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REVIEW:  The Lawyer’s Luck by Piper Huguley

REVIEW: The Lawyer’s Luck by Piper Huguley

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“Trust in the Lord with all thine heart; and lean not unto thine own understanding. 6 In all thy ways acknowledge him, and he shall direct thy paths.” Proverbs 3:5-6

Oberlin, Ohio – 1844

Lawrence Stewart is a rare man. Raised with his grandmother’s Miami Indian tribe, as a Negro he has consistently walked between two worlds most of his life. He devotes his time and study to becoming a lawyer, fully intending to obtain justice for the ousted Miami Indians. No Negro man has accomplished these things before, but he is not daunted. He studies for his exams as he rides circuit through the backwoods of Ohio, handing out justice to people who cannot easily reach a courthouse. His life is perfectly set until one June day….

Aurelia “Realie” Baxter made her way from enslavement in Georgia to the free land Lake Huron in Ohio. Far from happy as a slave doing the bidding of a woman cooped up in a house all day, Realie is a bona fide tomboy with a special gift with horses. Now, she is so close to freedom in Canada, she can smell it, but her plans are interrupted when Lawrence shoots her…by mistake….

Lawrence cannot study encumbered with the care of an enslaved woman, but he’s responsible for her injury…

Realie wants to get to Canada, but Lawrence won’t let her get away in trying to help her…

One chance meeting can change your life from what you thought you wanted….to what you really need.

Dear Ms. Huguley,

Your recent post to our Open Thread for Authors brought your historical series to my attention and when Sunita mentioned she was looking into the full length novel, I decided to try the novella.

I was slightly put off by some awkwardness in the first chapter – Lawrence seems to be intensely searching for his horse but initially only staying on the tavern porch while doing so and then frets about the time it will take him to chase it down and thus risk making him late for his next circuit justice appearance. He’d certainly be much later if he has to walk, right? But Realie’s take-no-nonsense attitude towards this “fancy man” made me want to persevere to see more of her. Thankfully once the story really gets going, I didn’t notice much more of this.

Lawrence and Realie are from two different worlds yet not. Though Lawrence has never known slavery, as a mixed race, brown skinned man he’s had an uphill climb in getting people to accept him as a lawyer. Realie’s blunt truths about life as a slave make him realize how little he truly knows about the sort of life she’s endured and what drove her to run. Although she can irritate him with her attitudes and assumptions, he slowly comes to admire her determination and fierce will to be free.

Realie can’t understand how Lawrence might be able to help her legally and finds his notions and genteel mannerisms bizarre in contrast to what she’s experienced at the hands of men up until then. She trusts no one and only reluctantly stays with Lawrence, or Lawyer as she calls him, while giving everyone else the side-eye. Even the people who help shelter her still speak in front of her as if she’s not there and it’s only through their loan to Lawrence that she can be bought to freedom.

I thought the initial clash between the two – she’s trying to steal his horse to make the last push to Canada and he accidentally shoots her in the arm – and their subsequent misunderstandings were realistic. Realie can’t afford to let down her guard and Lawrence bristles at what he sees as her stubbornness and views of him as a man who must be paid back in kind for helping her. Though they had started moving towards an understanding and appreciation of each other, they were separated shortly after at a point where, from how I saw it, their feelings were still forming. Then suddenly when they’re back together, they’re in love. That part felt too rushed to me.

Realie’s experience as a slave is not sugar coated and the very matter of fact way it’s described made all the more impact. Subtle touches drove home her reality – she gets mad at Lawrence for not caring enough to know the horse’s name, just as her master never could keep his slaves names straight and she always has to weigh and judge everyone’s actions because words and promises are cheap and often not kept for slaves. Just walking down a street in Ohio where and when she wants to go is new and wonderful experience for her.

I was confused by Lawrence’s white mentor and Realie’s former owner. The Ohio abolitionist still thinks Realie might steal the silver and only reluctantly loans Lawrence the money to free her while Mr. Milford seems almost happy that Realie will be free and has found love. Perhaps it’s just that neither is quite what I expected.

Lawrence and Realie both believe in God though Realie feels she’s seen little evidence of God caring much for her. Lawrence on the other hand is a deeply religious man who prays with meaning and is determined to not enter any physical relationship with Realie before a Christian marriage.

