Romance, Historical, Contemporary, Paranormal, Young Adult, Book reviews, industry news, and commentary from a reader's point of view

REVIEW: One Wrong Step by Laura Griffin

Dear Ms. Griffin,

Your second book, “One Wrong Step” came to me in the form of an arc. An incomplete arc since the last bit of the story appears to be missing. However, the romantic suspense portion was all there and I think I can guess the rest. I’d not heard of you before so went into the story knowing nothing about your previous characters or the plot of the first book. Luckily, you did a good job filling me in on the backstory. What didn’t work so well…hmmm, let’s just proceed.

One Wrong Step by Laura GriffinUsually the suspense aspect of these books is what doesn’t work for me. In this case however, the suspense part was good. Sure Celie does insist on taking part in an FBI operation but since the kidnappers/drug dealers had insisted on her being there for the money hand off and there were no agents close enough in looks to mimic her, okay. I thought the reason behind the last ditch return of the villain made sense based on the “honor” system of the culture so again, okay.

I enjoyed the FBI agents. They seemed believable (from what I know), acted intelligently (except for one dufus), kept their heads on straight in the crisis moments and did their jobs. And not having the money for 24/7 agent protection for Celie seems far more life like than some stuff I’ve read in romance novels. I also thought the reporters and newspaper people were well portrayed. Yeah they’re going to piss some people off in pursuit of a story but that’s what they do.

Where this book failed for me was in the two romantic leads. The heroine is a lying wannabe martyr – and I mean martyr way beyond the usual “I must save the world” martyr heroines. At one point she was ticking off a laundry list of things she felt responsible for and I felt like adding global warming, species extinction, $4 a gallon gasoline and toxic waste cleanup to it. The hero was just staring at her in disbelief and I was too. Get over yourself woman.

And then she tells the hero that she really does know where the $250,000 in laundered drug money her husband stole from a drug cartel is. She explains how she found it and how stunned she was since her husband had cleaned out their bank accounts before fleeing the country. John asks her why she didn’t contact the FBI and her lame ass response is that she though maybe this was money Robert had earned legitimately. WTF? And did it never occur to this idiot that when the cartel caught up with Robert and realized he didn’t have the cashola, they’d come after her pretty little derriere? Did she honestly believe that their threats against her family weren’t for real? I was slack jawed.

But wait, Celie isn’t the only one I didn’t like. The studly, ladies man hero, John, isn’t too much better. His ‘sleeping around and sneaking out of women’s homes the morning after’ seems to be over by the time the story starts but John can say some hateful things. I was as mad as he was after he thought Celie might be using him as a sperm donor in her desperate attempts to get pregnant but then he went into vitriol overdrive and uttered some of the most vile things I’ve heard out of a “hero’s” mouth in a long time.

As the book progressed, I started writing things in the margins.

“Martyr!” “WTF?” “Now why did she do that?!” “Yes she is a lier.” “Why would they be bluffing?!” “What the hell good does bullets in her purse do? Put them in the damn gun!” “Boy, he’s a shit.” “He’s even shittier.” “What!” “Kill him.” “WTF is this 180 turnaround?” “Then they’re screwing? After those awful words?” Then last but not least , “And?” when the arc ended with them in Russia in the adoption agency. I’m sure this isn’t what an author wants readers thinking about the lead characters.

For a final grade, I balanced what I though of the suspense vs the romance and came up with a C-

~Jayne

Goodreads | Amazon | BN | nook | Sony | Kobo

Another long time reader who read romance novels in her teens, then took a long break before started back again about 15 years ago. She enjoys historical romance/fiction best, likes contemporaries, action- adventure and mysteries, will read suspense if there's no TSTL characters and is currently reading very few paranormals.

11 Comments

  1. Susan G
    Jul 11, 2008 @ 07:32:29

    Unfortunately my regular copy of this book ended in the same place, Jayne. That was a “WTF, really?!?” ending for me, too. And based on Celie and John’s actions and personalities during the story I found myself feeling sorry for the orphan girl they chose to adopt. Can you imagine the dysfunction in that family?

    For what’s it is worth to other readers I agree with your entire review. But I also want to say that I really enjoyed Griffin’s first book MUCH more. I am hopeful that her third release will be back to that standard.

  2. Jayne
    Jul 11, 2008 @ 07:38:39

    No shit, Susan. The final copy of the book ended there too? That’s really a WTF for the publisher. But then Jane just got an arc that has line edits all through it. I don’t want to complain about free reading material but, um, seriously publicity staff. Read what you’re sending out.

  3. jane
    Jul 11, 2008 @ 07:59:37

    so the finished copy of the book has an ending that makes the story seem unfinished to the point that readers feel like some of the book must have accidentally left off? That is some kind of crazy. And yes, the line edits make the arc impossible to read which is too bad because I tried and was moderately interested.

  4. HelenKay Dimon
    Jul 11, 2008 @ 14:18:34

    Any chance the author was going for one of those endings that hangs out there? Maybe just the execution is poor…? Really, the idea of the publisher forgetting to slap the ending pages on there before going to print is just too awful.

  5. Jayne
    Jul 11, 2008 @ 20:43:54

    It definitely just cuts off. I don’t have the arc anymore but it doesn’t look like the author meant to end it that way.

  6. Dear Author: Romance Book Reviews, Author Interviews, and Commentary » REVIEW: Thread of Fear by Laura Griffin
    Oct 16, 2008 @ 15:00:29

    […] impressed me with your response to my review of your previous book, “One Wrong Step.” When I finished it, I wasn’t sure I would care to read another of your books. But […]

  7. Jane
    Aug 23, 2011 @ 20:42:18

    Ah, I was on the fence about this book (I’ve been reading through her backlist ever since I read the Snapped ARC). I was very hesitant about the book and am glad I read your review first.

  8. Jayne
    Aug 24, 2011 @ 05:34:20

    @Jane: I saw someone mention this book recently and say it’s the only one of her backlist that they couldn’t stand. I wouldn’t seek it out if I were you as she has plenty of much better books to enjoy.

  9. Jane
    Aug 24, 2011 @ 06:53:30

    @Jayne Did you read her first one?

  10. Jayne
    Aug 24, 2011 @ 07:04:33

    @Jane: Come to think of it, no I never went back and read that one.

  11. Daily Deals: A few recommended reads along with links to a list of discounts
    Dec 01, 2013 @ 09:33:20

    […] looking back on the archives, Jayne reviewed this title but the book was incomplete and gave it a […]

%d bloggers like this: