the release).

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  • Mistletoe Mommy by Tanya Michaels (recommended by Jayne who also recommends forgetting what the title is because it has nothing to do with Mommy or Christmas)
  • One Week As Lovers by Victoria Dahl (recommended by Janet/Robin and no, I don’t know what it will take for Victoria Dahl to get an A here at Dear Author)
  • Goddess of the Hunt by Tessa Dare (recommended by Jane because I loved the immature, big hearted Lucy who had to have that fearless belief in life in order to bring about the brooding Jeremy).
  • Beloved Vampire by Joey Hill (recommended by Jane. The review will come at noon. Needless to say its a star crossed lover + vampire + love saves people story with a dark edge).
  • Since the Surrender by Julie Anne Long (recommended by Jane because even with the plot flaws and the WTFery sex scene, I still loved the characterizations).
  • Beyond the Rain by Jess Granger (this is a qualified rec by Jane. It was a very good SFR that was accessible but slow in some places. It’s a trade but if it were in mass market, it would be an unqualified rec. This one is not in ebook form and therefore not available under the discount).
  • Spider Touched by Jory Strong (I’m giving this the same qualified rec. The detail that Jory Strong has brought to her new alternative urban fantasy romance is amazing and I love that she uses the world to provide the basis of the conflict but it’s a trade).