October 6, 2013

First Page: Warlock’s Code

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October 5, 2013

First Page: Scooped

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September 29, 2013

First Page: Riding the Line, Contemporary Romance

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September 28, 2013

First Page: “The Amulet of Isis”, Middle Grade Fantasy Adventure

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September 22, 2013

First Page: Aquila Historical Fiction; YA

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September 21, 2013

First Page: Dancer – A Little Tale of Revenge, erotic thriller

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