To be honest, I had to keep reading past the first scene as the way the characters act and – I’m not sure what the proper writing term is – move through the scene is a touch awkward. The ending felt a bit rushed and I didn’t truly feel I’d seen these two fall in love. Respect yes but the love was too fast. Still I enjoyed Realie’s grit and Lawrence’s core decency, the historical details and this opportunity to see persons of color as the main characters of the story. B-

~Jayne

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REVIEW:  Hero at Large by Robyn Amos

REVIEW: Hero at Large by Robyn Amos

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THE AGENT: Tall, dark and devastatingly handsome Keshon Gray
THE MISSION: To smoke out a deadly traitor–or die trying

THE OBSTACLE: The sweet temptation of the only woman he’d ever loved!

Keshon Gray had never regretted anything he’d had to do in the line of duty–until now. For entering the dangerous world of gang warfare led to a tempestuous reunion with Rennie Williams. Although he had to keep his identity secret, he just couldn’t stay away from the virtuous beauty who reawakened his heart. But would their love survive a shocking turn of events that promised to change their lives…forever?

Dear Ms. Amos,

I’ve been meaning to read another of your books since finishing “Cosmic Rendezvous.””Cosmic Rendezvous.” “Hero at Large” sounded interesting and though romantic suspense isn’t my favorite, occasionally I will try one. It was a bit light on suspense – with more time devoted to reunited lovers story – but I can’t say that this is why it didn’t work so well for me. No, the main reason is I got bored and into skim mode.

Rennie and Gray had tough start in life. No punches got pulled here and I appreciate that. Gray was pulled into the LA gang life by Rennie’s brother Jacob and Jacob’s desire to join one as a substitute for their broken family life. With their mother dead and father working all the time, Jacob wanted another family and sought it in a gang to become brothers to him. But it cost J his life, something which scarred both Rennie and Gray. Both eventually used this as a way out but the paths they took were different. Rennie escaped through higher education while Gray was recruited into a government agency which has sent him around the world on various assignments. Fate intervenes and the two meet up again. So far, so good. The reunion isn’t meet-again-cute. Instead it’s fraught with fear on Gray’s part that he’ll get Rennie involved in the arms deal he’s brokering to catch a rogue agent gone bad while Rennie is horrified to learn that Gray apparently didn’t totally escape their dark past and has done time in jail.

Still the attraction is mutual and they begin to spend time together which serves as a way for a former gang leader who’s recently gotten out of jail to begin to move in on the sweet deal and money that he thinks Gray has going for him. Rennie is Gray’s weakness and TK will exploit that in order to get the former gang members Gray recruited to follow him instead. Rennie knows all about allowing oneself to be swayed by wanting a man in one’s life because of the women’s counseling sessions she runs. A trained psychologist, Rennie works helping battered and abused women and she’s heard all the excuses. When it comes to her own relationship, she discovers she can be just as blind and willing to look for justification to remain with a man she loves despite what her sense of right and wrong tells her.

I actually don’t have a problem with any of that. We all make mistakes, we all think we know what we’re doing, we all want love and to see the best in someone we love. It’s all good. There are also some bad things that happen here – one of Rennie’s clients loves where she shouldn’t and ends up paying a terrible price for it. Rennie and Gray have to decide how far they’ll go for this relationship and what they’re willing to give up. Trust and love are risked and tough choices are faced but I found my eyes glazing at times.

And that is the main fail of this story for me. Rennie and Gray both spend time thinking and reminiscing. Then thinking more. And more. And then a lot more. This is supposed to be a suspense story as well as a romantic one but there is so much mental think, think, think that literally pages go by as Rennie and Gray think things to death. It got to where my eyes where skittering down the page seeking some action, some dialog, anything. Enough with the time spent in Rennie and Gray’s thoughts. Please, blow something up already. Then when something does finally happen, it often takes place off screen or it happens, it’s over and we zip right past it without really getting into the characters’ emotions. I realize that some of this might be due to the fact that this is part of a series and since the suspense arc couldn’t be completed in this book there was space to fill but it still dragged.

This might be the thinking person’s perfect romantic suspense book but it’s too static for me. I think I should go back and try another of your books which focuses just on romance and see if that will hit my sweet spot again. C-

~Jayne

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