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REVIEW: Thirteen by Kelley Armstrong

Dear Ms. Armstrong,

All things must come to an end. That includes your Women of the Otherworld series. I can’t believe it’s been over ten years since we were first introduced to Elena, the only female werewolf in existence. And while I’ve liked some books more than others, I still consider this series to be one of my comfort reads. It’s rare for me to find an author who fulfills that role for me so when I do, I tend to hold on with both hands through thick and thin.

13Not only does Thirteen wrap up the Otherworld series, it also concludes the three-book concluding arc featuring Savannah Levine. Introduced in the earliest books of the series, Savannah has grown up before us loyal readers. This has both its advantages and disadvantages. I’ve gotten the strong impression that I’m in the minority that likes Savannah as a character and protagonist.

I suppose I just understand the reason behind her personality, being the daughter of the infamous witch, Eve, and the Cabal sorcerer and leader, Kristoff Nash. Yes, she’s cocky and overconfident but it was only recently that she had any reason not to be. Before Savannah was de-powered at the end of Waking of Witch, she had serious firepower and has had it since she was very young. Growing up like that, in addition to bearing the weight of her infamous parents, I don’t find it surprising to see her turn out the way she did. So in a way, I consider these three final books as a way to bring about Savannah’s growth and force her into maturity regarding her powers.

With the previous books, Waking the Witch and Spellbound, my main complaint had been that they were noticeably set-up books. Sure, plot happened but as a reader, I was well-aware this wasn’t the final battle and that everything happening was only preparing for the endgame to come. Thirteen doesn’t disappoint on that score.

In fact, so much plot and story happened in Thirteen that I felt a little resentful that similar awesome shenanigans couldn’t have been included in the prior two Savannah books. Being the culmination of a long-running series where everything finally comes together, I’m deliberately vague so as to not spoil – because everything I could say about the plot is literally a spoiler. Suffice it to say, we see cameos from everyone, all the Otherworld heroines we’ve met over the years: Elena, Paige, Jaime, Eve, and Hope. Some readers may find this gimmicky or unsatisfying, especially if they dislike Savannah. I saw it as a way of saying goodbye to these women, and I liked that.

The main conflict in Thirteen is huge and a potentially reality-changing catastrophe. Laws of nature and magic are being broken and that’s never good. You know it’s serious business when both demons and angels are getting involved and trying to pull strings from the other side.

In terms of Savannah’s character arc, I liked the storyline involving Eve. Savannah never really got that relationship, so it was nice to see it finally happen even if it was only for a short time. On the other hand, I found the constant kidnapping to be irritating. Yes, they poke fun at it in-text but come on. And while I like the idea of Savannah being de-powered to cure her overdependence on magic and spellwork, I really did not care for the resolution of that plotline and how handwavy it. It was kind of a letdown.

Another staple of the Otherworld universe is Savannah’s crush on Adam Vasic, a half-demon and firestarter. Through the years, that crush has turned to love but because they became best friends along the way, Savannah didn’t want to jeopardize that and was willing to let that go. But the events of the past two books made it obvious that Adam reciprocated her feelings and in Thirteen, that relationship finally reaches fruition. I’m normally a huge fan of the friends to lovers trope but I was underwhelmed here.

I’ve spent a lot of time trying to parse out why. No matter how many years pass, I still find it cute when a young character grows up and finally catches her crush. And while there is an age difference, it definitely did not bother me here because in my head, I still see Adam as some slacker college kid even though he hasn’t been that in a long time. In the end, I think my feelings stem from the fact that while it was a fairly realistic portrayal of the dancing around friends do right before they become lovers, it was also a pretty undramatic rendition of it. Some readers like that but there’s a part of me that loves the dramatic, especially when it comes to storylines involving emotions and the heart, and this sadly did not do it for me.

And finally, I received a physical copy of this book from Penguin so I was able to read the extra story about Elena and the North American pack, “From Russia With Love.” In all honesty, I’m glad I did get this version because the book makes what I consider to be an odd choice by including the prologue to Bitten at the front of the novel. I, myself, was not a fan of that choice because as far as I’m concerned it didn’t add anything to the narrative’s presentation, but it does serve as a good counterpoint to “From Russia With Love” as the end. Looking back at it, I see them serving as bookends. As with many of the short stories set in the Otherworld universe, I wouldn’t call “From Russia With Love” a must-read but it does bring the North American pack into the future, so to speak. If you read the story, you’ll know what I’m referring to.

Overall, despite some issues, I found Thirteen to be a satisfying conclusion to the Otherworld universe. (On the adult side anyway. I know there are YA novels set in this world.) It was also nice to see the past heroines of the Otherworld universe. None of them are in the same places as they were in their respective novels, and I like seeing that progression of time and evolution of character. A part of me will miss this world as a reader, but nothing lasts forever. And while it is an ending, I don’t consider this the ending. As with all things, life goes on and Thirteen leaves us with the impression that the same holds true for the Otherworld characters even if we, the readers, will no longer be witness to them. And I think that is a perfect ending. B

My regards,


Jia is an avid reader who loves fantasy and young adult novels. She's also currently dipping her toes in the new adult genre but remains unconvinced by the prevalent need for traumatic pasts. Her favorite authors are Michelle West and Jacqueline Carey. YA authors whose works she's enjoyed include Holly Black, Laini Taylor, Ally Carter, and Megan Miranda. Jia's on a neverending quest for novels with diverse casts and multicultural settings. Feel free to email her with recommendations at [email protected]!


  1. Lozza
    Aug 27, 2012 @ 12:25:46

    This was a “want to throw it against the wall” book for me, for the single reason that I was looking forward SO much to seeing more of Savannah and Adam’s relationship, and I was SO disappointed in what we got in the book. What I’ve really loved in all of the Otherworld books prior to this three-book arc, what I feel like Armstrong does so well, is interpersonal relationships. I think she does a great job at incorporating really subtle details that flesh out relationships, and I think she does a good job in these three books of establishing how close Savannah and Adam are… but another thing I’d loved about the previous books was the payoff. I loved the passion I felt between Elena and Clay, between Hope and Karl, between Paige and Lucas, and I thought that in prior books she did a really nice job of writing about intimacy in a way that was explicit enough to be satisfying and powerful, but not gratuitous or repetitive. I felt that all of these qualities were missing from Thirteen, and while I completely agree that the relationship was handled maturely and realistically, it left me with a serious case of reader blue balls.

  2. Brian
    Aug 27, 2012 @ 14:39:55

    Thanks for the review. I’m passing on this one right now at least partially due to the decision to leave “From Russia With Love” out of the ebook version. Right or wrong, it makes me feel like I’m a second class reader or something just because I don’t buy print copies anymore (I’ve read her explanations). I’ll wait for the mass market price drop.

  3. Ann Bruce
    Aug 27, 2012 @ 15:28:12

    I wasn’t able to finish Waking the Witch or Spellbound, so can Thirteen stand alone? I want to see how this series ends because I love Eve and her–at times, ruthless–practicality, but I can’t make myself slog through the first two books.

  4. Jia
    Aug 27, 2012 @ 15:43:36

    @Lozza: Yeah, the romance was short-changed in my opinion. It just lacked oomph, that spark that’s characterized all the other couples even when they weren’t my favorite characters! I don’t know. It seemed phoned in.

    @Brian: It’s so irritating that Penguin made that decision.

    @Ann Bruce: It stands well enough alone considering that it’s the culmination of a thirteen-book series and brings back elements and characters from all of them. Seriously, I’m not even joking. There are references to events from Waking the Witch and Spellbound but considering the fact that those books were pretty plot-lite in my opinion, I’m not sure ignorance about their respective storylines will be a detriment. Maybe try to get a copy from the library and see if the first few chapters make sense to you? It immediately picks up after the events of Spellbound.

  5. Jen
    Aug 27, 2012 @ 16:33:22

    Does anyone mind if I go on a mini-rant…? Not that this topic will be new to anyone here…

    I’ve been considering picking up this series lately, but I am so turned off by the prices. All of the books are $9.99 – both in pbk & e. (I prefer e.) I know from old reviews that this series used to be priced at $4.99-$6.99/ea, so what justifies the $9.99 price jump? Not only do I hate to spend so much on an e-book when it’s a new-to-me-author and I may not love it… but then, gasp! what if I do love it? If I get hooked, then there goes $100+ if I go on to buy all the books in the series at $9.99 a pop. (That’s a good problem, I know. But still.) I wish they would do an e-book bundle for series like this. I’m willing to pay $30-$40 at a pop and risk a new series if the value is there – and then you have a committed reader! Because otherwise, I can go on ebay and buy the whole series in print for $20. And then none of the money goes to the author (or publisher), which is sad.

    Grrr… Penguin! I shake my fist at you!

    So, now that I’ve ranted… I recently glommed on Ilona Andrews & Patricia Briggs, and OMG I loved them!! I am craving another strong female kick-ass heroine like Kate Daniels or Mercy Thompson. Is this a series I should jump into? Does anyone else have any other recs?

  6. Sofie
    Aug 27, 2012 @ 17:31:37

    Thanks for the review, Jia.

    I am not familiar with this series, but your reviews have never steered me wrong so I’m going to start out with the first book and see how I like it.

    Thanks, again.

  7. Jia
    Aug 27, 2012 @ 18:23:42

    @Sofie: Some of the books are definitely better than others. As I was saying to January earlier today, when Kelley Armstrong is on, she’s excellent. But when she’s not on, her books can be a bit of a mess.

    My favorites of the series are Bitten, Stolen, and No Humans Allowed. But there’s a little bit of everything for everyone with different types of supernatural heroines. Bitten & Stolen feature Elena, the only female werewolf, and No Humans Allowed features Jaime, the necromancer.

  8. Soifie
    Aug 28, 2012 @ 18:52:16

    Thanks, Jia. I like the idea of different heroines. I sometimes become bored with long series so changing the heroine may help. My give up number seems to be about 11 to 13 books, so I’ll let you know how it turns out.

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