Nov 28 2009
Dear Ms. Harte:
A story that looked, from the excerpt, like it was going to be a quick and cute little Thanksgiving reunion story turned out to be a lot deeper and a lot more…experimental than that. And while a deeper treatment of the issues that the characters have in the story probably wouldn’t have hurt, the skipping stones nature of the glimpses into their lives over a full year was interesting and emotional and satisfying.
The story begins with Emerson preparing his house for Thanksgiving with his friends Paul and Liz. Paul and Emerson are an on-again/off-again item where they basically get together once a year at Thanksgiving and eat and fuck and separate. Paul is a rising music star, Emerson is apparently a home-body. But Paul comes to Thanksgiving this year with a plan — a plan to convince Emerson to be with him full-time. And things seem to go well, until Emerson reveals the real reason he’d been pushing Paul away from him all these years.
It being a short story, I’m not going to reveal the reason. It’s not anything devastating to the story, although it’s pretty devastating to Emerson who has to deal with it. Emerson and Paul get their happy ending, but they have to work hard at it. They have to overcome Emerson’s issue and Paul’s own realization of his selfishness. However, in some respects, I think they don’t have to work hard enough. Emerson’s got this problem he’s had his whole life and while it takes a year for him to control it with Paul in his life, it ONLY takes a year for him to control it, and that doesn’t seem like enough time.
The narrative is constructed in snapshot pictures of their relationship through a year from Thanksgiving to Thanksgiving, with some snapshots of previous scenes. Each scene is very well done, emotionally wrenching and fun to read, but I felt the lack of the filler between the scenes, the lack of exactly how they got from scene to scene while dealing with the big issues on a day-to-day basis.
But for a short little holiday story, it was fun and while it was at times frustrating, I liked the almost experimental nature of the narrative. The story is bigger than just the holiday scenes, though, so it’s not solely a holiday feelgood story. And that’s the joy as well as the problem: it was bigger and could easily and happily have been longer than the 70-odd pages it was.
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