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First Page: First page from YA paranormal Balancer

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** Ellen…4months ago The core of it all was that the girl had to get my heart; that part was(…)

First Page:  Unnamed Fantasy

First Page: Unnamed Fantasy

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. ***   Mists of time, morning mists; both dim that long ago memory of a dawn when I was both(…)

First Page:  Duncan, a Paranormal Romance

First Page: Duncan, a Paranormal Romance

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. ***   Why didn’t the Fomhoire ever just walk up to him and tap him on the shoulder? They would(…)

First Page:  YA Paranormal Romance

First Page: YA Paranormal Romance

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** As Cindy turns the car sharply around the corner, the force presses me against the window.  The speed demon can’t(…)

First Page: In the Company of Stones — Historical Fantasy

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. ***  Centila opened and closed her fingers, staring at the wagon cover arching overhead. There, black eagles winged through a(…)

First Page: Unnamed Historical Romance

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** Coastal Maine May 1851  The scent of the sea wafting in through the tavern’s open window did little to(…)

First Page:  M/M Historical Romance

First Page: M/M Historical Romance

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** The sun was too goddamned bright. The afternoon, for that matter, too cold and windy. The wood plank under(…)

First Page:  DARK HOUSES – YA Dystopian

First Page: DARK HOUSES – YA Dystopian

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** The forest was noisy. Wind ruffled the leaves, birds sang, and something small and innocent scurried through the duff(…)

First Page: Romantic Fantasy

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** I jolted awake when the ice water hit my face. Blinding pain radiated out from my side when I(…)

First Page: Historical m/m

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** Lucius Sentius Camillianus, Camillianus to his friends, Lucius to his family, armed with urgent news, marched across the city(…)

First Page:  Unnamed Paranormal Romance

First Page: Unnamed Paranormal Romance

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** Slam. Slam. Slam. The sound of heavy doors closing had Madi glancing around the parking garage, trying to find the(…)

First Page: Safe, Sane and Supernatural

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** Genre: Urban fantasy The Great Witch of Manhattan took another sip of her drink. Even in the harsh summer(…)

First Page: Unnamed Fantasy

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** The hill went up and down and up and down the hill went a girl. She was tall and(…)

First Page: Book of Magical Wars: Tale one, The Cave

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** Water dripped from the stalactites above the fire pit and added a mist to the smoky haze in the cave.(…)

First Page: Unnamed Fantasy

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** I am in Hell! Literally. I am a spirit, a ghost, drifting endlessly, aimlessly, from one end of Hades(…)