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		<title>By: Trish</title>
		<link>http://dearauthor.com/features/interviews/my-first-sale-by-carolyn-jewel/#comment-191760</link>
		<dc:creator>Trish</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 15 Feb 2009 21:09:19 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Carolyn, I am halfway into SCANDAL and am loving it.  I also adored LORD RUIN and THE SPARE.  Matter of fact, Olivia Willow remains one of my favorite romance heroines ever.  I&#039;m looking very much forward to INDISCREET.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Carolyn, I am halfway into SCANDAL and am loving it.  I also adored LORD RUIN and THE SPARE.  Matter of fact, Olivia Willow remains one of my favorite romance heroines ever.  I&#8217;m looking very much forward to INDISCREET.</p>
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		<title>By: SonomaLass</title>
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		<dc:creator>SonomaLass</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 14 Feb 2009 23:04:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Carolyn:  Yes, we are practically neighbors! I&#039;ll send you a message through your web site.  And I WILL get my copy of your book back!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Carolyn:  Yes, we are practically neighbors! I&#8217;ll send you a message through your web site.  And I WILL get my copy of your book back!</p>
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		<title>By: Jael</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jael</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 14 Feb 2009 03:36:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I just read Scandal this week and loved it!  I really enjoyed getting both sides of the story from Sophie and Banallt as it unfolded.  Thank you so much for writing such a beautiful story.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I just read Scandal this week and loved it!  I really enjoyed getting both sides of the story from Sophie and Banallt as it unfolded.  Thank you so much for writing such a beautiful story.</p>
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		<title>By: Sherrie Holmes</title>
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		<dc:creator>Sherrie Holmes</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 14 Feb 2009 02:40:49 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi, Carolyn! *waving*  I&#039;m one of your followers on Twitter. Thought I&#039;d do a little cross-pollinating and drop by to say hi.  Like you, I am a pantser, and I don&#039;t see that changing. The minute I am faced with character grids and plotting forms I rebel. Obviously you&#039;re doing right because you&#039;re selling and you have fans!  &#039;Atta girl!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi, Carolyn! *waving*  I&#8217;m one of your followers on Twitter. Thought I&#8217;d do a little cross-pollinating and drop by to say hi.  Like you, I am a pantser, and I don&#8217;t see that changing. The minute I am faced with character grids and plotting forms I rebel. Obviously you&#8217;re doing right because you&#8217;re selling and you have fans!  &#8216;Atta girl!</p>
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		<title>By: Carolyn Jewel</title>
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		<dc:creator>Carolyn Jewel</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 14 Feb 2009 02:36:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks everyone! I have to confess that I &lt;em&gt;LOVE&lt;/em&gt; the First Sale feature, too. It&#039;s always so inspiring. I look forward to reading it. It&#039;s a great way to start a Friday.

The Gratuitous Rejection Club. Snort. Finally I&#039;m member of a club! We should all get together for drinks. And wow, getting rejected from something you didn&#039;t even know you had applied/queried for.  That&#039;s just terrible!

The whole discovering myself as a writer is an on going process, but I can be such an analytical thinker that I analyze things to death. Ironically, it was my need to analyze that led me to the awareness about how I write. That and sheer stubbornness. I need a way to stop that from happening. Deadline panic is great for that. Not fun, but great. Pantsing (hmm, I think this sentence is headed someplace dangerous) is a completely valid way to write. So is plotting. I don&#039;t think it&#039;s possible to tell from Julia Quinn&#039;s wonderful books that she falls more on the plotting end of the scale anymore than you can read, say, Scandal, and tell I&#039;m a pantser. At least I don&#039;t think so. 

SonomaLass: I see your handle around and I always wonder if you live near me. I live in Petaluma and work in Sonoma. I hope you get your copy back, and thank you, very much for sharing that story. Tell your daughter I hope she enjoys it.

