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REVIEW:  A Home for Her Heart by Janet Lee Barton

REVIEW: A Home for Her Heart by Janet Lee Barton

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Love on Assignment

Magazine writer Elizabeth Anderson has sparred with newspaper reporter John Talbot for years. Though they cover similar stories, John thinks Elizabeth’s writing is trivial, and she finds him too boastful. So when they must work together to investigate New York City’s worst tenement houses, they’re surprised by the great team they make.

Despite their professional rivalry, John and Elizabeth begin to trust each other as they grow from competitors, to friends, to something more. But then John makes a startling discovery that would break the story—and Elizabeth’s heart—wide-open. John’s always been driven by his career—can he give up one dream for another?

Dear Ms. Barton,

I enjoy reading the Love Inspired Historicals mainly for the unusual times and settings which are featured in them. There are only so many Dukes I care to read about and even Western gunslingers/sheriffs get too familiar after a while. After watching the PBS series on NYC which mentioned Jacob Riis’s 1890 book “How the Other Half Lives,” it was the tenement investigation in the blurb that caught my attention and made me decide to give this one a try.

While I had hopes for some hard-hitting journalism, the center and focus of the book was mainly on the life at the boarding house where Elizabeth and John both live. It’s a loving, almost family environment with a kindly owner and several very nice but ultimately mainly forgettable tenants. Mrs. Heaton does have her rules and PDAs are mainly limited to engaged couples and exuberance at baseball games while female residents aren’t supposed to be out at night alone.

The details about life there, in NYC and in the tenements are numerous and obviously well researched but there is a lot of repetition. Meals are described in detail, the heat, trolley transport and dinner, and nattering conversation. Some of this was pertinent to the plot while some, alas, was mere filler that I often skimmed.

Elizabeth and John have both had bad past romantic experiences. John got fired from his newspaper job due to the boss’s daughter leading him on while Elizabeth’s fiancé turned out to only want her for her family’s money rather than herself. Both now shy away from romance and have vowed to never risk their hearts again. Lest we forget that, this is mentioned in almost every chapter.

Since this is the second book in this Boarding House Betrothal series, the characters of another of your books are secondary ones here. As such, I expected some background information which I think, for the most part, is sparingly done. Readers who are new to this world, as I was, can start here and not be lost.

The investigative reporting is much more low key than I was hoping for mainly consisting of Elizabeth and John wandering around some tenement buildings, taking some pictures, talking once or twice with people there and then telling each other about searching for information at City Hall. John has one short dust-up with a manager and that’s pretty much all. To be honest, I was a bit disappointed in this. It did serve as a contrast to Elizabeth’s life of wealth but since she’d ditched all that in order to live her life on her own terms, even this part of the plot was dulled instead of hard edged. Eventually the investigation touched closer to home but the brief flare up of emotion and tension soon fizzled out as well.

So mainly this story just sort of drifts along at a leisurely pace. Two perfectly nice people finally really notice each other, begin to get along, have their momentary doubts and then happily fall in love. Some of the tenements are cleaned up, true love is found and lots of good meals are eaten at the boarding house over pleasant conversation. There’s nothing really bad about the book but it’s one I think won’t stick in my mind for long. C

~Jayne

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Reading/Watching List by Jayne for the last few weeks

Reading/Watching List by Jayne for the last few weeks

My PlanetMy Planet by Mary Roach

From acclaimed, New York Times best-selling author Mary Roach comes the complete collection of her “My Planet” articles published in Reader’s Digest. She was a hit columnist in the magazine, and this book features the articles she wrote in that time. Insightful and hilarious, Mary explores the ins and outs of the modern world: marriage, friends, family, food, technology, customer service, dental floss, and ants—she leaves no element of the American experience unchecked for its inherent paradoxes, pleasures, and foibles.

Since these articles were written for Reader’s Digest, they’re the perfect length for tucking into those small reading times you might have throughout the day. Roach often features her husband in them giving a view on modern, middle aged married life. Though the title has Planet, note that she’s usually looking more at the American view of America. B

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Meet Me At the Castle by Denise A. AgnewMeet Me at the Castle by Denise A Agnew

A ruined castle, a young woman’s obsession, an alluring and mysterious man. The past and present are about to collide in Meet Me At the Castle, Denise A. Agnew’s haunting tale of passion and romance. Nothing will ever be the same again!

