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REVIEW: The Principal’s Office by Jasmine Haynes

Dear Ms. Haynes:

I’ll confess that I had become disenchanted with your work. The grown up hookers with a heart of gold series followed by two dark and somewhat unromantic stories made me gun shy. But a free book of an author I’ve liked in the past? I can’t resist at least giving it a try and I am glad that I did.

The Principal's Office Jasmine HaynesRachel Delaney is a newly divorced single mom sharing custody of two teen boys with her ex husband. Before her divorce, she was a homemaker. Now she is working at a receptionist for a local company but her small salary doesn’t allow her for many extras even with her ex picking up the tab for the mortgage. Her eldest, Nathan, is playing Rachel against his father like a pro, starting to hang out with a bad crowd, and acting perpetually angry. Rachel would like something just for herself and while a lover would be nice, she’d settled for a vibrator.

Rand Torvik is a believer in the law of attraction or perhaps the universe reshaping things that were meant to be. He sees Rachel three random times – at a grocery store, outside a sex store where Rachel bought her vibrator, and in a local coffee shop – before approaching her with his interest. Rachel isn’t looking for a relationship but she wouldn’t mind calling on Rand for a little adult time. This suits Rand just fine.

In some ways, Rand and Rachel’s sexual interaction is much like a courtship. Even in this erotic book, their first encounter is relatively chaste, at least between the two. Rand’s neighbors are exhibitionists and Rand essentially sets up a first date atmosphere with wine on his upper balcony and a cinematic view of the neighbor’s hot tub antics. Every encounter that Rand and Rachel experience explore a few more fantasies from video taping themselves to participating in some exhibitionism themselves. Inevitably their physical connection brings them emotionally close. Rachel and Rand’s relationship is put on hold when she discovers that Rand is her son’s new principal, a man that her son hates.

As Rachel becomes more sexually adventurous with the encouragement of Rand, she gains confidence at work with the encouragement of a co worker. I felt that Rachel was blossoming into the person she could have been, not because she had a job and a lover, but because she began to identify herself as an individual and it was through those two vehicles that this came about. I enjoyed her recognizing that her skills as a mother translated into managing fractious co workers.

The one weakness in the story was Rand. The story could have been written in the first person because despite scenes from Rand’s point of view, he remained much of a mystery. He had little character movement and everything he did was exactly right. He knew exactly how to nudge Rachel into loosening her inhibitions, guessing exactly what would turn her on. He was able to turn her son around with exactly the right methods. I found him too good to be true and in many ways a flat character. I was also puzzled by his mantra that the laws of attraction bound his actions. The way he conducted his life didn’t seem as metaphysical as his philosophies would indicate.

The ex husband storyline was fairly predictable and while it was used to propel Rachel’s storyline and exhibit her newfound personal strength, I didn’t find the ex husband’s actions particularly believable which worked to lessen the tension that I believe it was supposed to present.

I did love the subtle sex positive, pro woman message in the story. A repeated mantra is that Rachel deserves to have it all. She deserves to be viewed as a good mother, an upstanding member of her community, and most of all, she deserves to have great sex. Rand is happy to stand by her side to make sure all of those things come to fruition, particularly the great sex part. It seems that full length erotic romances are a wasteland of late so The Principal’s Office, even at the trade paperback price, might be worth it. B-

Best regards,

Jane

  • The Principal’s Office by Jasmine Haynes * $0.99 * A | BN | K | S
  • Jane Litte is the founder of Dear Author, a lawyer, and a lover of pencil skirts. She spends her downtime reading romances and writing about them. Her TBR pile is much larger than the one shown in the picture and not as pretty. You can reach Jane by email at jane @ dearauthor dot com

    12 Comments

    1. JessP
      Feb 11, 2012 @ 12:27:40

      I’d have bought it at $0.99, but at $9.99 I’ll have to think about it. Thanks for the review, as always.

    2. Vanessa Jaye
      Feb 11, 2012 @ 12:44:52

      It’s showing $12.72 at Amazon for the kindle version, which is never going to happen with me. Too bad, because it does sound interesting.

    3. Renda
      Feb 11, 2012 @ 13:45:28

      ^^+1^^

    4. SonomaLass
      Feb 11, 2012 @ 18:56:24

      Sigh. I would have liked to read another Jasmine Haynes. But not at that price, sad to say.

    5. Carin
      Feb 11, 2012 @ 19:08:05

      I’m with the other commenters. $0.99 for sure. $9.99? Nope.

      I’m confused, too. When you said that you got it free, was that because it was a review copy? At first read, I thought it was a free book. I’m disappointed, because it sounds good, but is out of my price range.

    6. eggs
      Feb 11, 2012 @ 19:49:50

      Can’t buy it, geo locked, so i don’t even have the option of bitching about the price!

    7. Jane
      Feb 11, 2012 @ 20:15:04

      @Carin Sorry. Yes I received a review copy of the book.

    8. sasha
      Feb 11, 2012 @ 21:40:03

      I have to admit I was throw by the fact that Rand is a principal. In large part because there are usually “moral” clauses thrown into teaching/admin contracts that I would think would make sexual “exhibitionism” highly unlikely. If they were caught, he could easily lose his job. And be prevented from getting another one within the profession.

      I guess this might be a personal bugaboo – up there with a lawyer getting involved romantically with a client within book plots. Don’t think I could read a story with that set up. Too bad, because it does sound interesting if he wasn’t a school administrator.

    9. Allyson
      Feb 12, 2012 @ 03:29:24

      I’m confused. Was it .99 cents at some point?

    10. Jane
      Feb 12, 2012 @ 10:29:45

      @sasha: I wondered about that myself. He was cautious. I.e. the exhibitionism took place in Vegas but there was that video tape and I did wonder about whether it being public would have adversely affected him. He seemed unconcerned.

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    12. adrianna
      Dec 25, 2013 @ 17:46:49

      Is RAND for randy or randall or something else… I was sure it would be revealed at the end but am slightly disappointed! Fun read overall.

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