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REVIEW: Riding the Storm by Sydney Croft

Dear Ms. Croft:

I really wanted to like this book. I like the publishing house. I met the authors behind the psuedonym (Larissa Ione and Stephanie Tyler) and they seem totally great. Unfortunately, nothing in this story actually worked for me. The book opens with a heavy sexual overtone and never relents. Riding the Storm read like an erotic romance whose paranormal aspects seemed buffer space between the sex scenes.

Riding the Storm Sydney CroftRemy Begnaud is a man who can affect the weather. The why behind this is not fully explored and therefore never discovered. It’s a gift or a curse, depending on whom is rendering the opinion. Haley Marie Holmes is a scientist for ACRO (Agency for Covert Rare Operatives), an secret organization made up of individuals who have special powers. She is sent to study Remy Begnaud and recruit him for ACRO before the evil Itor organization filled with its own mutants, err people with special powers who do evil instead of good.

ACRO is headed by a reclusive figure, Devlin O’Malley. He provides a “safe haven to Special Ability types in return for their helping to keep safe the world at large.” Devlin is blind but has special powers enhanced by his blindness. He’s not quite the parapalegic telepath that is Professor Charles Francis Xavier of the X-Men, but similarities between the X-Men world and this story is quite strong. There is even a reference to X-Men:

But ACRO had found itself a new operative, an X-Man, of sorts, providing Remy accepted their offer.

Devlin and ACRO help operatives hone their powers much as the Professor trained the original five teenage mutants and others including Storm, a mutant who could control the force of weather, to harness their powers. In essence, Riding the Storm read as if it was highly inspired by the referenced comic book.

There is a short secondary storyline featuring Annika and Creed, two other ACRO operatives who are inside Devlin’s childhood home attempting to communicate with a ghost.

The trouble is that the paranormal world was not fully developed other than the links to sexual act and desire. There is actually science behind the theory that people are affected by the weather. Every person has a different chemical makeup and can react differently in terms of electrical response. Some scientists posit that is why some individuals can sense water better than others. Their bodies are actually the divining rod, not the stick or tool they wield.

If there was more science explored behind the paranoramal aspects, the otherworld aspects would have created a more believable escape. At the least, I was looking for an explanation as to why some people had the special abilities and others did not. What creates the tension? Is it nothing more than a rock-paper-scissors game wherein everytime ACRO and Itor Corp fight, the outcome might be different and its all left up to fate? Or are the ACRO operatives just better, stronger fighters than Itor. I.e., ACRO gets all the great Special Abilities and Itor gets the also rans?

The sex even bothered me because to a large extent all the sex scenes were driven by supernatural forces (i.e., the weather or the ghosts) rather than the characters’ own feelings. There was a weird sexual compulsion that seemed to be taking place. Remy is turned on by the weather, by Mother Nature, and to some extent, he must have sex during strong weather patterns. Creed decides that he and Annika must have sex to achieve a desired outcome with the ghosts.

The secondary storyline between Annika and Creed was not integrated at all with Remy and Haley story. It was as if two separate stories were written and then storyline scenes were alternately placed to elongate the book. There was no cross between the two. I.e., how did the ghost/ghostly apparitions fit into the storyline that dealt with Remy’s struggle with his relationship with Mother Nature.

I think that the secondary storyline was an attempt to capitalize on the formula of success developed by Suzanne Brockmann and JR Ward where the insertion of a strong continuing secondary character romance can increase anticipation for a forthcoming book. To that end, I think Riding the Storm was somewhat successful. Devlin certainly has secrets and Annika and Creed’s storyline is completely left hanging so that if the reader was engaged by that story, she would surely be on the lookout for the next one.

The sex is hot and well written in the story and I do know that is difficult. There is a plethora of scenes involving nearly every main character to please nearly every fantasy imaginable including a male on male bondage scene. For me, though, the derivate but not fully explored paranormal world and the compulsory nature of the copulations made it a difficult read. D.

Best regards,

Jane

Riding the Storm can be purchased at Amazon or in ebook format at Books on Board or Fictionwise.

