Oct 20 2012
Dear Ms. Walker:
I really enjoyed book 2 in the series, but the problems that affected my enjoyment of book 1 and in book 2 were magnified in this one and I am sorry to say I will be leaving this series behind after “Rev It Up”.
“Rev It Up” like the two books before it in the series is about unrequited friends to lovers. I wished there had been some kind of change in the dynamic. Why three books with such similar tropes?
Jake the Snake* Sommers and Michelle Carter had feelings for each other but Jake pushed Michelle away, fearing he would not be good for her. She ended up marrying one of his Navy SEAL teammates who subsequently died in gunfire in Afghanistan. Jake is beset with guilt but five years later, Jake is working for Michelle’s brother and determined to win her over. The series centers around a paramilitary organization, Black Knights, Inc., headed by Frank (“Boss”) Carter which is headquartered in Chicago and operates out of a custom bike and car shop. Jake has left the SEALs to join the group.
The dialect that everyone spoke with in the book was distracting. The number of apostrophes used in place of letters in this book must be a new record. Everyone was dropping letters from Shell thinking about Jake (A California surfer ’til the day he died) to a Cajun member of the team (How d’ya think she’s gonna feel about havin’ you back around?”) to Jake (“Dunno, brohah,” he wheezed).
The romance read weak for me and and I suppose that is why there is plenty of time given to a secondary unrequited love storyline that I presume is a sequel and the suspense angle which involves a bounty being placed on each one of the BKI operators and conveniently places Michelle in danger so that she is in need of protection from Jake.
There are at least five different points of view in the story: Michelle, Jake, Vanessa (future heroine), Rock (future hero) and the villain. I wasn’t even sure why we got the creepy villain’s POV as it did not add tension to the story.
The storyline involving the kid seemed ridiculously over the top and used only to provide conflict in the relationship in order to elongate the romance given that Jake was chasing Michelle around declaring his undying love from the opening of the book.
In the end, I was just worn down by the predictability of the romance. It didn’t bring anything new to the table, not in terms of the villain driven by revenge, nor in the “I’m not good enough for you” romantic conflict.
This may be a case where “Rev It Up” would work better for newcomers to the series than long time series readers. I was frustrated with the lack of series continuity, the repetitive emotional trope, and the overuse of dialect to create flavor and character differences. Newbies to the series wouldn’t be as adversely affected. C
*(I know, it was SO HARD for me to get over this guy’s name)