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First Page:  In the Kingdom of Persephone (Fantasy)

First Page: In the Kingdom of Persephone (Fantasy)

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** I saw Death take my one hundred and six years old great-grandmother. She was sleeping on the couch across(…)

First Page: Katarina, Historical Romance

First Page: Katarina, Historical Romance

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. ***  Chapter One:Fateful Visitants (August 1572)  It was a day of blue summer breezes. I was resting in the meadow,(…)

First Page:  YA fantasy, The Hourglass Bridge

First Page: YA fantasy, The Hourglass Bridge

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously.  If you would like your piece critiqued, please check out this page. *** Chapter One ~ The Clock With Three Faces(…)

First Page: US Civil War romance

First Page: US Civil War romance

One Sharra crouched, peering out from beneath the underbrush, her breath coming in uneven gasps. She moved her slender fingers, rhythmically, through the dirt at her feet. If she were found, her life would be worth naught. How would she ever explain her actions, especially to her father? Time passed, slowly, to the steady pounding(…)

First Page:  Contemporary Romance Novel

First Page: Contemporary Romance Novel

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. ***  “You know you’re screwed right?” Audrey Greer sighed pointedly at her best friend. “Katy you are aware that you’ve(…)

First Page: Shackled (Paranormal Erotic Romance)

First Page: Shackled (Paranormal Erotic Romance)

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. ***     It was time for the ritual. Ashlan glanced around with a mixture of fear and anticipation. Her(…)

First Page:  Historical Erotica

First Page: Historical Erotica

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. The horse was spooked, and so was he.  Something, or someone, was out there.  He knew that even in darkness,(…)

First Page:  Dark Romance “Dear Paris”

First Page: Dark Romance “Dear Paris”

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. From Susannah to Paris San Francisco, September 14 Dear Paris: On this day of thunder and heavy storm over northern(…)

First Page: Contemporary Romance titled “Long Road Home”

First Page: Contemporary Romance titled “Long Road Home”

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** New York City, Manhattan, somewhere between So-Ho and Hell’s Kitchen: What are the chances of not only finding yourself(…)

First Page: YA Paranormal

First Page: YA Paranormal

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** Stop and smell the roses, for tomorrow they may be dead. Chapter 1 The tribal drum thumps in my(…)

First Page:  UNTITLED FANTASY

First Page: UNTITLED FANTASY

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** Blue’s boots sunk into the sand. A gust hurled even more curls into her face. She paused and tightened her(…)

First Page:  Untitled

First Page: Untitled

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** Chapter 1 - Malta 1804 If I needed someone to slit a throat or steal a purse, Eaton thought, I(…)

First Page:  Contemporary Romance

First Page: Contemporary Romance

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** Finley stepped out of the terminal and caught the smell of the Atlantic even before the glass doors had(…)

First Page:  Sylvan Legacy, YA Historical Romance with Fantasy Elements

First Page: Sylvan Legacy, YA Historical Romance with Fantasy Elements

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. *** The horse’s hooves thunder across the hillside, and with each bunching of its muscles, I feel my heart pound.(…)

First Page:  Untitled Paranormal Romance

First Page: Untitled Paranormal Romance

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. ***   For as long as Cali could remember she’d had the good angel, bad devil thing going on.  Of(…)