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		<title>All About the Excerpt</title>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 12 Dec 2010 10:00:39 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Jane</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[I don&#8217;t agree with everything in this article but this sentence in the third to the last paragraph really struck a chord with me as readers and authors grapple with the price (as opposed to value) of ebooks. The two most common ways people acquire books today are borrowing from a library and borrowing from [...]
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<p>I don&#8217;t agree with everything <a href="http://paidcontent.org/article/419-the-ultimate-effect-of-google-e-books-a-new-ad-supported-model-for-book/">in this article</a> but this sentence in the third to the last paragraph really struck a chord with me as readers and authors grapple with the price (as opposed to value) of ebooks.</p>
<blockquote><p>The two most common ways people acquire books today are borrowing from a  library and borrowing from a friend. There are several reasons for  that; economically, a principal reason for this is that until you&#39;ve  read a book you can&#39;t be sure whether it&#39;s worth the price printed on  the book&#39;s jacket, so you prefer to get the book for free when possible.</p></blockquote>
<p>One reason that word of mouth is so successful as a selling tool is that someone else is vouching that the book <em>is</em> worth the retail price.&nbsp;  But what about books that no one is talking about or that no trusted source will vouch for?&nbsp;  That&#8217;s the purpose of excerpts.</p>
<p>If you look at <a href="http://dearauthor.com/wordpress/2010/12/08/wednesday-midday-links-what-kind-of-author-promotion-works-for-you/">this thread</a> on what readers want from authors in terms of promotion, most of them point to the work itself.&nbsp;  Readers really want excerpts. The question is what kind of excerpt?&nbsp;  For me, there are three kinds of excerpts:</p>
<p>1.&nbsp;  <em>The retail excerpt.</em> With ebooks, we often have the opportunity to download a sample to our devices. Samples can vary from retailer to retailer.&nbsp;  For example, <em>Dukes to the Right of Me, Princes to the Left</em> by Kieran Kramer yields no color cover, the acknowledgments, table of contents, and the first chapter and part of the second.&nbsp;  Strangely, the sample ends at different places from each retailer.&nbsp;  Amazon&#8217;s sample has 678 more words than the BN sample and 795 more words than the Google Books sample.</p>
<p>Balto and The Great Race is a book my daughter brought home from school (kind of a thrilling real life story about an amazing dog).&nbsp;  She downloaded the sample on the Colornook.&nbsp;  The sample is very revealing in that it shows that it&#8217;s not a book worth downloading.&nbsp;  Why not? Because the images are not scalable.&nbsp;  <a href="http://dearauthor.wpengine.netdna-cdn.com/wordpress/wp-content/uploads/2010/12/Screen-shot-2010-12-11-at-11.16.20-PM.png" rel="prettyPhoto[24624]">Here is a full image </a>of what the illustration looks like on my Mac which is larger than the screen size on my Colornook.&nbsp;  The Kindle sample exhibits the same problems.</p>
<p>This sample is also illustrative of two things the publisher did wrong.&nbsp;  First it showed how unfriendly the digital book is for digital readers.&nbsp;  Second, the excerpt contains two illustrations, a one page foreward and one page in chapter one.&nbsp;  Assuming that samples and excerpts are provided in an effort to increase sales, this sample is in opposition to that goal.</p>
<p>2. <em>Author excerpt.</em> We receive about 3 to 4 author review requests a day.&nbsp;  These are requests sent directly to us by the author and not from a publishing house or a publicist.&nbsp;  Because of this, I tend to see a lot of author websites, but oftentimes, these sites will not have excerpts of their work. I find this astonishing.&nbsp;  Additionally, I find that excerpts are often hard to read. Courtney Milan&#8217;s books all have excerpts and the <a href="http://www.courtneymilan.com/unv-excerpt.php">excerpts are displayed</a> on a white background making it easy to read.&nbsp;  Milan does not have the excerpt available as PDF download. Anne Stuart is <a href="http://www.anne-stuart.com/excerpt_SilverFalls.html">another author who has well formatted,</a> easy to read excerpts.</p>
