Apr 9 2006
Dear Ms Vaughan,
Enough with the Sweat! Enough with the fever, raving, bathing and sickness. Give us more pattern dancing and combat trials. More fun and less grim. And please make Lara less of a little martyr who feels compelled to help even her enemies. I wanna see her kick Iften’s ass.
And as much as I like Keir too, he’s almost too good to be true. Sure he snores a little but most of the time he’s so perfect and attentive to whiny Lara that I sorta started to see him as a Ken doll.
But I do give you points for being willing to kill off a few main characters. Cruel, yes, but far more realistic than the miraculous recoveries of most romance secondary characters.
I’m psyched for book three and pissed that I have to wait another year. Write faster! B
Oh, and can you tell me why Keir is described as having dark hair yet the man on the cover appears to be a blond? Is that Iften the Asshole?