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About Jayne S

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Another long time reader who read romance novels in her teens, then took a long break before started back again about 15 years ago. She enjoys historical romance/fiction best, likes contemporaries, action- adventure and mysteries, will read suspense if there's no TSTL characters and is currently reading very few paranormals.

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REVIEW:  Perfect Pitch by Mindy Klasky

REVIEW: Perfect Pitch by Mindy Klasky

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Reigning beauty queen Samantha Winger is launching her pet project, a music program for kids. All she has to do is follow the pageant’s rules—no smoking, drinking, or “cavorting” in public.

That’s fine, until D.J. Thomas—God’s gift to baseball—throws her a wild pitch. He slams her in an interview, and the video goes viral. Sam’s no shrinking violet. She parlays D.J.’s apology into a national T.V. appearance—and a very unexpected, very public kiss.

Soon, paparazzi catch the couple in a steamy make-out session, and Sam’s music program is on the block. The blazing hot relationship is threatened even more when D.J.’s son begs to trade in Little League for music class.

Can Sam and D.J. sizzle past the sour notes and find their perfect pitch?

Dear Ms. Klasky,

After enjoying what is actually the second book in this series, “Catching Hell,” I knew I wanted to go back and start from the beginning. While there are some things I liked about “Perfect Pitch,” it wouldn’t have got me caught on these books had I read it first.

The relationship between DJ and Sam starts innocently enough with DJ making a thoughtless comment about the Summer Queen. What or who is the Summer Queen? A made up beauty contest set in North Carolina with Samantha Winger as the current title holder. Sam has dealt with ten months worth of the “morality” clauses expected of the reigning Queen – no public drinking, carousing, hooting or hollering. She manages to turn DJ’s public apology into an opportunity to publicize her passion which is helping re-establish music in NC’s public school system.

Sparks fly between DJ and Sam but after a steamy kiss photo taken by a local paparazzi hits the papers, Sam is on probation as far as pageant officials are concerned. She can deal with that now that a local businessman has offered to help get her Musicall program off the ground, though. It just so happens that the school chosen for the pilot is attended by DJ’s son Daniel and it’s then that Sam discovers the boy’s love of music and dislike of the life his father has planned for him – to follow in his footsteps as a major league pitcher just as DJ did with his father, Hall of Famer Dan Thomas.

While DJ is amazing at reading and understanding Sam’s interest in him, he’s incredibly obtuse about his son. And while Sam is determined to see students get the chance to learn to love music, she’s seemingly blind to how sneaking around with DJ could end up sinking Musicall almost before it even starts.

To be honest, this one is not as good as second novel. The shorter length worked there because focus is entirely on the two main characters while here there are distractions to the relationship between DJ and Sam. Yes, Daniel, DJ’s son, is a point of contention between Sam and DJ in terms of his future as either a ball player or a musician but time has to be spent with him and explaining him instead of spending it on Sam and DJ together. As well, Sam’s issues with the Summer Queen rules serve to take time away from the couple together.

There is also less baseball in this book. A little time is spent on the fabulousness of DJ’s no hitter game and the dreary reality of a long series of games on the road as well as how careful DJ must be with his pitching arm but it’s more background white noise instead of front and center to the book.

When the conflict over Daniel’s music v sports flares up, the already short term flash sexy relationship between Sam and DJ crumbles in a heartbeat only to be just as quickly resurrected with a simple “I’m sorry” and seemingly all is forgiven to be followed by more behavior that any romance reader can tell will lead to disaster.

When the Big Breakup occurs late in the story, Sam and DJ do finally yell their concerns and problems at each other. However, when the public reunion takes place – and yeah, I’ll give DJ props for making sure that Sam gets a public apology and proposal after the public way their relationship torpedoed her career – I’m blinking at how easy it all goes. Over a longer period of time, with more discussion I could believe this but as truncated as the action becomes, it was too much too soon along with too little baseball. C

~Jayne

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REVIEW:  Snow Falling on Bluegrass by Molly Harper

REVIEW: Snow Falling on Bluegrass by Molly Harper

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NOTE – this series is in e or audio only.

A love triangle of colleagues heats up the winter lodge where they get snowed in for a week.

Kentucky Tourism Commission employee and executive assistant extraordinaire Kelsey is known around the office for having everything under control. So it’s not surprising that she and her boss, Sadie, have everything planned to the second for the office winter retreat. But there are things even Kelsey can’t micromanage.

An unprecedented snowstorm smothers half of Kentucky and knocks out the power, closes the roads, and generally shuts down the state. Luckily, the lodge has working fireplaces and enough food to keep the staff from turning on each other like something out of The Shining. Kelsey wouldn’t mind being stuck inside if it wasn’t for the tension with her not-so-secret crush, Charlie, the office’s statistician. But handsome Ranger Luke, the lodge’s only employee on hand, is there to take Kelsey’s mind off her discomfort.

Even though this weekend is supposed to be a planning session for KTC, Kelsey can’t help her mind from wandering and finds herself conflicted over Luke and Charlie. Someone’s love will keep her warm, but whose will it be?

Dear Ms. Harper,

Somehow this one escaped my notice when it was released but as soon as I knew it was out, I was all over it. This is the third book in this series but the previous two are only briefly and succinctly recapped. Both h/h’s appear here but are included to show how their relationships are progressing rather than merely to hawk their book. I’ve been waiting for Kelsey’s book and you answered my need to know if she was finally going to get shot of her deadbeat, loser boyfriend and hook up with the hot, geeky guy at work.

Only technically things don’t happen “at work.” Asshole Boyfriend Darrell has already exited the scene leaving Kelsey with a fistful of unpaid bills he’s run up in her name even before the entire staff of Kelsey’s workplace leaves for their annual retreat – thank God my work place doesn’t have these Kumbaya/survival meetings from hell – just as Snowpocalypse hits the state. It seems that the characters of this series often need to be in enforced proximity with potential loved ones in order to work out their issues but this isolation is taking it to extremes.

As the story kicks off, I am loving Kels’ snark and humor. She makes me laugh with her worries that if zombies ever happened, she’d be attacked while in the shower thus becoming the only naked zombie with a loofah. When the lights go out and her coworkers begin to panic like barnyard fowl, she lightens the mood with conjectures on which of them would get eaten first if they run out of food.

But she has her focused moments of defending her boss Sadie against attacks from outside staffers sent to “monitor” them, getting the staff organized for Life without Electricity, and vowing to get to know her coworkers better. Kelsey’s genius is organization and we see her hard at work throughout the two week snowbound retreat.

As with the first two books, this is a paean to the great state of Kentucky – which I happen to love anyway so I don’t mind reading more about it – but haters or those uninterested in learning more about the Bluegrass Commonwealth beware.

What is the deal with Charlie? Since story is from Kelsey’s POV, his thoughts and motivations and intentions are hidden. When he finally tells Kelsey how he feels, it’s nice, it’s great, it’s wonderful for her but I did shake my head a little and wonder how two people could so totally miss their signals. For years.

Kelsey is definitely not an isolated heroine in that she has strong relationships with two of her female co-workers and 4 tech/nerd male neighbors. Even though she mentions some ditsy past moments, she’s also good and effective at her job thus avoiding one of my pet peeves – The Pratfall Heroine for Comic Effect.

The story is racing along and going well once Kelsey and Charlie get their signals clear only to suddenly bog down with a Big Mis. Then this gets cleared up and I’m left shaking off Plot Whiplash and wondering why those short few pages of misunderstanding were needed. Once the staffers are back in civilization, the other lingering issue on Kelsey’s life gets taken care of – thankfully in more or less legal fashion – and the HEA shines brightly as I power down my ereader. Without the Big Mis this one would have been a higher grade for me but with it, I’m afraid it dips to a B-

~Jayne

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