Gennita Low! squeee!!! Thank you.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks everyone! I have to confess that I <em>LOVE</em> the First Sale feature, too. It&#8217;s always so inspiring. I look forward to reading it. It&#8217;s a great way to start a Friday.</p>
<p>The Gratuitous Rejection Club. Snort. Finally I&#8217;m member of a club! We should all get together for drinks. And wow, getting rejected from something you didn&#8217;t even know you had applied/queried for.  That&#8217;s just terrible!</p>
<p>The whole discovering myself as a writer is an on going process, but I can be such an analytical thinker that I analyze things to death. Ironically, it was my need to analyze that led me to the awareness about how I write. That and sheer stubbornness. I need a way to stop that from happening. Deadline panic is great for that. Not fun, but great. Pantsing (hmm, I think this sentence is headed someplace dangerous) is a completely valid way to write. So is plotting. I don&#8217;t think it&#8217;s possible to tell from Julia Quinn&#8217;s wonderful books that she falls more on the plotting end of the scale anymore than you can read, say, Scandal, and tell I&#8217;m a pantser. At least I don&#8217;t think so. </p>
<p>SonomaLass: I see your handle around and I always wonder if you live near me. I live in Petaluma and work in Sonoma. I hope you get your copy back, and thank you, very much for sharing that story. Tell your daughter I hope she enjoys it.</p>
<p>Gennita Low! squeee!!! Thank you.</p>
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		<title>By: Gennita Low</title>
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		<dc:creator>Gennita Low</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 14 Feb 2009 00:27:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Carolyn,

I&#039;m another unrepentant pantser here ;-).  And I love your books, which are on my Keeper Shelf.  Can&#039;t wait to read your new one!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Carolyn,</p>
<p>I&#8217;m another unrepentant pantser here ;-).  And I love your books, which are on my Keeper Shelf.  Can&#8217;t wait to read your new one!</p>
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		<title>By: SonomaLass</title>
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		<dc:creator>SonomaLass</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 13 Feb 2009 19:29:32 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks, Carolyn, for sharing.  I really look forward to the First Sale story each week.

As an academic, I am trained to write beautiful boring crap.  This is why I read fiction but am never tempted to try my hand at writing it!  Hmm, maybe that&#039;s why you and Sherry Thomas are two of my favorite writers.  You have overcome what I cannot.

I was looking forward to reading &lt;em&gt;Scandal&lt;/em&gt; this weekend; it has been sitting tantalizingly atop my pile since I bought it a week ago,  waiting for me to finish the epic fantasy that was on seven-day loan from the library.  But last night (as I was in the last chapter of said epic), my almost-18 daughter came home from a date, plopped herself down on my bed, and idly picked up the top book on my pile.  Yours.  She paged through it a bit, stopped, read a bit, looked up and said, &quot;Wait, this heroine isn&#039;t perfect, young and beautiful?&quot;  I said that was one reason I was eager to read it, but I don&#039;t think she was listening.  She had flipped to the beginning of the book -- last time I saw it, it was going out the door in her greedy little hands.  So I&#039;m going to have to wait a couple more days to read it, but I think you have a new fan.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks, Carolyn, for sharing.  I really look forward to the First Sale story each week.</p>
<p>As an academic, I am trained to write beautiful boring crap.  This is why I read fiction but am never tempted to try my hand at writing it!  Hmm, maybe that&#8217;s why you and Sherry Thomas are two of my favorite writers.  You have overcome what I cannot.</p>
<p>I was looking forward to reading <em>Scandal</em> this weekend; it has been sitting tantalizingly atop my pile since I bought it a week ago,  waiting for me to finish the epic fantasy that was on seven-day loan from the library.  But last night (as I was in the last chapter of said epic), my almost-18 daughter came home from a date, plopped herself down on my bed, and idly picked up the top book on my pile.  Yours.  She paged through it a bit, stopped, read a bit, looked up and said, &#8220;Wait, this heroine isn&#8217;t perfect, young and beautiful?&#8221;  I said that was one reason I was eager to read it, but I don&#8217;t think she was listening.  She had flipped to the beginning of the book &#8212; last time I saw it, it was going out the door in her greedy little hands.  So I&#8217;m going to have to wait a couple more days to read it, but I think you have a new fan.</p>
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		<title>By: Janine</title>
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		<dc:creator>Janine</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 13 Feb 2009 18:22:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I just finished &lt;em&gt;Scandal&lt;/em&gt; and wow, what a book!  It kept me up until 3AM.

