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REVIEW: Carolina’s Walking Tour by Lesley-Anne McLeod

Dear Mrs. McLeod,

carolinas-walking-tour.jpgI have a soft spot for the unheralded people of the world finding love. People not as beautiful or dazzling, not as charming or glib as those who easily command the spotlight. Yet at the same time, I don’t want authors to pour misery on the head of a lead character thereby making me pity them more than sympathize with them. “Carolina’s Walking Tour” handles my concerns nicely.

Miss Carolina Finmere is one of those who hug the edges of a party, who might take a minute to formulate a reply to a comment but who notices much and dares to dream. Lord Alexander Quainton is one she notices but whom she would never have approached except for her commanding grandmother’s insistence. Long acquainted with his mother, her grandmother serves as a source of information about Alexander’s wartime injuries.

Quiet Carolina is astonished when he asks her to accompany him on a walk through Bath. Thus begins their summer long rambles through and around the resort town. And slowly, almost unperceived by Carolina herself, she begins to blossom into a woman of a little more confidence, a little more presence. And when faced with a future without the man she’s gently fallen for, Carolina decides to take the boldest step of her young life.

bath-pulteney-bridge.jpgI like that Carolina’s personality doesn’t so much change as she gains the courage to show who she really is. She reminds me a little of some of Carla Kelly’s reluctant heroines who shine only in the eyes of their beloved. At story’s end, Carolina hasn’t been transformed into a show stopping femme fatale but her inner happiness does bring a blush to her cheeks and a brighter sparkle to her eyes. Indeed she won’t be the aging antidote she feared she’d become.

Alexander is a little more of a martyr than I’d like though thankfully we don’t see this much. He has suffered much, both physically and emotionally. He also knows that the people back home don’t want to hear the gruesome details of what their soldiers are enduring in Spain and thus must keep his concerns for his still fighting comrades to himself. He wants no pity and must be sure he’ll get none from Carolina before he’ll reach for the happiness he desires with her.

Ebooks are proving to be the source for the more traditional style regency that Signet once provided to readers. I’ve not yet tried one of your longer books but both short stories have proved to be delightful. B


available as an ebook from Uncial Press or Fictionwise

Another long time reader who read romance novels in her teens, then took a long break before started back again about 15 years ago. She enjoys historical romance/fiction best, likes contemporaries, action- adventure and mysteries, will read suspense if there's no TSTL characters and is currently reading very few paranormals.


  1. GrowlyCub
    Mar 20, 2008 @ 17:30:24

    Oh, that sounds lovely, and here I was talking about not reading historicals/regencies any longer… guess I’ll eat those words. :)

  2. Jayne
    Mar 20, 2008 @ 18:24:06

    GrowlyCub, I don’t know if anyone is still publishing trad style regencies (ie little to no sex) in paperback/hardcover anymore. Sheri Cobb South had one a few years ago through Five Star Press but that’s the last I remember.

  3. (Jān)
    Mar 20, 2008 @ 19:07:34

    Didn’t she do a Signet once? I seem to remember reading one. At any rate, I’m glad Regency authors are finding a home online, because I really miss the trad style books. Thanks for the review Jayne!

  4. Jayne
    Mar 21, 2008 @ 06:52:48

    Jan I can’t remember if she has or not. She has written 3-4 trad novel ebooks that are at Awestruck and Uncial Press.

  5. Jane
    Mar 21, 2008 @ 07:53:06

    I love, love trad regencies. I’ll be picking this one up.

  6. Lesley-Anne McLeod
    Apr 14, 2008 @ 15:07:43

    I’m so glad you liked Carolina’s Walking Tour, Jayne. Thanks for taking the time to read and review it!

    Carolina’s change was very subtle, and I’m honoured by the comparison with Carla Kelly’s heroines. Carla Kelly is such a wonderful writer; one of the very best, I think. I’m happy Alexander didn’t come across as too much of a martyr; he certainly didn’t see himself as one. He was just trying to cope as best he could.

    I really liked the cover that Shakoriel did for me on this book. I hope readers enjoy it also~!

    Thanks again,

  7. Jayne
    Apr 14, 2008 @ 16:36:38

    I do like the cover very much. Is it the same artist who did the one for “Comet Wine?”

  8. Lesley-Anne McLeod
    Apr 16, 2008 @ 12:25:40

    Yes, Shakoriel has done all my covers except one. I think she’s given my work a really distinctive look. Glad you like it!

  9. Lesley-Anne McLeod
    Apr 30, 2008 @ 15:12:09

    I have completely updated my website, it’s all new and has a new address
    Please come and visit and change your bookmarks!
    Hope you like it!

  10. Jayne
    Apr 30, 2008 @ 17:58:37

    Oh and you have free short stories too! Wonderful.

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