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REVIEW: Unraveling by Elizabeth Norris

Dear Ms. Norris,

I admit I went into your debut novel not knowing much about it. I knew it was a YA. I had an idea about the basic set-up: a girl dies in a car accident and is brought back to life by a classmate. This somehow leads into a race against the clock to save the world which is about to be destroyed. Even the backcover blurb left me with more questions than answers. All these things piqued my interest enough to give your novel a try. It’s a decision I don’t regret.

Unraveling by Elizabeth NorrisIt’s the last days of summer before junior year, and Janelle Tenner is spending them as she normally would. She’s lifeguarding at the beach because if there’s one thing she excells at, it’s swimming. She has a new boyfriend and is excited about it — but she could do without the accompanying drama involving his ex-girlfriend.

Then she’s hit by a truck. It’s exactly like the stories say — she sees a bright light and scenes from her life flash before her eyes. Janelle knows she’s dying. But inexplicably, she’s brought back from the dead to find one of the loner boys from her high school, Ben Michaels, leaning over her. Janelle can’t explain why but just like she knew she’d died, she knew Ben somehow brought her back to life.

Even though Ben hangs out with the stoners at her high school, Janelle is curious. She tries to find out more about him — especially how he could have possibly healed her fatal injuries. At the same time, Janelle discovers her FBI agent father is looking into her accident and that it’s somehow connected to a major case he’s currently working on.

Janelle can’t help herself and snoops into her father’s files. What she finds leads her to believe that the FBI has discovered a bioweapon capable of unleashing a deadly virus. But once she discovers the secret behind Ben’s mysterious ability, Janelle learns that the bomb in FBI custody is something much, much worse.

Unraveling is what you get when you mix 24, Veronica Mars, and X-Files. The fast pace and countdown conceit is reminiscent of 24. Janelle Tenner reminds me of Veronica Mars in many ways — she’s the daughter of a law enforcement official and she’s clever and likes putting together cases. There’s also that incident at a party involving a roofie. As for the X-Files part, there’s a lot of weirdness taking place in the first half of the book. Corpses being found of people with severe radiation burns. The truck that hit Janelle is a make and model no one has heard of. And of course there’s Ben, who can bring people back from the dead.

It sounds like a lot but I thought the book made the various elements work. I admit I made the mistake of assuming this was going to be a paranormal novel. I suppose it was the part where Ben healed Janelle. I tend to associate that with paranormals and fantasies. But it’s not, and I don’t want other readers to go in with that expectation. Instead it’s a soft SF thriller. I call it soft SF because the science is not really delved into or explored as much as you’d find in the harder SF titles. I don’t mind this because I prefer soft SF to hard but readers who like their science fiction hard and technical will be dissatisfied. This is especially true in the second half of the book, after we discover what the deal with Ben, the countdown, and the bomb is.

This is one of those rare cases where I believed the instant love between Janelle and Ben. Janelle is drawn to him because he saved her life. It’s reasonable to expect her to be curious about him and his ability. When she discovers that there’s more than meets the eye, I found it easy to believe she’d fall in love with him. I also thought Ben’s attraction to Janelle was believable as well — harder to accomplish since in the hands of another author, I might have considered his feelings creepy considering the reason why he’s drawn to her and has always been drawn to her. But as with Janelle’s fascination with Ben, I think it makes for someone to be drawn to the person who saved their life.

I liked the depiction of Janelle’s home life. It has its good points, but it’s not perfect by any stretch of the imagination. She loves her FBI agent father but there’s a deep thread of resentment there because he’s never home. This wouldn’t be as big an issue if it weren’t for the fact that her mother is mentally ill and not even remotely functional. In effect, Janelle is left with the responsibility of taking care of her mother and also raising her younger brother. There’s a particularly poignant scene in the novel where Janelle realizes that she’s essentially her brother’s maternal figure so losing her would hit him far harder than losing either of his true parents. It’s a sad truth but a real one.

It was nice to see that Janelle’s friendships weren’t all sunshine and roses or doom and gloom. A lot of the time, it’s either one extreme or the other. Alex is her best friend and they help each other out all the time, but they have their disagreements. Ben’s best friend cannot stand Janelle, but he’s willing to put up with her for Ben’s sake. Janelle’s relationship with her former best friend is a mess and illustrates that sometimes you can’t find it in yourself to forgive. I think platonic relationships can be especially hard to depict in a nuanced fashion so I liked that we saw many different variations.

On the other hand, I would have liked for there to be more female characters that were on Janelle’s side. There’s her ex-best friend. There’s her current boyfriend ex-girlfriend. There’s her mother. These women were not there to support to Janelle and in many ways, were there to cause her more problems. With the focus on her FBI father, her father’s partner, Ben and his friends, and her best friend, it would have nice to have other female characters who didn’t fall into that category.

I can understand why some readers would find this book to be jumbled and unfocused. There’s a lot going on, and I don’t disagree that the narrative could be streamlined. I didn’t mind the way it was told, but I can see why some readers would be irritated. I will say that if you enjoyed Kate Elliott’s Cold Magic and the way that narrative was told, you will probably not mind Unraveling’s execution.

There are a few other quibbles. There’s an event that happens midway through the book. When it becomes obvious who the potential suspects are, the perpetrator ends up being painfully obvious. Alex, Janelle’s best friend, does something at the end that struck me as out of character. It seemed more like he did it because the plot required that he do it, not because it was something his character would do. The thread involving Janelle’s former best friend and her current boyfriend’s ex just trails off into nothingness. For that matter, her current boyfriend vanishes into obscurity after Janelle decides their relationship isn’t working out and that Ben is worth pursuing instead.

All that said, I did enjoy Unraveling and devoured it. My ARC is almost 450 pages long and I didn’t think the book read like it at all. It was enjoyable and I hope that more SF thrillers along this vein are soon to follow in the genre. Word of warning to readers though: while I thought the ending was appropriate and fitting, there’s a cliffhanger regarding the romantic plot. You’ll know what I mean if you read the book. B+

My regards,


Jia is an avid reader who loves fantasy and young adult novels. She's also currently dipping her toes in the new adult genre but remains unconvinced by the prevalent need for traumatic pasts. Her favorite authors are Michelle West and Jacqueline Carey. YA authors whose works she's enjoyed include Holly Black, Laini Taylor, Ally Carter, and Megan Miranda. Jia's on a neverending quest for novels with diverse casts and multicultural settings. Feel free to email her with recommendations at [email protected]!


  1. Kaetrin
    May 03, 2012 @ 04:33:30

    Thx for the review Jia. This one makes me want to give YA more space on my shelves. I’ll keep my eyes open for it – it doesn’t appear to be avaiable in ebook for me in Australia right now.

  2. Dabney
    May 03, 2012 @ 08:47:15

    “There’s also that incident at a party involving a roofie.”

    Damn you, Jia. I had forgotten how much I loved that first season of Veronica Mars. Still one of the best first kisses ever on the small screen.

  3. JMac
    May 03, 2012 @ 09:28:09

    The setup where the mysterious loner boy saves the girl sounds like that 90’s teen sci-fi show Roswell, which I think was based on a series of young adult books. In that show the girl also had a boyfriend but falls in love with a mystery boy who saves her life. He turns out to be an alien (not really a spoiler because it’s the whole setup for the show) and saved her because he had been in love with her from afar.
    I think it’s on Netflix Instant. If you can turn your brain off and like teen drama, the first season is pretty enjoyable.