Jane Litte is the founder of Dear Author, a lawyer, and a lover of pencil skirts. She spends her downtime reading romances and writing about them. Her TBR pile is much larger than the one shown in the picture and not as pretty. You can reach Jane by email at jane @ dearauthor dot com

10 Comments

  1. Larissa Ione
    Sep 13, 2007 @ 07:21:16

    Thank you for the review Jane! We wish you’d liked the book better, but we always knew it would be one of those stories people either really liked or really disliked. Hopefully you’ll like the second book better — I think the reason for the secondary plotline for Annika and Creed will become clearer…the need to carry it on for more than one book.

    Again, thanks for taking the time to read and review!

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  2. Ann Bruce
    Sep 13, 2007 @ 07:44:32

    Even the names are from X-Men:

    Remy = Remy Lebeau aka Gambit
    Creed = Graydon Creed aka son of Mystique and Sabretooth aka Mutant Hater

    Sorry, I know I’m such a geek.

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  3. Larissa Ione
    Sep 13, 2007 @ 08:07:36

    LOL, Ann! That is entirely coincidental — Stephanie named the male characters, and she has never seen an X-Men movie or read a comic! Still.

    At the time the book was written, I hadn’t seen any of the movies or read the comic books, either — though I’d been a comic book fan as a kid. It wasn’t until afterward that my husband said we needed to watch the movies. :)

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  4. Jaci Burton
    Sep 13, 2007 @ 10:21:50

    I truly loved this book. I found the characters compelling and oh so sexy, the ACRO world unique and I really got into the subplot and couldn’t wait to read the second book in the series. I thought Syd (Steph and Larissa) did a great job :-)

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  5. Jane
    Sep 13, 2007 @ 11:03:15

    Larissa – I do wish I responded better. I’ll take a look at the next one. Who knows. Thank you for being such a classy person about the review.

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  6. Jana J. Hanson
    Sep 13, 2007 @ 15:24:33

    I think the Bantam Dell editor tipped readers off about the erotic romance aspect of Riding the Storm in her feature here. At least she tipped me off. I assumed I’d get something more than just the standard paranormal romance based on her comments.

    So, while I was a bit shocked at the overly erotic tone, the shock wore off. Riding the Storm was an amazingly sexy and sensual book that I finished in a few hours. But you’re right, Jane; it’s more erotic than paranormal.

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  7. Angela
    Sep 13, 2007 @ 18:32:24

    Hm too bad. I was looking at this book because I love X-Men and Marjorie M. Liu’s Dirk & Steele series, but I’m not a big fan of the sex being such a prevalent force in romance novels.

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  8. Larissa Ione
    Sep 13, 2007 @ 19:17:17

    Thank you, Jaci! *smooches*

    Jane, I’m SO not going to point out your comment to my husband…who would die laughing because on Sundays he makes fun of my “lack of class” when I sit in front of the TV with NASCAR and cheap beer…

    Thank you, Jana! I have to say, I’ve been a little concerned that people will pick it up, expecting straight paranormal romance, and then be upset by the fact that it is definitely erotic. Because of the number of sex scenes and the graphic nature, we had to make some creative choices to not expand other story elements, which is going to give us big hits by people expecting more paranormal than erotic. Sigh. I keep finding the book in “fiction” sections of the book stores rather than “romance” or “erotic romance.”

    Angela, the sex is definitely a prevalent force! :)

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  9. Daisy Harris
    Nov 28, 2010 @ 20:51:54

    I know this is an ages old review, but I wanted to chime in that the ACRO series is what made me want to start writing fiction. (Up till that time, I was doing only scientific and technical writing.)

    I don’t get the sense that the reviewers here particularly like erotic romance, so maybe that was part of it, but I thought the mix of comic book style with erotic and paranormal elements was fabu-tastic!

    …then again I also love the Dragon’s Kin series which I don’t think got great reviews on this site. So I guess to each his (or her) own.

    Smiles.

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  10. MaryK
    Nov 29, 2010 @ 00:13:31

    @Daisy Harris:

    I don't get the sense that the reviewers here particularly like erotic romance

    As a regular reader of DA, I can tell you that Jane at least particularly likes erotic romance – which may be why you’ve noticed low ER grades. If you read a lot of something, you’re going to find a lot you don’t like in between the ones you do.

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