Dear Ms. Heart:
I am probably the wrong person to review this book as I generally don’t like short stories unless your name is O. Henry and I am not a fan of erotica. I think this is an erotica novella and not a romance but I am getting more and more confused about the line between the erotica v. erotic romance genres. The entire book is comprised of one sex scene featuring Mike and Trisha Jones. They have been married for 8 years and their marriage is stagnant. Trisha is acting too submissive and Mike isn’t asserting himself like a proper Dom should. I kind of laugh at that sentence because it indicates I actually know how a proper Dom should act which I don’t. It’s simply my interpretation of your story. The story, all 7900 words of it, has no plot, other than the submissive apparently hasn’t been properly punished for the last six months by her master and thus acts out to gain his attention. I wasn’t engaged by either character or the story but I suppose if a reader is in the mood for a S&M sex scene, this would fit the bill. D.
Best regards,
Jane
Jane
Jane is a long time romance reader whose passion is, you guessed it, reading. She's currently loving contemporary authors like Sarah Mayberry and Karina Bliss but her first love will always be the historical. Some of her old time favorites are Amanda Quick and Johanna Lindsey and some of the new favorites are Sherry Thomas, Joanna Bourne and Claudia Dain. You can reach Jane by email at jane @ dearauthor dot com