Jun 16, 2013

First Page: Blueprint

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Jun 15, 2013

First Page: Undertow

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Jun 9, 2013

First Page: Tentative Title – Unfamiliar Turf

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Jun 8, 2013

First Page: Refugee

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Jun 2, 2013

First Page: Having It All

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Jun 1, 2013

First Page: Death Wish

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May 26, 2013

First Page: Angel of the City

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May 25, 2013

First Page: Unpublished manuscript

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May 19, 2013

First Page: The Jane Austen Project

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May 18, 2013

First Page: Out of Time

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May 12, 2013

First Page: More Than Meets the Eye

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May 11, 2013

First Page: Snowbound

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May 5, 2013

First Page: A New Sky : Page 1

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May 4, 2013

First Page: The Sweet Science

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Apr 28, 2013

First Page: Immortal Gambler (unpublished manuscript)

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