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REVIEW: Mistress to the Merciless Millionaire by Abby Green

Dear Ms. Green:

Mistress to the Merciless Millionaire This worked for me on most levels although I know that a non fan of Harlequin Presents would probably be turned off by the manufacturered angst and the constant barrage of distrust and misplaced accusations from the hero. Kate Lancaster, a beautiful young woman, has been unable to get over a kiss she shared with Tiarnan Quinn when she was eighteen. To combat her feelings, she has always acted with hostility toward Tiarnan, treating him with icy disdain but at the christening of her best friend’s baby, Tiarnan’s sister, Kate let down her guard for one moment and he saw it.

-And right then Kate knew that all her flimsy attempts to defend herself against him for years were for naught. He’d just seen through it all in an instant. Seen through her. Her humiliation was now complete.

Tiarnan not only sees it but it provides him an excuse to pursue her. Tiarnan, unlike other HP heroes, suffers some anxiety at being rejected by Kate. He’s always found her to be very cold toward him and at times even felt as if she was mocking him in her dismissiveness.

Tiarnan chafed at her sudden assuredness-‘and at her reminder of his clumsy rejection. That feeling of regret spiked uncomfortably again. Her smile was almost mocking-‘as if she pitied him! He’d never been an object of pity, and he wasn’t about to start being one now

Kate continues to reject Tiarnan and so Tiarnan pulls out the “my child wants to see you” card and pretty much hijacks Kate at the airport at the end of one of her modeling shoots. He whisks her off to his home in Madrid where Kate reconnects with his daughter, Sorcha Rosie, and loses her battle to resist Tiarnan.

Kate’s repressed longing for Tiarnan was strongly conveyed as was her humiliation at being so attracted to him against her will.   Tiarnan, the product of bad mothers (both his own and then his wife’s), has difficulty trusting women.   While objectively he can see that Kate is NOT LIKE THE OTHERS, his instinctive emotional reaction is to jump to the wrong kinds of assumptions.    Kate carried the story for me so while Tiarnan behaved like a neanderthal, at times, and made awful assumptions, Kate still maintained her dignity.

I don’t know that I would recommend this one to Jayne even though she enjoyed an HP but I couldn’t help but feel for Kate who had a desperate longing for one man, recognized at some point how destructive her love for him was and had the ability to walk away. I’m not sure that I would have been as gratified with the ending had Kate not been able to assert her independence and take control of her own emotional destiny. C+

Best regards


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Jane Litte is the founder of Dear Author, a lawyer, and a lover of pencil skirts. She self publishes NA and contemporaries (and publishes with Berkley and Montlake) and spends her downtime reading romances and writing about them. Her TBR pile is much larger than the one shown in the picture and not as pretty. You can reach Jane by email at jane @ dearauthor dot com


  1. Niveau
    Sep 15, 2009 @ 15:53:23

    Jane: Sorcha isn’t Tiarnan’s daughter, she’s his sister. She’s also Kate’s best friend. The daugher’s name is Rosie.

  2. Jane
    Sep 15, 2009 @ 15:57:24

    @Niveau Thank you! Made the correction.

  3. MaryK
    Sep 15, 2009 @ 16:07:55

    I’m glad to see this one is good (I’m all about the HP angst). I picked it and the Nicola Marsh up this month, both new to me authors. At some point, I’d made a mental note to buy one of the September HPs, but the author and title didn’t stick – just the Sept. HP part. :(

  4. Heather Massey
    Sep 15, 2009 @ 17:47:26

    Gotta love that title!

  5. Niveau
    Sep 15, 2009 @ 19:43:55

    @MaryK The Nicola Marsh one wasn’t particularly angsty, imo. The Jennie Lucas, on the other hand, was pretty much angsty from the first page onwards. I had fun with it – it was so over-the-top that I couldn’t take it seriously, so I just went along for the ride.

  6. Janet W
    Sep 15, 2009 @ 20:05:12

    … I’ll keep a weather eye open for this at my fave UBS … it must be a reflection of all the RL tasks that keep reaching out to me that all I want to do is play a Harlequin title game … how about (and I know the tenses don’t quite match up): Captivated by a Cruel Croesus?

  7. Marilyn
    Sep 16, 2009 @ 11:04:58

    Personally I loved this book but I’m also a fan of Abby Green’s and Presents.

    Having the man you lusted after be your best friend’s brother would have been difficult. However, their attraction for each other leaped off the pages and I found Kate’s relationship with his daughter Rosie, dear.

  8. Nicola Marsh
    Sep 17, 2009 @ 04:06:25

    Niveau, you’re right, Two Weeks in the Magnate’s Bed isn’t ansty at all.

    It’s a tad confusing for Presents readers, because 2 Presents releases a month are books from the M&B Modern Heat series (one of the series I write for) so those books will be more fun, flirty, with less angst.

    Hope you enjoy the book, Mary!

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