Elizabeth Albright lives a simple life at Penham Manor under the watchful and disapproving eye of her father and stepmother. They think she’s odd for loving to paint Cromar Castle, a ruin on the hill. Even Elizabeth doesn’t understand why she insists on painting the structure over and over. Yet her compulsion demands it—there is something alive and beautiful about the castle that she cannot resist. When she meets the devilishly handsome Damian, more than her interest is piqued, for he engages her like no other has. But her stepmother has plans that will take her away from Cromar—and Damian—forever.

Marykate wrote a review on this earlier which is what made me want to give it a try. Unfortunately I found it rather stiff and melodramatic. Elizabeth’s obsession with the castle is, quite frankly, almost freaky. And while her father and stepmother might not understand it and handle the situation badly, I found myself almost agreeing with their motivation. I shouldn’t expect to be sympathizing with villains in a romance. I skimmed – a lot – to it. D

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always rayneAlways Rayne by Sierra Avalon

Would you spend ten days traveling the country with someone you despised if he promised to pay off your student loans?
Recent college graduate, Harper Leigh, can barely make ends meet working as the books editor for a new online entertainment magazine, Chatter. With $85,000 of student loan debt about to go into repayment, she has no idea how she’ll get by.

Just when she thinks things couldn’t get worse, Harper’s boss decides to embed her in the North American tour for the hot rock band, Always Rayne. Ten days on the road with the band for her to get an exclusive story. But Harper’s a homebody and the last thing she wants to do is go on the road with a rock band. And she definitely doesn’t want to spend ten days with the notorious bad boy and band front man, Nic Rayne.

When Nic proves to be too much for Harper to handle and she threatens to quit the assignment, Nic decides to sweeten the pot. If she stays with the tour for all ten days, he’ll pay off all of her student loan debt….but there’s one small catch.

Harper also has to sleep in his bed every night.

I wanted to like this one. I really did. The idea of a smart heroine who isn’t fazed, who in fact is turned off, by the hero’s fame x with incentive to pay off her debts sounded like an interesting conflict. The first chapter or two were this, what I was expecting and wanting.

Then it began to slip into a Mary Sue heroine who is beautiful under her Hippy Library Chick clothes x moody, angsty rock star hero who is desperately searching for his intellectual mate and thinks he’s immediately found her after a 5 minute conversation.

Everyone including the hero tells the heroine that he loves her, wants her and she’s The One for him but the supposedly intelligent heroine remains clueless to her beauty and The One-ness for ages.

Plus there’s enough one night sex hookups going on among the three band members (one of the duties of the manager/gofer is to get the girls they hook up with post-concert to sign non disclosure contracts before the sexing) – including the hero even after he’s found the heroine – to make me want to wear a hazmat suit while reading it.

But wait – the emo hero really, really loves the heroine. Maybe but this was coming off as way to close to teenage fanfiction for me to continue.

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monsoon mistsMonsoon Mists by Christina Courtenay

Sometimes the most precious things cannot be bought…

It’s 1759 and Jamie Kinross has travelled far to escape his troubled past – from the pine forests of Sweden to the bustling streets of India.

In India he starts a new life as a gem trader, but when his mentor’s family are kidnapped as part of a criminal plot, he vows to save them and embarks on a dangerous mission to the city of Surat, carrying the stolen talisman of an Indian Rajah.

There he encounters Zarmina Miller. She is rich and beautiful, but her infamous haughtiness has earned her a nickname: “The Ice Widow”. Jamie is instantly tempted by the challenge she presents.

But when it becomes clear that Zarmina’s step-son is involved in the plot, he begins to see another side to her – a dark past to rival his own and a heart just waiting to be thawed. But is it too late?

I was excited to try this novel as I’d been eyeing this author’s works at Choc Lit for a while. Historical India and historical Japan? Yay rah and bring it. Unfortunately this one doesn’t work for me.

