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REVIEW: The Cinderella Bride by Barbara Wallace

“Secretary Emma O’Rourke keeps her head down and works hard. Now, summoned to bring back the heir of Kent Hotels, she suddenly has to step out of the shadows-.

Unshaven and jaded, Gideon Kent has been sailing the world too long. As he docks, he’s surprised to find Emma waiting for him.

Until now he’s refused to resume the role he was born for-but the oh-so-diligent and pretty Miss O’Rourke might just change his mind-.

Gideon Kent will show Emma that Prince Charming certainly does exist!”

Dear Ms. Wallace,

Congratulations on your first published book. I’ve mentioned in reviews before that I like the Harlequin Romance imprint for it’s more realistic take on CEO romances and your book is no exception. Gideon Kent might be filthy rich but he’s also a nice guy. Emma O’Rouke is a secretary, albeit one who is highly valued by her employer, but she certainly doesn’t have “Wipe Your Feet” stamped on her forehead.

The Cinderella Bride by Barbara WallaceNo, Emma’s issue is self effacement and her “Little Matchstick girl” shtick wore thin. I’m not fond of martyrs and even though Emma does have reason and we are told she’s really only pragmatic, I kept thinking – go for it girl. Enjoy this pampering a little. But then when Gideon and Emma ignite, she tosses all common sense to the wind even though he’s shown no signs of wanting forever much less actually saying anything. I guess when she’s held herself to these strict standards we’re supposed to expect a hard fall but it was too abrupt a change for me.

I think you did do a good job showing Gideon slowly changing from just lusting after Emma to falling in love with the actual woman. He admires her mind, her organization, her loyalty, her intelligence and seems to value her opinion. He also discovers the thrill of just making her happy, making her eyes light up with pleasure about something – like dinner or the dress or the boat. And they do seem to connect over understanding how family can hurt you. I also like that in the end, he does the chasing after her.

The ending scenes, when Gideon gets hoisted on his own “I don’t do relationships or forevah crap” petard were fun as Emma twists him inside out – or rather he twists himself when she turns the tables and pushes him away. Lots of befuddled Gideon scenes. I do like that Emma doesn’t take a lot of crap from Gideon. When he pushes her about working too hard for his grandmother she fires right back at him. As I mentioned earlier, at least she has something of a spine.

We learn the characters as we go and I thank you for the lack of info dumpage. But then there isn’t really a lot to learn. Gideon’s secret is revealed fairly quickly as are Emma’s problems with her mother. Most everyone else in the story has short cameo appearances. And even then, we hear about them but don’t see them much.

And then several opportunities for conflict are ignored or foreshortened. At one point, Gideon mentions one of his cousins and Emma appears not to like the guy but after one query from Gideon, this is totally dropped. Gideon and his parents seem to dislike each other but there are just a few short scenes with his father then -> detente is achieved between them but nothing is either shown or told about his mother. Emma’s mother has her usual short fling then meltdown but we see only a bit then, voila, it’s over.

When I finished the book, my thoughts were “nice, harmless Harlequin. Short. Whoa, it’s short. Cuts to the chase without a lot of extraneous stuff which is good if you want streamlined stories. Bad if you want depth.” Love the kitty though. Kittehs rule. C

~Jayne

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Another long time reader who read romance novels in her teens, then took a long break before started back again about 15 years ago. She enjoys historical romance/fiction best, likes contemporaries, action- adventure and mysteries, will read suspense if there's no TSTL characters and is currently reading very few paranormals.

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  2. Vi
    Feb 05, 2011 @ 17:28:11

    For some reason, I want to read to this book despite the C grade. I think a “nice, harmless
    Harlequin” is perfect for this windy, snowy day.

  3. Kitten
    Feb 05, 2011 @ 18:54:13

    I agree, Vi! It seems like such a nice uncomplicated read for tonight. I haven’t been using my nook much recently, but that might change after my son goes to bed.

  4. Jayne
    Feb 05, 2011 @ 18:58:16

    @Kitten: Yes, uncomplicated is a nice way to describe it.

  5. Jayne
    Feb 05, 2011 @ 19:04:08

    @Vi: The Harlequin Romance line doesn’t usually get super angsted out nor does it have asshat heroes. It’s a line that’s worked well for me so far.

  6. Barbara Wallace
    Feb 05, 2011 @ 21:30:46

    Oh Vi and Kitten – you made me smile. Thanks for thinking the book sounds good despite the C rating.

    And for the record, I think Jayne made some very valid points – things to keep in mind as I write future books. Thanks for the review.

  7. Penelope
    Feb 06, 2011 @ 06:50:26

    Hi Jayne! I don’t read too many Harlies, but I really liked this one. I thought it rose above the Cinderella transformation cliche, and was a very sweet and satisfying story. I loved the grandmother CEO who was addicted to her soap operas! Gideon was a great hero…an awesome mix of rugged and charming, and I liked Emma’s pragmatic and loyal character. My only criticism was that the ending wrapped things up too quickly. This was exactly what I expected reading a Harlequin romance. Short and sweet.

  8. Jayne
    Feb 06, 2011 @ 08:12:11

    @Barbara Wallace: Based on the strengths of this book, I expect we’ll be seeing a lot of your books in the future.

  9. Barbara Wallace
    Feb 06, 2011 @ 13:06:02

    @Jayne: Thanks Jayne. Like I said, I thought you had some very valid comments regarding the pacing and length, etc. I appreciate the feedback.

    Barb

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