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REVIEW: Mercy by HelenKay Dimon


Dear Ms. Dimon,

I’ve read and loved some of your small town contemporaries and there are more on Mt. TBR.  I tried one of your erotic shorts a while ago and decided that I preferred your straight contemporaries.  I thought you wrote sex scenes well but there wasn’t enough story/romance in it for me to be completely satisfied.  When I saw Mercy first listed at Goodreads, I thought it would be worth taking a punt – perhaps good sex scenes and a longer format would equal a win for me.  The blurb was certainly intriguing too.

After she infiltrated his business and betrayed his trust, a disavowed CIA agent must seek sanctuary in the bedroom of a man who will either help her, kill her, or bring her to her knees…

Becca Ford is on her own. Eight months after she headed up a sting operation to take down millionaire club owner Jarrett Holt, the other agents in her special ops team have been eliminated under odd circumstances, and she needs a place to hide.

Jarrett is a man who prefers darkness to light. He deals in the only truly valuable currency—information—and his supper club caters to an exclusive clientele. It was an uncharacteristic moment of weakness when he let a woman into his life. But it’s not luck that the criminal charges disappeared . . . as did the evidence.

When Becca returns to the club seeking his help, Jarrett doesn’t want to hear her story. But he does want her body, and demands that she give it to him. He’ll keep her safe—for now—but it’ll be in his bed and on his terms, until he says they’re done.

As is obvious from the blurb, Becca and Jarrett have history and it is really there they fell in love.  So this story isn’t so much a courtship story as unravelling a big misunderstanding (and solving a mystery). Big mis is my least favourite trope but here I could certainly understand why both felt betrayed in one way or another.  It’s that rare case in a contemporary where it was understandable why both would be mistrustful and dole out information slowly.  And, even when the truth was told, it wasn’t automatically believed.  That made sense too, in the context of the story.

Becca and Jarrett apparently always had a very physical relationship.  Jarrett was destroyed by Becca’s betrayal. She was working undercover to obtain information about him and when he was arrested, she was giving him a blowjob. The arresting officer was Elijah Sterling – a colleague of Becca’s – and Elijah didn’t even let Jarrett do his pants up before leading him in handcuffs past a parade of media.  Jarrett had deep feelings for Becca and he’s not a man to trust or love easily.  When Becca turns up at his club seeking sanctuary, he thinks he wants revenge.  He wants to get her out of his system and he thinks pure unemotional fucking will do that (as if it ever does in Romancelandia). Some of the interaction between Becca and Jarrett skirts a fine line on the consent issue – but Becca always makes it clear – both to Jarrett and to the reader that she does in fact consent.  Even when Jarrett denies her clothing for the first few days.

This is an erotic romance with emphasis on erotic.  The sex is plentiful, detailed and ubiquitous. For the first two thirds of the book there is barely a scene which does not involve sex.  I admit that I found it a bit wearing and frustrating – I wanted to get to the explanation of what had happened, the investigation of who was behind it all and to the part where they were talking with more than their bodies.  I’m a person who normally does read all the sex scenes and is quite happy to read a story which is full of them.  But here, I felt fatigued by it after a while. The narrative would progress and tantalise me with some tidbit or fact and then the sex would interrupt it.  While there were some aspects of their relationship which were played out through their intimacy – the first time Jarrett kisses Becca on the lips really says something – I felt that many of the sex scenes interrupted the story rather than helped tell it.

There is another romantic storyline featuring a gay couple and I was happy to see that in a mainstream release.  Those sex scenes were also plentiful (and there was no shying away from the gay sex which I also appreciated) but I felt a little lost as to why the pair had anything but a physical connection.

This book is a lot darker than a one such as Lean on Me  – with intrigue, spies, black ops and subterfuge being the order of the day. The sex was well written and very hot but, for me, there was too much of it and it got in the way of the story.  Jarrett and his Club Manager and friend Wade Royer, both have dark pasts which are not whitewashed.  They were violent criminals but Jarrett decided he was going legit and he insisted Wade come with him.  Jarrett is a ruthless businessman and his history means he’s not afraid of getting his hands dirty.  Becca, for all that she is a CIA agent, has used sex and subterfuge to get information and nab criminals – she’s no goody-two shoes.  She’s very tough and strong and smart.  When Jarrett was arrested for selling drugs she felt betrayed on a personal level (as she had fallen in love with him and believed him to a legitimate businessman – finding the drugs came as a huge shock) and she wasn’t thinking clearly.  So it made sense that she wasn’t in a place to ask the relevant questions and didn’t see that there were things which didn’t add up.

Towards the end, things became a little harder for me to follow but I expect that’s because I’m not very good at mysteries.  I certainly bought the connection between Jarrett and Becca, but I would have liked more character development and a little less sex. (Does anyone believe I just said that? *checks self for a fever*).

Grade: C+



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Kaetrin started reading romance as a teen and then took a long break, detouring into fantasy and thrillers. She returned to romance in 2008 and has been blogging since 2010. She reads contemporary, historical, a little paranormal, urban fantasy and romantic suspense, as well as erotic romance and more recently, new adult. She loves angsty books, funny books, long books and short books. The only thing mandatory is the HEA. Favourite authors include Mary Balogh, Susanna Kearsley, Joanna Bourne, Tammara Webber, Kristen Ashley, Shannon Stacey, Sarah Mayberry, JD Robb/Nora Roberts, KA Mitchell, Marie Sexton, Patricia Briggs, Ilona Andrews, just to name a few. You can find her on Twitter: @kaetrin67.


  1. Isobel Carr
    May 08, 2014 @ 14:10:56

    I’m confused. This reads like he’s arrested on US soil by a CIA agent in a CIA sting. The CIA isn’t allowed to operate that way inside the US. That’s the role of the FBI.

  2. Kaetrin
    May 08, 2014 @ 21:32:59

    @Isobel Carr: There was some discussion about that in the book. The “branch” of the CIA that Elijah and Becca work for are super seekrit but they appear to operate everywhere.

    But yeah, suspension of disbelief is required I think.

  3. Angela
    May 09, 2014 @ 06:25:08

    I have this on my wishlist – I’m glad you pointed out the CIA operating in the US thing (as that normally bothers the hell out of me), so it’ll be good to know – going in – that I’m going to have to let that go.

  4. Isobel Carr
    May 09, 2014 @ 09:01:56

    @Kaetrin: That’s like “go to prison” illegal. The law is SUPER clear (and yeah, as a Fed who has to deal with multiple agencies and work out who has jurisdiction pretty often, I’m a stickler about this stuff).

  5. Kaetrin
    May 09, 2014 @ 19:21:08

    @Isobel Carr I know the CIA isn’t supposed to operate within the US but there was a context to it in the book. I think there is some suspension of disbelief required in most romantic suspense to one degree or another. But it wasn’t a thing which bothered me really in the book.

    It’s actually something I could see happening (the CIA operating in the US) even though it’s illegal.

    Like I said above, Spectrum (I *think* it’s called Spectrum, I don’t have the book handy) is a super covert section of the CIA. They don’t work with anybody so jurisdiction decisions aren’t an issue. In effect they are a rogue agency. I’ve read about that kind of thing in many thrillers and RS. I appreciate you might not be able to enjoy a book with this set up because of your work knowledge but I can go with it.

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