Thanks for sharing your first sale stories.  I always find them inspiring to read, and this one was no exception.

&lt;blockquote&gt;I discovered I am a seat of the pants writer and that anything much beyond bare bones planning is fatal to my process-&#039;I have the doorstops to prove it.&lt;/blockquote&gt;

However frustrating that must be, it is great to have that kind of self-knowledge.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I just finished <em>Scandal</em> and wow, what a book!  It kept me up until 3AM.</p>
<p>Thanks for sharing your first sale stories.  I always find them inspiring to read, and this one was no exception.</p>
<blockquote><p>I discovered I am a seat of the pants writer and that anything much beyond bare bones planning is fatal to my process-&#8217;I have the doorstops to prove it.</p></blockquote>
<p>However frustrating that must be, it is great to have that kind of self-knowledge.</p>
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		<title>By: Sunita</title>
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		<dc:creator>Sunita</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 13 Feb 2009 17:21:55 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>What a great story!  I *loved* The Spare, and Lord Ruin and Scandal are in my TBR.  I read The Spare years ago, and I can still remember how atmospheric it was.  So I&#039;m glad you&#039;re still writing beautiful prose!

And welcome to the Gratuitous Rejections club; when I was first applying for academic jobs, I was rejected by *two* different committees at a University That Will Not Be Named.  I had sent my file to one committee, which turned me down and apparently sent the file to another search.  Their staff were so efficient that I got &quot;no thank you&quot; letters from both searches.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>What a great story!  I *loved* The Spare, and Lord Ruin and Scandal are in my TBR.  I read The Spare years ago, and I can still remember how atmospheric it was.  So I&#8217;m glad you&#8217;re still writing beautiful prose!</p>
<p>And welcome to the Gratuitous Rejections club; when I was first applying for academic jobs, I was rejected by *two* different committees at a University That Will Not Be Named.  I had sent my file to one committee, which turned me down and apparently sent the file to another search.  Their staff were so efficient that I got &#8220;no thank you&#8221; letters from both searches.</p>
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		<title>By: Carolyn Jewel</title>
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		<dc:creator>Carolyn Jewel</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 13 Feb 2009 16:52:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for all the kind comments, everyone. 

Sherry Thomas, oh my gosh, the polished crap just never goes away does it? Dang, but this writing stuff is hard! 

MayaM: When I heard J.R. Ward considers herself more of a plotter now than a pantser, I gasped.  I think everyone&#039;s writing evolves, and from what I&#039;ve seen, every writer in the world is looking to be more efficient. Maybe sometime in the future I&#039;ll be a plotter, too. I just haven&#039;t figured out how to do it without killing the spark. Chill, though, because there are lots of pansters out here. The only thing you need to worry about (mostly) is what&#039;s working for you now. Well, and what&#039;s not working, because that&#039;s something that probably needs to change.

Kaley: Regarding the duke, I think he understood Sophie had issues with Banallt and so did her brother, and he was looking for a way to make peace between them so the political work would go smoothly. And since he had reason to admire Banallt, and in fact did, he wanted Sophie to understand this, too. There are many ways to read and interpret the duke&#039;s behavior, and I think yours is quite valid.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for all the kind comments, everyone. </p>
<p>Sherry Thomas, oh my gosh, the polished crap just never goes away does it? Dang, but this writing stuff is hard! </p>
<p>MayaM: When I heard J.R. Ward considers herself more of a plotter now than a pantser, I gasped.  I think everyone&#8217;s writing evolves, and from what I&#8217;ve seen, every writer in the world is looking to be more efficient. Maybe sometime in the future I&#8217;ll be a plotter, too. I just haven&#8217;t figured out how to do it without killing the spark. Chill, though, because there are lots of pansters out here. The only thing you need to worry about (mostly) is what&#8217;s working for you now. Well, and what&#8217;s not working, because that&#8217;s something that probably needs to change.</p>
<p>Kaley: Regarding the duke, I think he understood Sophie had issues with Banallt and so did her brother, and he was looking for a way to make peace between them so the political work would go smoothly. And since he had reason to admire Banallt, and in fact did, he wanted Sophie to understand this, too. There are many ways to read and interpret the duke&#8217;s behavior, and I think yours is quite valid.</p>
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		<title>By: Kaley</title>
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		<dc:creator>Kaley</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 13 Feb 2009 15:56:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hello, Carolyn.  I just finished &lt;em&gt;Scandal&lt;/em&gt; this week--my first book of yours, but I&#039;ll be searching out &lt;em&gt;The Spare&lt;/em&gt; soon.  There was something just so true and lovely about Sophie and Banallt, their individual characters, and in how they discovered each other.  And your dialogue--again, just true and lovely and subtle...

