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REVIEW:  A Breath of Scandal: The Reckless Brides by Elizabeth Essex

REVIEW: A Breath of Scandal: The Reckless Brides by Elizabeth...

Dear Ms. Essex:

A Breath of Scandal is the second in your The Reckless Brides series. I didn’t especially like the first in the series, Almost a Scandal (I gave it a C+.) and I liked this one even less.

A Breath of Scandal opens with the funeral of Antigone Preston’s father. Antigone adored her mathematician father and is devastated at his sudden death. She’s even more devastated when her venal mother announces immediately after the service that Antigone is to be wed to a neighbor, Lord Aldrich, a man who is almost sixty and malevolent to boot.  Antigone is exceedingly unwilling to pledge her hand to Lord Aldrich–she doesn’t want to marry anyone let alone a man three times her age who is, in someway she can’t quite figure out, unsavory. Before she can refuse the match, her feckless mother begs her to go along with the idea for as long as it takes to find a titled, wealthy suitor for Antigone’s beautiful, but stammering, shy sister Cassandra. Antigone very reluctantly agrees.

 A Breath of Scandal: The Reckless Brides by Elizabeth EssexAntigone is, in general, bummed out. Her mother keeps insisting it’s Lord Aldrich or the poorhouse for the Preston women. Lord Aldrich is clearly more interested in breeding Antigone’s famed mare, Velocity, than he is in bedding Antigone. Her mother becomes more odious and less trust-worthy every day. So, what does Antigone do? She creates a scandal, of course, by punching out a grabby lord at a ball held by Lord Aldrich’s super snotty sister, Lady Barrington. Antigone’s behavior appalls everyone except for Captain William Jellicoe.  He thinks it’s excellent this tall, willowy woman has decked the lout Will watched palm her ass. And so, when he stumbles across Antigone–she’s hiding from Lord Aldrich, her mother, and all those who think her behavior was a scandal–in the Barrington’s private library, he’s charmed by her. The two drink cognac, share confidences, and agree to become “appalling acquaintances. ”

Their “appalling acquaintance” never becomes more than mildly interesting. That’s not to say Antigone doesn’t do appallingly risky things that require Will to rescue her. As I read A Breath of Scandal, I kept thinking no damn way would any young lady pull the crap Antigone does and not have it trash her life. She sneaks out of the house late at night dressed as a boy–this was a theme in the last book in the series where it worked marginally better–, goes drinking, plays cards, and generally risks her precious reputation repeatedly. I didn’t feel giddy as she acts out, I felt irritated with her. She seemed to me to be immature and stupidly reckless rather than daring and clever. It’s especially hard to fathom her behavior because her sister is indeed making a fabulous match (with Will’s titled older brother). That relationship is moving ahead at warp speeds so it’s clear that, soon, Antigone won’t have to make all her choices based on securing a safe haven for Cassandra.

Will, unlike me, adores Antigone’s risky behavior. He thinks she’s hot, interesting, and a great distraction from his professional woes. (He loves the Navy but, for much of the novel, England isn’t at war with Napoleon and so there’s no ship for him to captain.) Will’s bored and at loose ends; saving Antigone from herself gives him something to do. And, as Ms. Essex writes too many times  (in italics for emphasis), “Oh, he liked her.” I thought Will was alright–although he’s too much like the the hero of the first Reckless Brides book (I have read all of Ms. Essex’s books and the last three have had naval captain as the hero all of whom have very similar inner selves.)

The story here is so slight that it makes the book seem overly long and slow. It’s clear Antigone’s never going to marry Lord Aldrich–he’s an overly nasty piece of work–and I grew bored with all his threats and creepiness. Much of the plot centers around Antigone’s horse but that story isn’t written in a way that would engage any but the most dedicated equestrian. Cassandra achieves joy too easily and Antigone’s woes are too much of her own making. Neither of their love stories engaged me. Will’s family is picture perfect which seems unbelievable especially when compared to Antigone’s harpy of a mom. There is also a casual elitism to this book that, while common to many historicals, made those who are supposed to be heroic here less so.

