Dec 24 2011
Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** Lukas von Rainer was at the hotel bar with his fellow Wardens when the priest passed. Everyone’s eye was(…)
Dec 17 2011
Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** Essex, England 1789 Elsie picked another flower. Her fist was full of them already, but she didn’t want to(…)
Dec 10 2011
Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** Sweat dripped down my forehead. My hair hung damp in my face, a limp version of its former self.(…)
Dec 3 2011
Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** Reginald Beckett—England 1790 Like casualties of war, fallen on the field of battle, the glasses were laid out across(…)
Nov 26 2011
Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** City of Lundun, province of Brittania, United Empire. 27 Janvier, 3.021 AGD In Silas Marrack’s opinion—which concurred with the(…)
Nov 19 2011
Saturday first page is an opportunity for authors to present the first page of an unpublished manuscript to be critiqued by the community. Anonymous comments are acceptable. As a reminder, gravatars are connected to one’s email address so if you comment anonymously but use your regular email address, one’s attempt at anonymity will be thwarted.(…)
Nov 12 2011
Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** Author describes this as “women’s fiction with elements of romance and suspense.” Beginning of first chapter in Circling Great Wharf:(…)
Nov 5 2011
Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. **** The following is an explicit excerpt. Please do not click if this will make you uncomfortable. Send to Kindle
Oct 28 2011
Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** Update: You guys, I messed up. The author sent me a revised version and I put up the unrevised(…)
Oct 22 2011
Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** Ellen…4months ago The core of it all was that the girl had to get my heart; that part was(…)
Oct 15 2011
Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** Mists of time, morning mists; both dim that long ago memory of a dawn when I was both(…)
Oct 8 2011
Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** Why didn’t the Fomhoire ever just walk up to him and tap him on the shoulder? They would(…)
Oct 1 2011
Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** As Cindy turns the car sharply around the corner, the force presses me against the window. The speed demon can’t(…)
Sep 24 2011
Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** Centila opened and closed her fingers, staring at the wagon cover arching overhead. There, black eagles winged through a(…)
Sep 17 2011
Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** Coastal Maine May 1851 The scent of the sea wafting in through the tavern’s open window did little to(…)
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