  4. Victoria
    May 03, 2012 @ 09:44:07

    I read this recently too. What got me were a) the excess of coincidences (I buy the beach coincidences, because that’s how it started, but the fact that her father just HAPPENS to investigate this case? Ha.) and b) the insane amount of details she got absolutely wrong about the FBI, things you find on google. A supervisory special agent doesn’t have cases, only case agents have cases. A counterintelligence agent would not investigate a matter that is clearly Weapons o f Mass Destruction. Analysts do NOT carry guns and they are very, very seldom found on crime scenes. Nor can they flash credentials! That’s a major violation (not that I’m sure Barclay cares, but Janelle, as the daughter of an FBI agent, should know better.) Also, in what UNIVERSE would an agent bring case files home? That is such a staggering violation that I’m not sure why her father is even still in the FBI, let alone “in charge” of anything.

    The pacing was FLAWLESS, though, and I’m sure most people won’t care about inaccuracies. I found them distracting and irritating.

  5. Jia
    May 03, 2012 @ 11:06:49

    @Kaetrin: Too bad. I really wish the geographical restrictions for ebooks were lifted because they’re just kind of silly.

    @JMac: Aha, that explains why I kept thinking Ben was going to turn out to be an alien. (He’s not.) I remember watching a couple episodes of Roswell when it was airing.

    @Victoria: Every reader has things they can’t ignore in fiction. I admit I thought the FBI bits were a little… sketchy but that type of inaccuracy doesn’t throw me out of a book the same way bad biological science does.

  6. Karen D
    May 03, 2012 @ 12:20:55

    Hi Jia–could you comment on the level of sexual content, if any, in this novel? I’m trying to determine if it’s appropriate for my 13yo. It’s so difficult these days because YA doesn’t always mean it’s something I want my kid reading.

  7. Renda
    May 03, 2012 @ 13:23:21

    @Karen D:

    Me, too. But I tell you, it is impossible to keep ahead of mine anymore. I try to find out heat levels at various sites, but I can’t get the info I need/want consistently. I love that she reads and I love that she reads for quality in quantity, but YA is as meaningless as just saying fiction. There are some YAs that are for kids and some for late teens and young 20s.

  8. Marumae
    May 03, 2012 @ 14:06:33

    Hmmm…I remember reading a summary for this expecting it to be another YA paranormal romance and I sorta put it down (completely burned out on Paranormal), but your review makes it sound intriguing as heck. I think I might go hunt this down when I can and pick it up!

  9. Maili
    May 04, 2012 @ 01:05:46


    Also, in what UNIVERSE would an agent bring case files home? That is such a staggering violation that I’m not sure why her father is even still in the FBI, let alone “in charge” of anything.

    In Hollywood universe. :D We see this almost all the time in films and TV drama series. I saw one yesterday, actually. A FBI agent has photos of suspects, murder victims and crime scenes across his walls while his non-FBI wife and two friends wanders in and out of his ‘make-shift work room’.

    And one of those friends is a news journalist. :D Thankfully, he’s dumb enough not to take advantage of this unbelievably golden opportunity as he’s more concerned about the FBI agent’s welfare: “You gotta stop torturing yourself with this. Think of Eve (wife). She’s hurting. And scared. (concerned pause) Hey, we still on for a morning run?” :D

  10. Jia
    May 04, 2012 @ 03:37:25

    @Karen D & @Renda: There’s not much sexual content at all. There’s kissing. One scene where they sleep together but there is no sex. There’s also references to date rape and sexual assault.

    @Marumae: I don’t know what it is about that summary that makes you think it’s paranormal but it’s really not.

  11. Karen D
    May 04, 2012 @ 12:30:05

    Thanks, Jia! Sounds like it will be okay.

  12. Marumae
    May 05, 2012 @ 21:52:00

    @Jia, honestly the whole bringing her back from the dead, I saw something with a similar idea in another book that was paranormal and I think that was where my brain jumped to when I read it. It could also be I’m slightly burned out on YA also (which I love, don’t get me wrong, but I need to branch out a bit I think), which I’ve been reading non stop for the past two years probably. Either way your review makes this sound intriguing as hell.

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