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First Page: Unpublished manuscript

First Page: Unpublished manuscript

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First Page: Gemma and the Earl

First Page: Gemma and the Earl

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First Page: The Bluebell Girl

First Page: The Bluebell Girl

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First Page: Pierre and Claire / Historical Fiction

First Page: Pierre and Claire / Historical Fiction

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First Page: Ghost of a Chance

First Page: Ghost of a Chance

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First Page: More Of You / Contemporary

First Page: More Of You / Contemporary

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First Page: Captive of Her Heart (Historical)

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First Page: Unpublished manuscript / Contemporary

First Page: Unpublished manuscript / Contemporary

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First Page: Love’s Little Gator Bites~working title

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First Page: Falling Into You / Contemporary

First Page: Falling Into You / Contemporary

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First Page: Bad Magic

First Page: Bad Magic

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First Page: Kusanagi: Song of Death (action/adventure)

First Page: Kusanagi: Song of Death (action/adventure)

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First Page: unpublished manuscript (chick lit mystery)

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First Page: Breaker

First Page: Breaker

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First Page: Coming to Terms

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