<p><a href="http://moriahjovan.com/mojo/">Moriah Jovan offers excerpts as a download</a>.&nbsp;  You can get up to 34 pages of her book formatted for your favorite reading device.&nbsp;  She offers, html, epub, PDF, and prc (for the Kindle).</p>
<p><img class="aligncenter size-full wp-image-24627" title="Moriah Jovan excerpt" src="http://dearauthor.wpengine.netdna-cdn.com/wordpress/wp-content/uploads/2010/12/Screen-shot-2010-12-11-at-11.45.55-PM.png" alt="Moriah Jovan excerpt" width="296" height="83" /></p>
<p>Fiona McGier, however, is an author whose <a href="http://www.fionamcgier.com/reyes-romance-1.html">website offers no excerpts.</a> Further, the link on her site to her publisher&#8217;s bookstore doesn&#8217;t go directly to her book, but the general website even though the publisher does host an <a href="http://www.wingsepress.com/excerpts/Never%20Too%20Old%20For%20The%20Game%20Of%20Love.htm">excerpt for the book</a>.</p>
<p>3.&nbsp;  <em>Publisher excerpts.</em> HarperCollins allows you to read about 20% of some of its books but I can&#8217;t figure out from looking at the Avon Romance site which ones had excerpts and <a href="http://www.avonromance.com/book/a-most-scandalous-engagement/">which did not</a>.&nbsp;  Berkley/Jove offers PDF downloads (although it isn&#8217;t noted that the link is a PDF download) but what you get as an excerpt might be an uncorrected proof as is the case with <a href="http://berkleyjoveauthors.com/book1764">Robin Owens&#8217; Heart Fate</a>.&nbsp;  Macmillan (St. Martin&#8217;s Press) offered a <a href="http://us.macmillan.com/BookCustomPage.aspx?isbn=9780312947941#Excerpt">nice long excerpt of books</a> but it&#8217;s formatting makes it very hard to read.&nbsp;  There is not enough line height spacing (spacing between the lines).&nbsp;  If an excerpt is hard to read, I&#8217;m not certain how many people stick around to actually read it.&nbsp;  Harlequin offers excerpts only on its paper book pages and not on its ebook pages.&nbsp;  This is very frustrating.</p>
<p>Ellora&#8217;s Cave actually gives you a decent sized excerpt (or at least one long enough to decide whether the book is for you. I.e., take a gander at <a href="http://www.jasminejade.com/productspecs/9781419930768.htm">this excerpt</a>).&nbsp;  But this press, Eternal Press, <a href="http://www.eternalpress.biz/book.php?isbn=9781615722211">offers a paragraph excerpt</a>.&nbsp;  That isn&#8217;t even as long as a blurb.&nbsp;  It&#8217;s almost useless as an excerpt.</p>
<p>In reviewing excerpts, I think the way Google Books handles it is the nicest.&nbsp;  The Google Book excerpt can be read on your computer or downloaded for later consumption. I like the option.&nbsp;  I like an excerpt to be at least one full chapter.&nbsp;  I prefer the excerpt to be the first full chapter.&nbsp;  Generally, I don&#8217;t like to read on out of context excerpt in the middle of the book unless it highlights some of the best writing in the book. &nbsp;  If the book has illustrations (like a cooking book or a how to book or a children&#8217;s book), I want the excerpt to show the quality (or lack thereof) of the illustrations.</p>
<p>In sum, I want the excerpt to show me why I should part with my money.&nbsp;  What do you guys want, like, expect in an excerpt or sample?</p>
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		<title>Random House Debuts Its Book Search Widget</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 27 Feb 2007 17:51:43 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Jane</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Yesterday, HarperCollins rolled out its &#8220;Browse Inside&#8221; feature that will eventually be available for all its books and could be embedded in blogs and websites. Not to be outdone, Random House debuted its &#8220;Browse and Search&#8221; widget. I like the Random House Widget better as it is just the cover and gives you the option [...]
