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REVIEW: Escape Velocity by Anah Crow and Dianne Fox

REVIEW: Escape Velocity by Anah Crow and Dianne Fox

Dear Ms. Crow and Fox.

I would not have finished this book if I had not been listening to it on audio book instead of reading it. In fact, I tried multiple times to read it when it was released from Torquere Press and couldn’t. Now revised for and re-released through Carina, it was also made into an audio book, which I’ve been listening to for a week. I’m glad I did finish it, and I’m still thinking about the characters, but I absolutely would not have finished it if I’d been reading instead of listening.

Escape Velocity Anah CrowWhy not? Well, in The Natural History of the Romance Novel Pamela Regis offers eight essential elements that make a romance narrative a romance narrative: 1. society defined as corrupt, 2. the meeting between the protagonists, 3. their attraction to each other, 4. the barrier that keeps them apart, 5. the point of ritual death at which it looks like the relationship is doomed (authors call this the Dark Moment), 6. the realization of how to overcome the barrier, 7. the declaration of their love for each other, and 8. the betrothal or at least commitment to each other at the end (that also reconstructs an uncorrupt society). Regis stresses that these can come in any order in the novel, but usually, they go in the order she and I list them here.

The reason I couldn’t finish this book when I read it (rather than listened) is that the order of this book is: 1. Society defined as corrupt, 2. the meeting, 3. their attraction to each other, 7. their declaration of love, 4. the barrier, 5. the point of ritual death (two of them, in fact), 6. the realization, and 8. the betrothal.

In other words, for the first half of the novel (almost exactly), it’s a nice gentle love story with no narrative tension whatsoever. They meet, fall in love, fuck like bunnies, admit they love each other. Everything’s great…and boring. Then BAM! barrier. And they then spend most of the second half apart because it’s THAT much of a barrier. And while the literary critic in me was intrigued, the reader was…wondering what the point was for half the book. But the listener had spent more than $12 on that damn book and wasn’t stopping for nothing. And I’m glad I stuck with it.

Okay, so plot summary. Elios is a linguist working on Luna (yes, the Moon has a colony–this is far distant future) for the Pandora Project, attempting to decipher the transmissions of a huge, apparently dead ship on the outskirts of…the solar system? Somewhere. Sender is a lead pilot and trainer on the Pandora Project, flying Harpies, the small ships designed as protective fighter ships that will protect the Pandora Project when they go out on their own huge ship to investigate the Pandora. They meet when Elios gets to fly in a two-seater Harpy as a treat for good work. They are attracted, have sex, fall in love, start entwining their lives. Everything seems wonderful. Then Sender gets a message that his parents have died and he’s now sole guardian of his four year old sister.

And here’s the barrier. Sender is from Themis, a free-standing space colony (I imagine something like the Death Star from Star Wars). Themis is overcrowded (only one kid allowed at a time, which is why Katy’s so much younger than Sender, because their parents could only have her after he leaves Themis) and it’s basically the polluted, dreary, overpopulated, soul-destroying factory production hub for the solar system. And the religion on Themis is all about obedience and discipline. Happiness only comes from obedience, not from being…well, happy. Nice way to keep the legions of workers in line, of course, but the religion also condemns homosexuality. So in a far future world, where marriage equality is taken for granted, Themis is a throwback. And Sender hates himself. And Sender’s parents, in their will, want him to raise Katy on Themis, giving up everything he’s worked for (flying, being free, being happy, being loved) for their religion. And…he agrees. He goes back to Luna for a month to get ready to go back to Themis, tells Elios, who assumes Sender’s breaking up with him and leaves him (point of ritual death #1). Then Sender crashes his Harpy, spending weeks in the hospital (point of ritual death #2), so Elios has to take care of Katy, and they find their way back to each other.

So, I couldn’t READ this book because the first half had no tension and the barrier in the second half seemed…anachronistic. Which is a funny thing to say for a book set so far in the future. I just found Sender a little exasperating in his commitment to a religion, a colony, and parents who hated what he was. And I know that was the point, but I personally am pretty sick of “I can’t be gay because my parents will hate me” story-lines in contemporary romances, let alone far-future-set ones.

But, all of that aside, the person narating this book (Charles Carr) did a brilliant job with it. He made sex sound hot (which HAS to be tough to do). He made Sender and Elios obviously different, infusing their words with their characters. I *loved* how he read Sender’s emotional moments. He totally kept me listening and the sweet moments of the story were strong enough to keep me enjoying it, even with all the problems.

Grade: C+

Best regards,
-Sarah F.

P.S. That cover is a million billion times better than the one from Torquere.


REVIEW: One Real Thing by Anah Crow and Dianne Fox

REVIEW: One Real Thing by Anah Crow and Dianne Fox

Dear Ms. Crow and Ms. Fox.

I’ve had a hard time writing this review. I made it a Recommended Read for January and it’s been a best-seller at Carina since it’s been out. But it’s such a subtle book, so simple and yet so complicated, I’ve been lost for what to say about it. This is a book that needs to be read at least twice, to see how subtly the motivations of both characters are layered (the academic in me wants to say imbricated, but that’s just pretentious) into the early chapters. I really liked this book, really enjoyed the characters, and was fascinated by their relationship. But I’ll be honest, the first time I read this, I read the whole thing wondering, “OMG, how are people going to take this?!”

