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REVIEW: The Mark of the Midnight Manzanilla by Lauren Willig

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In October of 1806, the Little Season is in full swing, and Sally Fitzhugh has had enough of the endless parties and balls. With a rampant vampire craze sparked by the novel The Convent of Orsino, it seems no one can speak of anything else. But when Sally hears a rumor that the reclusive Duke of Belliston is an actual vampire, she cannot resist the challenge of proving such nonsense false. At a ball in Belliston Square, she ventures across the gardens and encounters the mysterious Duke.

Lucien, Duke of Belliston, is well versed in the trouble gossip can bring. He’s returned home to dispel the rumors of scandal surrounding his parents’ deaths, which hint at everything from treason to dark sorcery. While he searches for the truth, he welcomes his fearsome reputation—until a woman is found dead in Richmond. Her blood drained from her throat.

Lucien and Sally join forces to stop the so-called vampire from killing again. Someone managed to get away with killing the last Duke of Belliston. But they won’t kill this duke—not if Sally has anything to say about it.

Dear Ms. Willig,

I always eagerly anticipate a new Pink Carnation novel, partly to see who will be the main characters and partly to see what amazing title it will have. When I saw the vampire element in the description for “The Mark of the Midnight Manzanilla,” I thought “How cool. She’s incorporated elements of a popular paranormal genre into a historical story at a point in time when it might actually have happened.” Well done. What wasn’t so well done for me was the way the circular dialog made the action seem like it dragged along.

As the book gets going, I was dismayed at the very cutesy opening and dialog between Sally and Lucien which reminds me a lot of the “around and around and around” stuff I last noticed in ““Night Jasmine.” Especially when they’re talking and arguing over the dead body of the young woman at Lucien’s sister’s coming out ball. They seem to stand there and discuss the situation for a good 15 minutes before doing anything. And unless it’s a very, very small dwelling, The Happy Home Life scene at Turnip’s house seems a bit too cosy for Lucien to be able to overhear what happens in another room parlor, smell the cinnamon from the kitchen and hear jam smeared Parsnip running from the nursery.

Still, the plot and possible reasons for French spies being involved in Lucien’s family’s murder is clever and realistic. I’m all over historical plots that actually use history in them and have it make sense.

But the first 2/3 of the book seemed to be little but Sally and Lucien twittering and nattering at each other and no doing. It’s very bubbly and very sparkly but it got maddening after a while when action got sacrificed for fizz. Forward motion in the plot lumbers along at a stultifying pace all in the name of more dialog that goes nowhere. I know this is a series that takes jabs at the overabundance of historical spies but even with that I have my limit of tolerance.

Yet just as I was wondering if I needed to start skimming, it clicked into place for me. I will admit to feeling exactly about Sally and Lucien as you wanted – namely that Sally is a yappy puppy, busy body and Lucien had been ignoring his ducal duty. How do I know this is what you were aiming for? Because Sally and Lucien call each other on it which leads to them beginning to examine their behavior and improve themselves. At this point, things definitely started looking up.

The way Sally charges to Lucien’s rescue is rather sweet and yay for the fact that she actually manages to do some good while charging. The villain’s identity and reasons for why he does as he does make sense and don’t appear out of the blue. And the stoat – I have to say I love the stoat plus the fact that we get to see lots of Turnip and Arabella.

I’m also getting more into the slow but steady relationship between Colin and Eloise. This little bit of story is crucial for them and I think the book ends in a great place with options and a twinkling future. Eloise might just have a dazzling career vs boring academia.

If this book didn’t totally rock my reading world, I have to say I’m stoked about whose story is next. I’ve been waiting for this one. C+

~Jayne

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Another long time reader who read romance novels in her teens, then took a long break before started back again about 15 years ago. She enjoys historical romance/fiction best, likes contemporaries, action- adventure and mysteries, will read suspense if there's no TSTL characters and is currently reading very few paranormals.

7 Comments

  1. Laura Vivanco
    Aug 07, 2014 @ 14:54:29

    I’ve heard the word “manzanilla” used in Spain but I’m fairly sure that in the UK this type of plant is only known as “camomile.” Are there Spanish spies around in this novel or is this US usage?

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  2. Jayne
    Aug 07, 2014 @ 15:07:36

    @Laura Vivanco: The hero’s mother was born and raised in Martinique and was an amateur botanist who grew exotic plants in greenhouses on the ducal estate after her marriage.

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  3. Laura Vivanco
    Aug 07, 2014 @ 15:15:21

    @Jayne: Thanks! I’ll assume it was a non-native variety.

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  4. Jayne
    Aug 07, 2014 @ 15:20:20

    @Laura Vivanco: This is the plant being referred to – http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Manchineel

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  5. Laura Vivanco
    Aug 07, 2014 @ 15:30:25

    @Jayne: Someone evidently didn’t tell the cover artist, because that’s camomile/manzanilla on the cover, not manzanilla de la muerte.

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  6. Ducky
    Aug 08, 2014 @ 17:33:41

    I am looking forward to reading this one – and especially next years Pink Carnation finale.

    One thing I have noticed starting with the last book PURPLE PLUMERIA is that the covers look very generic and blah now. The earlier Pink Carnation books have such beautiful covers.

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  7. Jayne
    Aug 09, 2014 @ 01:50:55

    @Ducky: She is holding the type of flower described in the book and the backdrop is also important in the book but yeah, the most recent covers have strayed from those earlier ones you’re talking about.

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