When Ms. Essex first began writing, I was rapturous over her way with words. After I read this book, I went back and read her two of her earlier works. I still love the writing in those novels. But where her prose used to be hypnotic, now it’s affected. This scene is one of the many where Will has come out to again rescue Antigone.

Will Jeliicoe sat looking for all the world like a dashing Corinthian, his boots propped casually against the muddied dashboard of an elegant racing curricle pulled by a pair of lathered and spattered bays, and driven by an excited, pink-cheeked Thomas. Clearly, they had come at quite a clip.

“Devil take me,” Jellicoe drawled as if hadn’t come flying down upon her in the middle of a muddy, crowded street. “Miss Preston, if you haven’t the most remarkable affinity for trouble.”

“Me?” she shot back. I’m not the one driving like a mad Corinthian. What do you think you’re about?”

He tipped his hat cordially. “I’ve come to save you.”

“From what?”

“From my imagination.” He looked bemused, his brow furrowing even as his lopsided, self-deprecating smile galloped about his mouth, as if he had only just that moment realized what he was about.”

340 pages of this wore me out.

Lastly, the ending to this book is so rushed it’s a rude shock. The last chapter is all drama and putting Lord Aldridge in his proper place. There are guns, near death experiences, declarations of all kinds. Then, there’s one page, only half of which is covered with type. It’s the (dreaded) epilogue and is so brief I at first wondered if my ARC was missing text. I suspect some editor demanded a requisite HEA and Ms. Essex dashed one off. It’s not well done and it ends the book on an awkward, unsatisfying note.

I have found the both books in the Reckless Brides series slow going. The third comes out in July and features Will’s younger brother Thomas. I’ll probably give Ms. Essex one last shot, but if that book is like the first two, I’m giving up on Ms. Essex and will stick to rereading A Sense of Sin or The Danger of Desire when I want an Essex fix. I give A Breath of Scandal a C-.


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REVIEW:  Almost a Scandal by Elizabeth Essex

REVIEW: Almost a Scandal by Elizabeth Essex

For generations, the Kents have served proudly with the British Royal Navy. So when her younger brother refuses to report for duty, Sally Kent slips into a uniform and takes his place—at least until he comes to his senses. Boldly climbing aboard the Audacious, Sally is as able-bodied as any sailor there. But one man is making her feel tantalizingly aware of the full-bodied woman beneath her navy blues…

Dedicated to his ship, sworn to his duty—and distractingly gorgeous—Lieutenant David Colyear sees through Sally’s charade, and he’s furious. But he must admit she’s the best midshipman on board—and a woman who tempts him like no other. With his own secrets to hide and his career at stake, Col agrees to keep her on. But can the passion they hide survive the perils of a battle at sea? Soon, their love and devotion will be put to the test.

Dear Ms. Essex,

I’ve read and enjoyed your first three books: Georgian histories steeped in naval history. Your writing style is distinctive and seductive—you have a gift for dreamy description and passionately portrayed love scenes. I looked forward to losing myself in this book, Almost a Scandal, and was startled when, half-way through, I realized I wasn’t especially enchanted by your plot or your protagonists.

Almost a Scandal Elizabeth EssexIn Almost a Scandal, nineteen year old Sally Kent hates the dull land-locked life she has as a young, unmarried woman in Falmouth. All the men in her family—brothers, cousins, and her famous captain father—serve in the British Royal Navy under Admiral Nelson. The Kents, with the exception of the youngest son Richard, adore the sea and Sally is no exception. Thus, when Richard acts on his threat to run away from his sea-faring destiny—he wants to be a minister—and doesn’t show up to report for his assigned duty on His Majesty’s Ship Audacious, Sally dons his uniform and takes his place.

It wasn’t the first time Sally Kent had donned a worn, hand me-down uniform from one of her brothers’ sea chests, but it was the first time it had felt so completely, perfectly right. She had always been tall and spare, strong for a girl, but dressed in the uniform of His Majesty’s Royal Navy, she felt more than strong. She felt powerful.