Jamie starts out with my sympathy. “Something” awful has happened in his past personal life and while I don’t know what it is, I’m ready to root for him. Until he starts acting like an ass from the moment he meets Zarmina. He takes her don’t mess with me attitude as a personal affront and gets all “how dare she judge all men, how dare she act all haughty, I’m going to put her in her place.” It’s like reading modern male gamers views of “uppity women.” Okay so it’s probably actually period correct – and there are other men who have derogatory or dismissive views of Zarmina as well – but here’s the hero acting like this. And it’s only when another male has filled Jamie in on why Zarmina might have the right to act as she does that he admits maybe he was too quick to judge her.

Can he be turned around in my opinion? At the 40% point, no and skimming forward he didn’t seem to improve much.

Zarmina thinks her mixed race blood helps her deal with Indian weather. Really? The attitudes of the English about her living in England are also sadly probably period correct. She’s okay for India but don’t bring the half-caste home. I do really get a feel for her aloneness and fear of how her stepson could order her around and ruin her life. I can’t blame her for wanting to hang on to her agency – being a widow in control of her money – for as long as she can. I was disappointed that we get the “widow who’s only had bad sex” trope leading to the “hero’s sexing is the bestest” trope.

The set-up for the criminal plot that brings Jamie to Surat is convoluted and seemingly unnecessarily complicated to say the least. I have lots of questions about what the heck is going on.

The Indian ruler comes off as a buffoonish clown. But then we’ve only seen him from the POV of someone who obviously hates him. Jamie’s Indian mentor has to be saved by the white man. Grrr.

Lots of detail. There’s a wealth of detail here and I can’t tell lots of effort when into finding it and utilizing it. But in places I have to ask, why? It’s an interesting tidbit that Surat had two city walls and what their names were but is it relevant to the story? No.

I continued to past the 40% point and after skimming some, didn’t see things improving much so sadly I called it quits.

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TheDuplicitousDebutanteSideThe Duplicitous Debutante by Becky Lower

In 1859, ladies of New York society were expected to do three things well: find a husband, organize a smooth-running household, and have children.
Rosemary Fitzpatrick’s agenda is very different. As the author of the popular Harry Hawk dime novels, she must hide her true identity from her new publisher, who assumes the person behind the F. P. Elliott pen name is male. She must pose as his secretary in order to ensure the continuation of her series. And in the midst of all this subterfuge, her mother is insisting that she become a debutante this year.

Henry Cooper is not the typical Boston Brahmin. Nor is he a typical publisher. He’s entranced by Mr. Elliott’s secretary the moment they meet, and wonders how his traditional-thinking father will react when he brings a working class woman into the family. Because his intentions are to marry her, regardless.

Rosemary’s deception begins to unravel at the Cotillion ball, when Henry recognizes her. The secretarial mask must come off, now that he knows she is a member of New York society. But she can’t yet confess who she truly is until she knows if Henry will accept her as F. P. Elliott.

The more time they spend together, the closer they become. But when Rosemary reveals her true identity to him, will Henry be able to forgive her or has her deceit cost her the man she loves?

This is another submission made to DA and again, I wanted to like it due to the fact that it’s got an author heroine. Alas, it was not to be as I felt there is some awkward exposition in the first two chapters about debuts and female writers. Reading Amazon reviews of other books in this series, it seems like this is an ongoing issue for Lower. The next chapter features a family dinner scene that has more than a whiff of modernity to it but I gritted my teeth and kept going.

Sadly, once the hero and heroine meet, the book sunk into a haze of lustful daydreams wherein Henry and Rosemary’s thoughts always drifted into passionate kisses, caresses, skin, lips, hair being let loose over breasts, etc, etc. Every third page these two float off into blissful contemplation of the others attributes only to shake themselves back into the present. I made it to the 1/3 mark and realized I was skimming to get that far.

Please note that each chapter starts with a header from Rosemary’s latest novel and while the plot and the way the characters are handled are probably period correct, they would be deemed offensive to NA/American Indians today.

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black widow witchBlack Widow Witch by A.J Locke

A deadly curse, a dangerous assassin, and one shot to save everyone she loves…
Malachi Erami can’t fall in love. After she’s caught with Knave, the witch Queen’s favorite lover, she’s cursed to savagely butcher any man she falls for. Exiled to live among humans, Malachi runs a bar that serves magic-laced drinks, but since her curse labels her high risk, she’s also closely monitored. Julian Vira is her latest babysitter, but he’s also the first man since Knave that she’s been attracted to. Good-looking and nonjudgmental of her horrible curse? Yeah, he’s hard to resist.

