First Page: Unnamed Paranormal Romance
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Slam. Slam. Slam. The sound of heavy doors closing had Madi glancing around the parking garage, trying to find the source. She didn’t see anyone on this level, but heard masculine voices. She heard one of the men say, “Glad you got that call from my dad about this club. I really did need to blow off some steam after last night’s fiasco with that damn strayer!”
Madi stiffened. Strayer. She didn’t know if the voice belonged to a vampyre or fae, but quickly dismissed the word, and focused on the voice. He had the sexiest one she had ever heard and hoped his body matched. She definitely was going to have to file that away for those fantasies she liked to conjure up.
Madi came back to reality and set her car alarm. She still didn’t see the group of guys and wondered if she had imagined it all. If she did, damn she needed to imagine more. She could still hear that deep voice, one that, if saying some naughty words, could probably send her spiraling toward a fast orgasm. She shook her head again, as she realized that once again she had fixated back on that voice. She was already running late from the earlier tickling session with her younger twin sisters.
Reaching the elevator, she pressed the down button. Madi tapped her foot impatiently before deciding it would be faster to use the stairs. She jogged down the three flights and when she reached the ground level, she peered back at the transparent elevator shaft. Inside the elevator was a couple holding hands and a group of four tall gorgeous guys who appeared to be laughing and joking with each other. She turned to walk away and stopped.
Four guys? Was her mystery sexy-voiced man one of those delicious men?
She studied each face as the elevator moved from the third floor to the second. One of the guys, the one wearing a white shirt and dark jeans turned and caught her studying him and his friends. I hope he was the sexy voice I heard because damn he’s hot. She turned and quickly hurried to the employee entrance of the club.
Gavin had just seen the most beautiful woman looking up at him. At least he thought he saw her. One second she was there and the next she was gone. She would definitely be a visual for him to remember for later.
“Earth to Gavin, you still with us buddy?” Lucas said as he waved a hand in front of Gavin’s face.
Gavin hadn’t realized the elevator had stopped and looked around at an empty elevator. He saw his friends looking at him as if he was crazy. Gavin began laughing aloud.
Marco walked back into the elevator and slapped his friend on his left shoulder, “Man, you going to let us in on whatever you are laughing at?”
Gavin stifled his laughter and replied, “I just saw the hottest woman…one second she was there, the next she was gone, Poof! I don’t even know if she was real or if it was my horny ass conjuring up the perfect female. I really must need some action to be dreaming up a gorgeous chick.”