(I had a hard time believing any woman could pull off such a deception. How would she pee, hide having periods, or constantly keep a bunch of randy sailors at bay? But, I did some research and it turns out there were several women who did indeed serve as men in Nelson’s Navy and managed to remain undetected for years. The most famous was a woman named Hannah Snell who served for over five years on the HMS Swallow from 1745-1750.)

At the dock in Portsmouth, Sally is picked up and rowed out to the Audacious by driven, darkly handsome First Lieutenant David St. Vincent Colyear. “Col” is no stranger to Sally. He’s a close friend of her older brothers and, the summer she was thirteen and he nineteen, he spent six weeks living with her family while he studied for his lieutenancy exams. Sally is panicked he’ll recognize her but he does not. She’s easily brought onboard and presented to Captain Hugh McAlden (the hero of your last book, The Danger of Desire, reviewed here by Janine) and the other men aboard the ship. Everyone accepts her as a young man—she’s pretending to be Richard’s age of fifteen—and Sally is elated to finally be a midshipman. She loves the work and is a gifted sailor—flying up the rigging, full of knowledge about the sea and ships, deftly offering leadership to her peers on ship.

But, from the moment Sally steps on board, Col is strongly drawn to, as he calls her, Kent. And when, soon after she joins the crew, he hears her singing an old ditty he’d heard her sing years ago, Col suddenly realizes Kent is Sally rather than Richard. He confronts her with the truth and she begs him to let her stay onboard. Astonishingly, he does. I say astonishingly because for him to do so requires him to both break the law and risk all he’s worked for. Why does he do this? In large part because he’s desired Sally since he met her—when she was thirteen (a little icky for me)—and he’s compelled now to keep her near him.

Their romance—for Sally desires Col as well—must be kept literally under wraps (Sally binds herself) in order to protect them both. The semi-villain of the piece, a bitter older midshipman named Gamage, senses the attraction between Col and Kent and threatens to have Col unmasked as one who “likes pretty soft boys.” This need for Kent and Col to hide their waxing want for one another makes for lots of lusting and not a lot of actual romance. Plus, there’s something off about the Kent/Sally persona. When they first kiss, finally alone on a dangerous mission in France, the way they refer to each other is flat-out odd.

It seemed the most natural thing in the world to kiss her again. To taste her again. To let his mouth drift down until her lips were there, beneath his. And she was soft and warm and yielding, and he kissed her slowly, breathing into her, filling her with his resolution.

“Mr. Colyear,” she whispered.

He laid his finger across her lips—plush and taut, and sweet, like ripe fruit. “Col,” he murmured, as he lowered his head to her lips. “For God’s sake, Kent, call me Col when I’m kissing you.”

Their love affair doesn’t have enough context—there’s next to no information about Col and his past other than how strongly he remembers the weeks he spent in Falmouth—nor did it spark for me. Their passion for one another, in the brief times it’s allowed free rein, bewildered me. They seemed more suited as friends than libidinous lovers.

Far more viable than the courtship between Col and Kent is the story of Nelson’s war against Napoleon. You have a degree in Nautical Archeology and your knowledge of ships and naval warfare prevails in this book. I found it interesting and, at the same time, distracting. Rather like the pairing of Col and Kent, the melding of so much fact with so little romance didn’t work for me.

I realize this has been a rather negative review. And I’ve meant every word. But….

Compared to much of what’s published today in historical romance, your work, even this book, shines. I didn’t love this book—and I had every expectation of doing so given how much I’ve liked your earlier books—but I didn’t hate it either. Your prose is gorgeous and your depth of knowledge compelling. The world of the Audacious is meticulously and engrossingly presented and your secondary characters are terrific. Almost a Scandal is a book I found hard to grade. I’ve read it twice and have decided, with reservation, to give it a C+.

I do look forward to your next book.