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Yesterday, HarperCollins <a href="http://dearauthor.com/wordpress/2007/02/26/harper-collins-launches-its-browse-inside-feature/">rolled out </a>its &#8220;Browse Inside&#8221; feature that will eventually be available for all its books and could be embedded in blogs and websites.  </p>
<p><object classid="clsid:d27cdb6e-ae6d-11cf-96b8-444553540000" codebase="http://fpdownload.macromedia.com/pub/shockwave/cabs/flash/swflash.cab#version=8,0,0,0" width="184" height="182" id="biWidget" align="middle"><param name="allowScriptAccess" value="always" /><param name="movie" value="http://www.harpercollins.com/services/browseinside/widget.aspx?hc.guid=5b9bd2d4-d0ae-4a09-9767-d3fdfdecceef" /><param name="quality" value="high" /><param name="flashvars" value="isbn=9780061357909&#038;guid=5b9bd2d4-d0ae-4a09-9767-d3fdfdecceef" /><param name="wmode" value="transparent" /><embed src="http://www.harpercollins.com/services/browseinside/widget.aspx?hc.guid=5b9bd2d4-d0ae-4a09-9767-d3fdfdecceef" flashvars="isbn=9780061357909&#038;guid=5b9bd2d4-d0ae-4a09-9767-d3fdfdecceef" wmode="transparent" quality="high" width="184" height="182" name="biWidget" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="always" type="application/x-shockwave-flash" pluginspage="http://www.macromedia.com/go/getflashplayer" /></object></p>
<p>Not to be outdone, Random House <a href="http://www.randomhouse.com/about/faq/index.php?ToDo=browse&#038;catId=34">debuted</a> its &#8220;Browse and Search&#8221; widget.  </p>
<p><script type='text/javascript' src='http://insight.randomhouse.com/widget/viewer.js'></script><br />
<script type='text/javascript'>new InsightBookReader('preview', '9780345486585', 'Drop Dead Gorgeous', 'Linda Howard', '0', '', 'http://www.randomhouse.com/cgi-bin/buy_landing.php?isbn=9780345486585');</script></p>
<p>I like the Random House Widget better as it is just the cover and gives you the option of choosing a large or small version.  I like the layout of the Random House browsing screen but it doesn&#8217;t allow you to change the font size and the screen display looks like a scanned image and not a true text one (the fonts were smudgy).</p>
<p>Harper Collins browser loaded faster, but had an irritating watermark of the HC copyright on almost every page.  It was easy to manuever with font size choices and a table of contents.  </p>
<p><em>Edited to add:  I see the Random House Widget did not show up.  That might prevent its dissemination on the web.</em></p>
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		<title>Harper Collins Launches Its &#8220;Browse Inside&#8221; Feature</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 26 Feb 2007 17:37:26 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Jane</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[HarperCollins launched its &#8220;Browse Inside&#8221; feature on its website today. Similar to Amazon&#8217;s &#8220;Search Inside&#8221; and a competitor to Google&#8217;s Book Search, Harper&#8217;s &#8220;Browse Inside&#8221; allows readers to &#8220;get a sense&#8221; of the book before purchasing. According to the website, every HarperCollins book will have a &#8220;Browse Inside&#8221; feature. Each book has different content available. [...]
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>HarperCollins <a href="http://www.harpercollins.com/book/browseinsidemain.aspx?HCHP=4a_BrowseInside_SuperfoodsRx_01207">launched</a> its &#8220;Browse Inside&#8221; feature on its website today.  Similar to Amazon&#8217;s &#8220;<a href="http://www.amazon.com/Search-Inside-Book-Books/b?ie=UTF8&amp;node=10197021">Search Inside</a>&#8221; and a competitor to Google&#8217;s <a href="http://books.google.com/">Book Search</a>, Harper&#8217;s &#8220;Browse Inside&#8221; allows readers to &#8220;get a sense&#8221; of the book before purchasing.</p>
<p>According to the website, every HarperCollins book will have a &#8220;Browse Inside&#8221; feature.   Each book has different content available.  Some have the first two chapters.  Some have just the first few pages from each book.  I like this idea as nothing has a better chance of selling me on a book, other than a friend&#8217;s recommendation, than an excerpt.</p>
<p>The software allows a blogger or website to embed the feature much like a YouTube video:</p>
<p><object classid="clsid:d27cdb6e-ae6d-11cf-96b8-444553540000" codebase="http://fpdownload.macromedia.com/pub/shockwave/cabs/flash/swflash.cab#version=8,0,0,0" width="184" height="182" id="biWidget" align="middle"><param name="allowScriptAccess" value="always" /><param name="movie" value="http://www.harpercollins.com/services/browseinside/widget.aspx?hc.guid=1adbadfb-ae3d-41eb-82b1-efa836787b2b" /><param name="quality" value="high" /><param name="flashvars" value="isbn=9780061357909&#038;guid=1adbadfb-ae3d-41eb-82b1-efa836787b2b" /><param name="wmode" value="transparent" /><embed src="http://www.harpercollins.com/services/browseinside/widget.aspx?hc.guid=1adbadfb-ae3d-41eb-82b1-efa836787b2b" flashvars="isbn=9780061357909&#038;guid=1adbadfb-ae3d-41eb-82b1-efa836787b2b" wmode="transparent" quality="high" width="184" height="182" name="biWidget" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="always" type="application/x-shockwave-flash" pluginspage="http://www.macromedia.com/go/getflashplayer" /></object></p>
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