I wondered as I read if the Duke was trying to help out his friend Banallt, sort of pleading Banallt&#039;s case to Sophie or providing opportunities for them to be together.  Was I reading too deep, or was that part of his motivation?

Thanks for this story, and how you told it.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hello, Carolyn.  I just finished <em>Scandal</em> this week&#8211;my first book of yours, but I&#8217;ll be searching out <em>The Spare</em> soon.  There was something just so true and lovely about Sophie and Banallt, their individual characters, and in how they discovered each other.  And your dialogue&#8211;again, just true and lovely and subtle&#8230;</p>
<p>I wondered as I read if the Duke was trying to help out his friend Banallt, sort of pleading Banallt&#8217;s case to Sophie or providing opportunities for them to be together.  Was I reading too deep, or was that part of his motivation?</p>
<p>Thanks for this story, and how you told it.</p>
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		<title>By: Jill Sorenson</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jill Sorenson</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 13 Feb 2009 15:55:14 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;blockquote&gt;â€œI hated that query from Carolyn Jewel so much, I think I need to reject her again, just to make sure!â€ &lt;/blockquote&gt;

LOL!  Love your story.  I&#039;ve heard great things about Scandal.  Looking forward to reading it.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<blockquote><p>â€œI hated that query from Carolyn Jewel so much, I think I need to reject her again, just to make sure!â€ </p></blockquote>
<p>LOL!  Love your story.  I&#8217;ve heard great things about Scandal.  Looking forward to reading it.</p>
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		<title>By: Maya M.</title>
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		<dc:creator>Maya M.</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 13 Feb 2009 15:45:50 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>More power to the pantsers!  Yay!  From  listening to the stories of many repeatedly pubbed authors I had this impression that pantsers are on the slow extinction list - only half (or however many) start out that way before selling, and over time as they get better at what they do they transform more and more into plotters.  I don&#039;t feel  so threatened now.  And that two week thing would be very, very unobjectionable.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>More power to the pantsers!  Yay!  From  listening to the stories of many repeatedly pubbed authors I had this impression that pantsers are on the slow extinction list &#8211; only half (or however many) start out that way before selling, and over time as they get better at what they do they transform more and more into plotters.  I don&#8217;t feel  so threatened now.  And that two week thing would be very, very unobjectionable.</p>
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		<title>By: Sherry Thomas</title>
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		<dc:creator>Sherry Thomas</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 13 Feb 2009 15:42:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I know all about beautifully polished crap.  I specialize in it, until my editor kicks me and makes me write something readable instead.  :-)

Welcome to the club.</description>
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<p>Welcome to the club.</p>
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		<title>By: vanessa jaye</title>
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		<dc:creator>vanessa jaye</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 13 Feb 2009 14:34:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>What a great story, Carolyn! Thanks for sharing that. And might I add, thank goodness you didn&#039;t give up. Love your books. :D

Unabashed fan of yours,</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>What a great story, Carolyn! Thanks for sharing that. And might I add, thank goodness you didn&#8217;t give up. Love your books. :D</p>
<p>Unabashed fan of yours,</p>
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		<title>By: Leeann Burke</title>
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		<dc:creator>Leeann Burke</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 13 Feb 2009 13:48:10 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>What an inspiring story. I&#039;ll have to check your latest release on my next trip to the bookstore this weekend.

Jane, I just love starting my Friday mornings with your First sale stories.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>What an inspiring story. I&#39;ll have to check your latest release on my next trip to the bookstore this weekend.</p>
<p>Jane, I just love starting my Friday mornings with your First sale stories.</p>
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