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First Page: Westward Rose

First Page: Westward Rose

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First Page: New Adult

First Page: New Adult

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First Page: The Model Romance

First Page: The Model Romance

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. You can submit your own First Page using this form. As an aside, I have a ton of these entries.(…)

First Page: Falling for the Nanny

First Page: Falling for the Nanny

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. You can submit your own First Page using this form. Tyler Jefferies needed a nanny. Anger, and for the first(…)

First Page: Unpublished Manuscript

First Page: Unpublished Manuscript

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. You can submit your own First Page using this form. It was the most perfect of nights. There was good(…)

First Page: Resurrection

First Page: Resurrection

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. You can submit your own First Page using this form. Chapter One Puna, Peru The ceiling fan had an annoying(…)

First Page: Unpublished MS – Romantic Suspense

First Page: Unpublished MS – Romantic Suspense

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First Page: Unpublished Manuscript – Romance

First Page: Unpublished Manuscript – Romance

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. You can submit your own First Page using this form. Katie McCoy allowed herself a little twirl and a skip(…)

First Page: unpublished manuscript, new adult

First Page: unpublished manuscript, new adult

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. You can submit your own First Page using this form. She was screaming. She was screaming for him, weeping and(…)

First Page: Captain’s Privilege

First Page: Captain’s Privilege

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. You can submit your own First Page using this form. “We’ve found the source of the energy spikes.” Andros retracted(…)

First Page: Egyptian Christmas (Urban Fantasy / Romance)

First Page: Egyptian Christmas (Urban Fantasy / Romance)

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. You can submit your own First Page using this form. The great hall of the museum had been dimmed slightly,(…)

First Page: It’s a Love Game (contemporary sports romance)

First Page: It’s a Love Game (contemporary sports romance)

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First Page: The Five Cities (Fantasy)

First Page: The Five Cities (Fantasy)

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. You can submit your own First Page using this form. The woman Kala owned a tavern in the City of(…)

First Page: Forbidden Destinies (PNR Romance)

First Page: Forbidden Destinies (PNR Romance)

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First Page: Untitled- Futuristic

First Page: Untitled- Futuristic

Welcome to First Page Saturday. Individual authors anonymously send a first page read and critiqued by the Dear Author community of authors, readers and industry others. Anyone is welcome to comment. You may comment anonymously. You can submit your own First Page using this form. “Another husband?” The mocking voice came from behind her, but(…)