But when Malachi finds a body behind her bar, she knows she’s in trouble. If the Witches Control Council gets wind of it, she’ll be accused of murder and sent to her death. And when her friends start getting framed for murder, she realizes she’s not the only target. Malachi and Julian dig into the evidence to clear her name, but the closer they get to answers, the closer the curse comes to taking over. So when Malachi uncovers a plot to kill the witch Queen, she finds herself suddenly recruited into service, with the promise of having her curse lifted and a reunion with Knave as well. But if she fails, Knave will die. And she and Julian might not live long enough to see that happen.

I saw in our submissions section and thought, hey that looks interesting. Heroine who is cursed to rip apart any man she’s interested in? Yeah, that’s a definite issue that she’d have to work out to be a couple. Then I start it and it drags and drags and drags with tons of backstory. Her story, the backstory of all the witches she hangs with, a usual night at her bar, etc. Did I mention there’s a lot of initial backstory?

Then she is worried about being set-up due to the hatred humans have for witches and she needs to keep the ripped apart body found behind her bar a secret. So does she keep it to herself? No, she tells about 5 people within 12 hours. Most witches but then she also mentions there’s a witch snitch among the witch population in NYC so how secret will this remain? Less so now that she’s blabbed, I bet.

She also gets a new WCC minder – I took this to be like a probation officer. One of her dear friends is hauled in on possible murder charges and she charges down to the station because she just knows the woman is innocent. What is she going to do at the WCC? Well, just tell her minder that she just knows the woman is innocent and then … dunno.

So she heads out to investigate and who shows up at the same place but her minder. Why is he there if this isn’t his case? He saw the woman and thought she looked sweet and innocent. Ted Bundy looked innocent, too. Yeah, it’s great he believes in the woman’s innocence but really?

At this point, over 1/4 of the way into the book I looked at my ereader, sighed at the thought of reading anymore and said, I’m done here.

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Delhi BellyDelhi Belly

Three young and somewhat clueless flatmates get involved in the shady and dangerous business belonging to one roomie’s fiancee. Each buddy manages to make things worse until they discover that a global crime syndicate is gunning for them.

When I finished this I thought it’s “Cohn brothers go to India.” But note this is not a Bollywood film as it has no song and dance set pieces. It’s a strict action/comedy with a romance thread running through it. Also note that if you liked Monsoon Wedding, Vijay Raaz (who played the wedding planner) has the role of the gangster villain here.


The No 1 LadiesThe No1 Ladies’ Detective Agency

I just started this series and am enjoying it so far. Precious Ramotswe is a marvelous character as a woman with big dreams and the guts to go after them. Her typist Mma Makutsi and potential romance Mr. J.L.B. Matekoni back her efforts to become a successful private investigator in Botswana but most importantly, helper of those in need. One of the sweetest parts of the initial story is how Precious’s father helps her to “see” the world around her and gifts her with the “capital” she needs to get started. I need to get back to this one soon.



the shadow of the towerThe Shadow of the Tower

I reported on this before when I was halfway through the early 1970s British series on Henry VII and the start of the Tudor dynasty. The second half was a bit slower and spent a lot – and I mean a LOT – of time showing Henry dealing with all the pretenders to the crown. It’s really only in the last show that we get back to more about the family itself and see Arthur marry and die thus setting the stage for Henry VIII and his marital issues. In sets, the series is obviously a product of its time but I enjoyed it nonetheless.


The ArtistThe Artist

Winner of five Oscars, this artful black-and-white silent film follows the romance between a silent-era superstar on a downward spiral and a rising young starlet who embraces the future of cinema at the dawn of the “talkies.”

This was on my radar ever since Roger Ebert gave it such a great review but for some reason I kept moving other DVDs ahead of it in my Netflix queue. Big mistake on my part. It stars two wonderful French actors – the hot and sexy Jean Dujardin and the impish Bérénice Bejo plus a darling Jack Russell terrier. I happen to like silent films but if you don’t think you do, please don’t let that put you off. The acting style is modern and it’s easy to follow the plot.