Lemme ‘splain. No, is too long. Let me sum up.

Nick has the perfect life in New York. He’s a successful journalist, finishing up a story uncovering the manipulative adulteries of a female Senator’s husband. His wife and he muddle along well together, each focused on their own pursuits, but still a couple. The one fly in his ointment is that a friend of his, Rick, insists on sending him tabloid stories about their mutual college buddy, Hollister Welles. Holly’s life is imploding publicly and dramatically: broken engagement, drugs, descent into the depths of depravity. Eventually Nick can’t take it anymore and, after a particularly bad story with a picture of where Holly is staying, Nick flies to LA on no notice, lying to his editor and his wife, and drags Holly back, literally by the hair at one point, and forces Holly to put himself back together. He finds him an apartment, gives him rules — no alcohol, no drugs, no meaningless sex — and watches over Holly while he detoxes and figures life out.

I don’t want to give away why Holly was purposefully self-destructing, but it’s a good reason, if devastatingly sad. At first, he’s not quite sure himself, or he won’t let himself figure it out, so the reader discovers it as he does. Which is one of the reasons that the book really rewards multiple reads, because the reader can go back and find the hints that seemed to be throw-away lines. Holly is a lost soul who insists on losing himself more, but after Nick’s intervention, he figures things out, finds himself, and jumps into life with a fervor and a joy that’s wonderful. That’s just the first half of the book. And although Nick and Holly are intensely aware of each other physically, they are just best friends, just college buddies looking out for each other.

Except, of course, they’re not. Not emotionally.

Then Nick’s life crashes around him and he doesn’t know how to put it back together, just like Holly at the beginning of the book. And Holly does exactly the same thing for Nick that Nick did for Holly: gives him a safe space and the reason to figure things out. One of the things Nick realizes as he patches his life back together is that all he’s ever really wanted…is Holly. Part of Nick’s implosion is his marriage implodes too, so Nick and Holly are finally free to explore the until-now ignored sexual side of their relationship.

Two things are important here: I love how both Nick and Holly are bisexual. Neither of them really mention it. They never make an issue of it. It’s never discussed or politicized. It’s just there. It’s who they are and there’s no angst about it. They’re both bisexual and that’s that.

The second thing is that Nick and Holly’s relationship is what’s known in the BDSM world as TPE: total power exchange. Nick controls everything about Holly. Not just their sex, but what Holly can eat or drink, where he can go:

There was something about seeing Holly on his knees, about Holly kneeling for him, that warmed Nick from the inside out.

Holly leaned into the touch, closing his eyes. When he looked up, his expression was hopeful. “May I please have some coffee?”

Holly could’ve been asking to suck him off, the way Nick’s body reacted to the question. God, he didn’t even know-No, he hadn’t known. He’d thought his responses to Holly’s obedience were only because he’d wanted to make sure Holly was safe. But he’d been lying to himself. He could see that now. He wanted that all the time, wanted to hear Holly ask so sweetly for the simplest things. “Yes, you may.”

And again, in typical fashion for these two authors, it’s not a Big Deal. It’s how and who these characters are and how their relationship fits and works for them. Nick could not have saved Holly if Holly had not instinctively followed orders because of his submissiveness to Nick. Holly could not save Nick if it weren’t for Nick’s instinctive dominant response to Holly. It just works for them. But try explain to someone that Nick feeds Holly and tells him whether or not he can have coffee in the morning, without them having read how well it just works for both characters, and it just sounds wrong and borderline abusively controlling.

But it’s a wonderful demonstration of a BDSM relationship working because of who the partners are and how they respond to each other, not because one is Supah-Dupah Dominator Owner of Kinky Klub of Doom and the other one is poor misunderstood sub who yearns to find The One True Dominate. Nick is dominant because of Holly; Holly is submissive because of Nick. They fit beautifully and I adored their relationship. They ground each other:

Holly’s blue eyes were so wide and innocent and trusting and free of guile. This could have been something degrading or controlling, but it wasn’t, it was right, and everything about Holly said it was so.

So while I spent most of the book running around in my head crying “What will people think!?” I came out of it convinced that people would think that it’s a relationship that works, a love that makes both characters so much stronger together than apart. Despite its unconventional nature, isn’t that what love’s supposed to be about?

Niggles: the wife is a little too Evil Witch, a little too strident. At times the book is a little too spare, the timeline a little too chopped up. More details and more time with the characters having time with each other would have been good. We repeatedly see only one scene, maybe two, out of an entire week, and sometimes it’s not fully clear exactly how much time has passed and what the characters did with that important time. This makes the story confusing occasionally, which is never a good thing.

But the cover is wonderful. While Holly’s hair isn’t long enough, I don’t think, from what you say in the book, the pose and his eyes…innocence and “I dare you” and knowledge and pure sex. Just perfect. Well done, Carina.

And the final sex scene? …guh… Well done, Ms. Crow and Ms. Fox.

Grade: B

Best regards,

-Joan/Sarah F.

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